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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

this is really emotional dear...
swayam referred her as his fiancee...
amazing...

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farryy...

@farryy...

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Amazingly written...

It was so painful to read that swayam dies..

Loved the part that swayam refers to sharon as his fiance...

Loved the os

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JensenVruShan

@JensenVruShan

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Awesome OS

emotional and heart touching

Swayam's sacrifice and Sharon's pain were beautifully penned

Loved that Swayam referred to Sharon as his fiance in his last letter

Thanks for the heads up

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meenal singh

@swaron_arshi_07

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

an unique and an amazing concept

it was nice 😊

well penned

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zk456789

@zk456789

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Different from other stories but very nice
thanks for the pm

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srinidhi94

@srinidhi94

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

it is a very nice os...

loved reading it...

thanks for the pm...

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-.QTPie.-

@-.QTPie.-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

This story was awesome
This was soo emotional!
Seriously di I just love ur works
Thanxs for the scrap :D
I loved it <3

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Pooja

@Cupcake.

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Amazing OS

Emotional and heart touching

Loved It

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

res

unres

Amazing story sans and wonderfully penned..

loved the way you described the whole plot.

swayam addressing sharon as his fiancee was heart touching.

lovely OS.

thanks for the PM

Edited by Nishi.Kss - 11 years ago

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

it was an emotional chapter sans

firstly i loved how you projected swayam n sharon's character

swayam's rejection n then referring sharon as his fiance

was heart-touching

the idea of showing swayam's departure n his love for sharon

thru a letter was fantastic

it gave an impact of a wound tat will never heal

n sharon's character was beautifully penned

she was strong n yet so much in love

the last line of the story

complimented on her so well

as a writer you definitely hav grown in writing mature subjects

expecting sum lovely works from you in future 🤗

Edited by rosyrkohli - 11 years ago

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