Arshi FF: The Valiant Knight - Thread 8 - Completed - Note on Page 142 - Page 8

beautiful update loved it i have feeling khushi will cum to know bout her baby thruth soon that adi is father not asr poor girl cant connect to baby as if her heart know sumthing is not write asr meeting with his mother was really emotional

Superb
When will Khushi come to know about the truth

omg...how can u express soomany emotns just by writg...incredible...i must say one of the best writer i evr see in IF...:)))...u creatd such beautiful charectrs which shows how to live a life with wat u have...rathr than cryg on ur fate..:))
first of all for creatg...the great Arnav Singh Raizada...he know he'll have to live with a baby who will always remind him of that dreadful night...but only 4 his love,his khushi he's tryg to forget that truth...i think he already acceptd that baby...hats off 4 creatg such an amazg charectr...love him...:)...
i think khushi will get to knw abt the truth very soon...bit by bit she's suspectg things...n its surprisg 2 know she's not at all affectd with the baby...may be more than khushi..arnav will be attached with that baby...:)

Another HEART-RENDING updt

I cant believe deena stepped bk... Hw cud she... Her gd fr ntg father has ruined her life n stil she doesn't wanna stand up n fight.. nk s rt she is not fit fr d role... well not all are Mrs. Khushi Arnav singh Raizada.

Ms Posy is not wiiling to visit her doc... she s making up xcuses fr nt visiting doc...

Khushi n her mood swings poor arnav, he kept a count on her crying... oh khushi plz shw sum mercy on ur hubby poor lad... And no matter what he makes sure khushi craving's are satisfied...

Are we going to rava ladoo or stethescope? - seriously... oh khushi itz ASR u r dealing vth n u bng his wife he wud nt compromise on anything and definitely not vn u r pregnant.

He will never understand what it takes to be pregnant. She raised her eyebrows looking at the scorching sky, I never asked you anything but in next lifetime, make him woman and I the manly man. And he should get pregnant with my 10kids, actually no, double the count if you can. But You better fulfill this one request.

I wonder how do u cum up vth dese lines...

How about we triple it! He smirked - hilarious

Y khushi doesn't feel baby kicks... n arnav he s a proud father already... More than khushi itz arnav who is more attached to d baby...i wonder wt happens vn khushi wud knw d truth...

Hope arnav helps khushi to cum out of d the guilt khushi s facing

Fu*king 9th time! Arnav sprang up on his feet and next min he was by her side.Khushi it was a joke. J.O.K.E. There is no need to cry.

Mood swings ka asar hai arnav zara sambhal ke

Kanjoos🤣

Only Khushi Singh Raizada can deal with such kadoos hard nut called ASR.- dats universal truth

Loved dr modern romance...oh hw much I love these nahi chahiye scenes...hoped arnav wud kiss her

You were supposed to blush dammit!- she did blush arnav unknown to u☺️

Love d ways arnav transforms khushi frm sad 2 fiesty

Arnav's idea was fab... Im hoping khushi does giv dis a thought n take arnav's help

Loved d huggie scenes... found it adorable🤗

Arnav's confrontation abt him meeting hs mother n khushi standing strong fr arnav n saying js these seven words I am with you all the way... these small gestures in arhi's life are enough fr dr bond to grow stronger day by day

In 24^th updt khushi said to arnav Talk to me, make me part of it. - well today arnav once again proved khushi by making her a part of his past

Whatever might be the consequences itz shame on a women who let her child of one day throw into a garbage...vth no mistake of his/her...

Itz heart wrenching to see and listen to arnav vn he was speaking too his mother...

That belongs to me! - TAVEEZ ... what can I say this is the most important aspect of arhi's life which held them close to each other

I pity you from the bottom of my heart for losing someone like him, who could have brought the entire world to your feet, had you showered one blessing upon him. Just one would have made difference. Anyway I owe you a thanks...for this...she pointed to the taveez, Thank you Ma'm for leaving this with him, without which I dont think I would have made or met my life.

he crawled over and rested his head on her chest, with fresh pool of tears brimming in his eyes.

She wrapped her arm around his shoulder and held him close to her heart, in effort to relieve him of all the pain. - first step towards arhi's new beginning❤️

Why is s*x so important in a relation that they forget the consequences?Why do people act on something they cant live upto their decision. How could they leave a day child in trash Posy? How could they be so merciless? What right do they have to punish me? I fail to understand why am I being punished in every relation I wished? What is my mistake in all of it?

I cudnt take it arnav uttering dose sentences... how excruciating!!!!!!!!🥺

It never was and never will be your mistake! If anyone believes it or not, I always believed my man can never do a mistake.⭐️

Khushi is absolutely right ... Itz not his mistake...

N nani being arnav's mum dats bang on...

You will not find a better mother than her Black&White, trust me.👏

Deepu what more can v say about u n ur writings... u r one SPLENDID writer!!!!!!❤️

I cudnt stop myself frm adding ds song lyrics... I found it apt fr arnav fr d last huggie wala scene

Jise Zindagi Dhoondh Rahi Hai
Kya Ye Woh Makaam Mera Hai
Yahaan Chain Se Bas Ruk Jaoon
Kyun Dil Ye Mujhe Kehta Hai
Jazbaat Naye Se Mile Hain
Jaane Kya Asar Ye Hua Hai
Ek Aas Mili Phir Mujhko
Jo Qubool Kisi Ne Kiya Hai


Haan... Kisi Shaayar Ki Ghazal
Jo De Rooh Ko Sukoon Ke Pal
Koi Mujhko, Yun Mila Hai
Jaise Banjaare Ko Ghar
Naye Mausam Ki Seher
Ya Sard Mein Dopahar
Koi Mujhko, Yun Mila Hai
Jaise Banjaare Ko Ghar


Hmm... Mmm...
Aaa... Aaa...
Jaise Koi Kinara, Deta Ho Sahara
Mujhe Woh Mila Kisi Mod Par
Koi Raat Ka Tara, Karta Ho Ujala
Waise Hi Roshan Kare Woh Shehar


Dard Mere Wo Bhula Hi Gaya
Kuch Aisa Asar Hua
Jeena Mujhe Phir Se Woh Sikha Raha...


Hmm... Jaise Baarish Kar De Tarr
Ya Marham Dard Par
Koi Mujhko, Yun Mila Hai
Jaise Banjaare Ko Ghar
Naye Mausam Ki Seher
Ya Sard Mein Dopahar
Koi Mujhko, Yun Mila Hai
Jaise Banjaare Ko Ghar


Muskaata Yeh Chehra, Deta Hai Jo Pehra
Jaane Chhupata Kya Dil Ka Samandar
Auron Ko Toh Hardam, Saaya Deta Hai
Woh Dhoop Mein Hai Khada, Khud Magar
Chot Lagi Hai Usse Phir Kyun
Mehsoos Mujhe Ho Raha
Dil Tu Bata De Kya Hai Iraada Tera...


Hmm... Main Parinda Besabar
Tha Uda Jo Darbadar
Koi Mujhko, Yun Mila Hai
Jaise Banjaare Ko Ghar
Naye Mausam Ki Seher
Ya Sard Mein Dopahar
Koi Mujhko, Yun Mila Hai
Jaise Banjaare Ko Ghar, Jaise Banjaare Ko Ghar
Jaise Banjaare Ko Ghar, Jaise Banjaare Ko Ghar

Such a beautiful chapter... Brilliant

Fabulous Part Dear!!! Loved it...

congrats for the new thread !!!

such a beautiful update. Loved it. How could u write so beautifully.
Now i m gonna read ur previous works.

Originally posted by: diyadivya

Another HEART-RENDING updt

I cant believe deena stepped bk... Hw cud she... Her gd fr ntg father has ruined her life n stil she doesn't wanna stand up n fight.. nk s rt she is not fit fr d role... well not all are Mrs. Khushi Arnav singh Raizada.

Ms Posy is not wiiling to visit her doc... she s making up xcuses fr nt visiting doc...

Khushi n her mood swings poor arnav, he kept a count on her crying... oh khushi plz shw sum mercy on ur hubby poor lad... And no matter what he makes sure khushi craving's are satisfied...

Are we going to rava ladoo or stethescope? - seriously... oh khushi itz ASR u r dealing vth n u bng his wife he wud nt compromise on anything and definitely not vn u r pregnant.

He will never understand what it takes to be pregnant. She raised her eyebrows looking at the scorching sky, I never asked you anything but in next lifetime, make him woman and I the manly man. And he should get pregnant with my 10kids, actually no, double the count if you can. But You better fulfill this one request.

I wonder how do u cum up vth dese lines...

How about we triple it! He smirked - hilarious

Y khushi doesn't feel baby kicks... n arnav he s a proud father already... More than khushi itz arnav who is more attached to d baby...i wonder wt happens vn khushi wud knw d truth...

Hope arnav helps khushi to cum out of d the guilt khushi s facing

Fu*king 9th time! Arnav sprang up on his feet and next min he was by her side.Khushi it was a joke. J.O.K.E. There is no need to cry.

Mood swings ka asar hai arnav zara sambhal ke

Kanjoos🤣

Only Khushi Singh Raizada can deal with such kadoos hard nut called ASR.- dats universal truth

Loved dr modern romance...oh hw much I love these nahi chahiye scenes...hoped arnav wud kiss her

You were supposed to blush dammit!- she did blush arnav unknown to u☺️

Love d ways arnav transforms khushi frm sad 2 fiesty

Arnav's idea was fab... Im hoping khushi does giv dis a thought n take arnav's help

Loved d huggie scenes... found it adorable🤗

Arnav's confrontation abt him meeting hs mother n khushi standing strong fr arnav n saying js these seven words I am with you all the way... these small gestures in arhi's life are enough fr dr bond to grow stronger day by day

In 24^th updt khushi said to arnav Talk to me, make me part of it. - well today arnav once again proved khushi by making her a part of his past

Whatever might be the consequences itz shame on a women who let her child of one day throw into a garbage...vth no mistake of his/her...

Itz heart wrenching to see and listen to arnav vn he was speaking too his mother...

That belongs to me! - TAVEEZ ... what can I say this is the most important aspect of arhi's life which held them close to each other

I pity you from the bottom of my heart for losing someone like him, who could have brought the entire world to your feet, had you showered one blessing upon him. Just one would have made difference. Anyway I owe you a thanks...for this...she pointed to the taveez, Thank you Ma'm for leaving this with him, without which I dont think I would have made or met my life.

he crawled over and rested his head on her chest, with fresh pool of tears brimming in his eyes.

She wrapped her arm around his shoulder and held him close to her heart, in effort to relieve him of all the pain. - first step towards arhi's new beginning❤️

Why is s*x so important in a relation that they forget the consequences?Why do people act on something they cant live upto their decision. How could they leave a day child in trash Posy? How could they be so merciless? What right do they have to punish me? I fail to understand why am I being punished in every relation I wished? What is my mistake in all of it?

I cudnt take it arnav uttering dose sentences... how excruciating!!!!!!!!🥺

It never was and never will be your mistake! If anyone believes it or not, I always believed my man can never do a mistake.⭐️

Khushi is absolutely right ... Itz not his mistake...

N nani being arnav's mum dats bang on...

You will not find a better mother than her Black&White, trust me.👏

Deepu what more can v say about u n ur writings... u r one SPLENDID writer!!!!!!❤️

I cudnt stop myself frm adding ds song lyrics... I found it apt fr arnav fr d last huggie wala scene

Jise Zindagi Dhoondh Rahi Hai
Kya Ye Woh Makaam Mera Hai
Yahaan Chain Se Bas Ruk Jaoon
Kyun Dil Ye Mujhe Kehta Hai
Jazbaat Naye Se Mile Hain
Jaane Kya Asar Ye Hua Hai
Ek Aas Mili Phir Mujhko
Jo Qubool Kisi Ne Kiya Hai


Haan... Kisi Shaayar Ki Ghazal
Jo De Rooh Ko Sukoon Ke Pal
Koi Mujhko, Yun Mila Hai
Jaise Banjaare Ko Ghar
Naye Mausam Ki Seher
Ya Sard Mein Dopahar
Koi Mujhko, Yun Mila Hai
Jaise Banjaare Ko Ghar


Hmm... Mmm...
Aaa... Aaa...
Jaise Koi Kinara, Deta Ho Sahara
Mujhe Woh Mila Kisi Mod Par
Koi Raat Ka Tara, Karta Ho Ujala
Waise Hi Roshan Kare Woh Shehar


Dard Mere Wo Bhula Hi Gaya
Kuch Aisa Asar Hua
Jeena Mujhe Phir Se Woh Sikha Raha...


Hmm... Jaise Baarish Kar De Tarr
Ya Marham Dard Par
Koi Mujhko, Yun Mila Hai
Jaise Banjaare Ko Ghar
Naye Mausam Ki Seher
Ya Sard Mein Dopahar
Koi Mujhko, Yun Mila Hai
Jaise Banjaare Ko Ghar


Muskaata Yeh Chehra, Deta Hai Jo Pehra
Jaane Chhupata Kya Dil Ka Samandar
Auron Ko Toh Hardam, Saaya Deta Hai
Woh Dhoop Mein Hai Khada, Khud Magar
Chot Lagi Hai Usse Phir Kyun
Mehsoos Mujhe Ho Raha
Dil Tu Bata De Kya Hai Iraada Tera...


Hmm... Main Parinda Besabar
Tha Uda Jo Darbadar
Koi Mujhko, Yun Mila Hai
Jaise Banjaare Ko Ghar
Naye Mausam Ki Seher
Ya Sard Mein Dopahar
Koi Mujhko, Yun Mila Hai
Jaise Banjaare Ko Ghar, Jaise Banjaare Ko Ghar
Jaise Banjaare Ko Ghar, Jaise Banjaare Ko Ghar

Originally posted by: lalarukh

awesome update...once again very emotional one...beautifully written ...fun,laughter ...cute moments...shattering moments ...arnav's pain and khushi 's shoulder...over all reality check...

bin teray koi aas bhee nah rahi...

itna terdpay k pyas bhee nah rahi...although the song is for lovers...but

mujhay arnav and his so called mother k leay lag raha hay...:(...poor soul

first of all the leap has shown beautifully :)...its amazing ,its fantastic the way u have shown time passing ...both coming together so much in ease ...all beacause i have found that they have developed with time the strongest bond between of comfort that can only be offer by word.

loved her mood swings...and his count of number of time she crying...sometimes on ladoo and some time if brown heel missing ...lol...such a cute moments between the two :)...again will say they have come along long way together :)...the ladoo or stethescope and his reply stethescope

...hehehe...hilarious :)...understanding each other silence too they moving in life...saath saath...although he is busy and she understanding his work load...still he manages to take time out for her...taking her to doc ...its beautiful...

loved it the way u have written ultrasound scene...khushi being all confuse ...unable to connect herself with baby...its very natural ...her instincts r damn strong...she is missing the link...thats very real too...take ur time khushi .. as i know being mother is great ...but right now seeing her absent minded ness towards the baby...she needs to be easy on herself first...i so wanted to comfy her...poor girl unable to give words to her feelings right now...its wow to be mother...but sometime if u need time to adjust its wow also to first think of one own self too..

i loved the way this man ...khushi's man is connected with baby just after hearing the beats of heart ...

the way he enjoyed the kicks...o dear...its wow moment seeing his excitment ...wt a gem he is ...his every action shows...the cap of daddy to be ...he deserves :)

hyeee ladoo part ...chahiay nahi chahiay...jo mujhay chahiay woh tumhain chaiay...oyeee hoay wow...loved it...loved his teasing to bring her mood back ...samnay hay sugar...lol...that kitchen scene was aweee so sweet...almost missed kiss..hehehehe...loved the whole scene alot...

not to forgot...nani bua payal all sweet enough ...all back in this small world of their...with giggles...its awesome :)

loved the way arnav is trying to help her out for the women she rescued...and again its all due to their friendship...khushi not aggressive or something...she willing to take his help after lil chit chat...thats very nice step...hmm that putting her n bed...checking temperature...covering her properly in bed...and forehead kiss...and then late night again coming and sleeping to help her in sleep...aweee dear...deeps u r awesome in bringing out such caring moments...i can see arnav love at some other level for her now..

khushi also understanding his every pain.. just seeing his gesture ...she knew some problem is there...and the way she was ready to be him...after knowing arnav going to his mother...that was amazing ...khushi wow girl...her hug...her cheek kiss...sticking with his arm...to give him support...that was all brilliantly written deeps...

uff arnav at his mother place...that whole scene is heart breaking...very painful...wt ever the reasons were...his parents did crime...poor arnav suffered hell of pain...his suffering seems never ending ...:(

as khushi told his mother...that she is at lost ...really she missed a gem of a person ...

arnav anger..his aggression all justified...even his punishment towards that lady..

i loved the way u have bring up arnav mom track ...so perfect timing...finally the distance came to zero...the two rooms seems to be one ...the shoulder which he needed badly...walked to him khudh say :)...i mean khushi...how can a person give u all the strength but still they ur only weakness.. its amazing both r each other strength ...both r each other weakness too..

These are the best lines I loved most in this feedback - truly awesome

khushi being true mrs asr..finally joined the dots that its arnav who helping her in sleep...the seed of separation...which she got it now after lsitening his talks with mother...khushi ready to take that first step towards his bedroom...and she did it...the comfort and support which he required she gave him that all ...right there being in his bed...in each other arms...saying like we cannot control the wind...but we can direct the sail

i loved the way khushi bring peace comfort to him...cuddling him ...kissing away his tears..true nani the real sweet mom for him ...khushi being there...in true sense for him :)...its amazing bond between the two...which is not there in just one night...deeps u have put loads of work behind to create the characters at this level that they ready to wash a way each other pains and mysery ...its backend ur hard work,honestly...his kiss on her wrist in the end...so beautiful...loved the maha update to the core :)