Arshi FF: Hopes and Ambitions. Thread 3

First Previous

Page

107

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#851

superb update

loved it

thanks for the pm

Quote

mamidis

@mamidis

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#852

Khushi is too strong... Arnavpoor him... loved this update

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

cosmina

@cosmina

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#853

why on earth do you think to stop writing?!!! i really don't know what posts upset you,but we are so many with the same many points of view,maybe some of us write their impressions at first sight,after they read with heart ,full of emotions. i imagine is a hard work ,including pieces of your heart,to write such an amazing story,but,please don't deprive us from that gift.i am sorry for whatever upset you and i hope you will continue!

About this part,i LOOOVE this fighter Kushi(Lady Mike Tyson😊),i love her way to wake up her husband,after she, use him like a punching bag,with those appreciations about his love life-Lexie.He deserve that,he is almost double at her age ,and till now he didn't find such an opponent.i wonder if they ,sometime,will be political adversaries,how the match will be? and like she find out those sketches and realize what is in her husband heart.those pictures was the incentive and the confidence she needed to stay together in this marriage. although her harsh,but truth words ,are difficult to express even by her,he needed this cold shower.and i like the last line too,it was time someone to spell it for him,what he would have lost

p.s. i guess we come back to separate bedrooms now?

p.p.s. please give Aman &Anjali a little piece of happiness

Edited by cosmina - 11 years ago

Quote

Jay

@jduke

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#854

"You Gotta Get Up and Try"- Title of the chapter itself is very motivating. I just love this brave and fighter Kushi. She understood Arnav so well in past seven months and has developed so much faith in him. Her sketches in Arnav's book melted her heart and increased her resolve to work on this marriage to bring Arnav out of misguided guilt and misery.

I loved the way Arnav reiterated what is Kushi's role and importance in the family to his mom. Waiting for him to realize her importance in his life and future. Also liked the Conversation between Aman & Arnav and how Aman tried to explain things to him that Arnav is no way responsible for Lexie's demise.

Kushi is just bang on and expressed her love and resolve to bring him back. Just loved the way she said all the raw and bitter truth and gave the ultimatum to Arnav. Kushi always tried to maintain proper communication with Arnav and I think that is where Arnav has to start working on for happy future.

Coming to Note I don't know who wrote what but I just love this story and your writing. I recommended this story to my friends and even they fell in love with it. Please do continue.

Quote

kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#855

Shweta...hello 😊

I am seriously hoping that you are doing much better now. It's unforgiving if the writer who has all her readers so gripped in her tale thinks that she has failed to deliver as a writer. 😕

Yes i did belong to the club that was upset with arnav and maybe i did unleash on Arnav a bit. 🤔

But It was definitely not our intention to bash him or to offend you in any way.

In everybody's defence all i can say is that only a fantastic writer could have got so many people to discuss the life situation of 2 fictional characters as if they were our best friends.

So hope we are all good now. 😳

Moving on to the update...its going to take some time for Arnav to get over this phase. His sense of responsibility will stop him always in taking that one step towards khushi.

All i can say at this point of time for khushi is that...you my dear girl are amazingly lady. Khushi's never say die spirit is going to be her anchor during this painful traumatic phase.

Khushi's exuberant and cheerful personality in the past has been successful in breaking down arnav's stoic personality so one lives in hope that 'Achhe din ab door nahin'! Bas thoda intezaar.

And as a wise lady once told all of us 'Intezaar ka phal meetha hota hain'!😳

Quote

arshisimple

@arshisimple

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#856

Hi Shweta,

Read your note first and I was surprised that you felt this way. I am not sure which posts upset you but I am sure nobody wants to offend you or your writing style. You are unbelievably good at writing and this is one brilliant piece of work, so please do not get disheartened, please do continue the story. So far I have realized that whenever readers like me get involved in story so much that they might get little harsh on characters regardless of their position. I believe that people got carried away the way arnav behaved with khushi before leaving for London. And I think, they love both Arnav and Khushi so much and though you have mentioned about bumpy ride in future updates, the all sympathy went to khushi. This is my personal opinion and I am sure the support you are getting right now is encouraging. I am glad that you have shared your true feelings with us.

Regarding the update, well khushi just rocks 😊. At the young age, she has gone through a lot but the strength and the fighting spirit she has , just commendable 👏. The way you have described Khushi's thought throughout the time, it was just awesome. Khushi has given true meaning of love to arnav. I am so eagerly waiting to see Arnav's reaction to this. Brilliant update as usual Shweta👏

Quote

ranjanatripathi

@ranjanatripathi

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#857

AMAZING UPDATE after a long wait!!!!!!!!!!!!
hats off to you for portraying Khushi the way you did in this update!!!!!!!!!!!

Quote

AsA333

@AsA333

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#858

Bravo!!!👏

Just amazing... You are a very very very talented writer... Love this story... Just read it all at one go and now I cant wait for the next chapters... Keep up the great work...

One of the BEST FFs I have ever read on IF...

Quote

-Aurora-

@-Aurora-

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#859

Hey there.
The post was amazingly woven. Applause.
Coming to the story-line, Arnav and Lexie, made a cute pair, but then as Khushi said, there is just so much you can give without taking. With Lexie's death, hell broke loose on Arnav. It was supposed to be so because he finds himself as the culprit behind it. Right from the time Arnav was introduced in the story, I had this inkling that only being called home for standing up for his family might not be the only reason for his cold demeanor. Now I know why and some last posts have made me understand it better.
Arnav and Khushi's relationship has come to a standstill with Arnav being away from home and Khushi dangling in the past of Arnav and her feelings for him.
I can truly undetstand now, what Arnav meant when he said, he couldn't love. He actually was afraid, afraid of loving and being loved. He, though still not known to him, has started loving Khushi, long time back. He doesn't know it yet, but he feels deeply for that girl he has been trying to imitate on the canvas, her every posture, her every expression, savouring her to the fullest, because deep down he thinks he ain't capable of loving and Khushi is the epitome of love and affection and thus, they can't be together. So, since then, he tries of capturing her in the paper, for the times when she would be gone, according to him. Doing so much for a girl he thinks he doesnt love, I can't imagine to what lengths he would go when he acknowledges the love he feels for her.
Coming to his now state, he is wallowing in self - pity, which he shouldn't because that's no fault of his but as Lexie said - That's Arnav for you and he feels responsibility towards her, thus such a self-loathing reaction.
Someone just needs to shake his head and tell him that it's okay to love a little and live a little.
And my my! Khushi has done exactly that. The outburst was supposed to happen, sooner the better. With all the taunts from Maasahib and after learning about Arnav's past, Khushi feels more for the man he is and she wants to help him,sigh, but only if he lets her. What was an ice on the cake was Arnav's nonchalance and ignorance; it was the undoing of Khushi' emotions. Afterall, there is just so much a girl of 21 can take.
Khushi's confession was flawless, perfect to the T and I would love to see the-then-cat-turned-into-a-tigress handle the-then-lion-turned-into-a-rabbit.