Swaron OS: The Actress

Nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Hat was beautifully written :)

I loved how you portrayed Sharon's thoughts and feelings

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Fatima

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

It was painful and heart wrenching. Loved every part of it.

Sharon was indeed perfect as she had learned to bear with pain and separation. Loved it the core.

Keep writing more :)

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Gunika Mehta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Luvd d concept.
D ending ws painful yet heart warming.
Awesome os.😊

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Sanskriti, girl do you even realize with what kinda beauty you mold the situation and describe it as though rolling a movie onto the screen. As of now this is the only thing that I can think of while reading and reviewing this.

Theres a different charm of your write ups.

I loved the transition. I can actually relate the saying, 'Love makes you learn a lot of things mostly everything.'

And thats what happened here. She now has learnt to mask her emotions no matter what.

This one is simple yet so heart-touching.

Make the pen flow and pour your heart out, every damn time. Because you write beautifully.

P.S: Sorry for the delay, I had a terrible schedule.

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Yogini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

its unique ... its different ... 😃

love happens at a hopeless place... ❤️

sharon falls for swayam in just a short time... 😊

& he declined it for her career... i knew something was wrong... 😭

i think he was already injured by then.. otherwise he won't have called her as his fiancee... 😳

that was deep... now she could actually understand those refugee's pain... 😔

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sumana.shesha

@sumana.shesha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Heart touching OS :)

Amazingly written :)

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darshita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

i had become emotional while reading... amazing and brilliant os... loved it

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Piyu

@piyu_swaron

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

it was quite different..

emotional nd heart touching..

Amazing story sanskriti and wonderfully penned..

i'm reading ur work 1st time.. would like to read more from u..

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pratik vyas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Hey sans

amazing adaptation...I loved everybit of the story you told there...it was superb I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and I felt all the emotions you wanted to convey in this story...you are a beautiful writer...I can vouch for almost all the good things people have said for this story...

You are really going on the top and I can bet people will call you one of the best they have read on SWARON...you are magnificent and a writing marvel...

Thank you for writing such wonderful story dear...

Pratik

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@Incorrect

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Posted: 11 years ago

#40

hey really a good os... very emotional and heart touching..

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