Arshi FF: Hopes and Ambitions. Thread 3

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canapoem

@canapoem

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Posted: 11 years ago

#841

Shwetha, thanks for the awesome update.

Poor Arnav, he is feeling so guilty regarding Lexie's life and death, I feel sorry for him. Aman is right, Arnav should stop feeling guilty, Lexie chose her way of life and she lived it. Lexie was an adult and surely knew what she was getting into, how much could Arnav have influenced her? People only reap what they sow and Lexie got what she chose.

If only a handful of people attended her funeral, it only shows that the recipients of her free love never really cared for her love and were only taking advantage of her vulnerability.

Khushi is such a strong character here, one cannot stop admiring her. For someone who is only 21-22, she is very matured in her behaviour and thinking and I think ultimately its her inner strength which will pull Arnav out of the abyss he is in.

And I really hope that Arnav would understand that Khushi is not Lexie.

Regarding the note, if some comments have offended you then I request you to overlook them. Your story is awesome and for many of the readers like me, we have got emotionally attached to your story and their characters, so kindly do continue to write this story and not stop in the middle.

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sman

@sman

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Posted: 11 years ago

#842

Originally posted by: canapoem
Shwetha, thanks for the awesome update.
Poor Arnav, he is feeling so guilty regarding Lexie's life and death, I feel sorry for him. Aman is right, Arnav should stop feeling guilty, Lexie chose her way of life and she lived it. Lexie was an adult and surely knew what she was getting into, how much could Arnav have influenced her? People only reap what they sow and Lexie got what she chose.

If only a handful of people attended her funeral, it only shows that the recipients of her free love never really cared for her love and were only taking advantage of her vulnerability.

Khushi is such a strong character here, one cannot stop admiring her. For someone who is only 21-22, she is very matured in her behaviour and thinking and I think ultimately its her inner strength which will pull Arnav out of the abyss he is in.
And I really hope that Arnav would understand that Khushi is not Lexie.

Regarding the note, if some comments have offended you then I request you to overlook them. Your story is awesome and for many of the readers like me, we have got emotionally attached to your story and their characters, so kindly do continue to write this story and not stop in the middle.

My opinion is same :)

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#843

Buddy! For the note!! I'm wondering why in the first place? There was no need for the explanation!! Your story is written in such a way that its self-explanatory!! I simply love the way you take it all real and in the right way without a rush!!

Now to the update! Wonderful man!! Khushi rocks! She's bold she's beautiful!! By bold I mean she voiced out her fears issues thoughts and her love to the stone! And the stone was moved! That's all that's needed!

I'm not talking about his ex Gf she doesn't deserve this much footage and all :P

Its just that I want to see different things and your updates gives just that!

Cheers

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Mayvs2013

@Mayvs2013

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Posted: 11 years ago

#844

liked Kushi's way of handling... even your note was really good to understand each charachter from writer point of view :)

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taj2012

@taj2012

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#845

Great Update. Love Khushi's character in this FF. Arnav needs to overcome his misplaced guilt and realize what a gem of a wife he has got.

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

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+ 13

Posted: 11 years ago

#846

I again applaud your brave Khushi!

Good that she's not going to let him withdraw into a shell.

Liked how she had the guts to express her love for him.

I sincerely hope you don't stop with your long long chapters.

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thumbi

@thumbi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#847

I thought Khushi's courage just shone through in this... She is someone who has walked through the fire and survived... She had a clear idea of how to proceed with the relationship while Arnav is still down in the dumps and not thinking objectively (Can he? I don't think so...Losing someone you love is not a time to think objectively).. I am glad Khushi did not force him to come out of his reticence like Aman was doing, but had the levelheadedness to clearly talk out her points and how though she's willing to give him time, she is not going anywhere and just have peace with it...

Hope you are feeling better after the rant in the note...😉... and I hope I am not one of those who offended you... 😊... I guess Arnav's emotions are easy to be mistaken... His sense of responsibility is what you wanted to be portrayed and that has been really clear in the chapters till now - how he came back for his brother and family leaving a great free life behind abroad, stepping in to marry Khushi, clearly stating his intentions and expectations from the marriage, stepping up for his SIL from his abusive brother, being a good brother to Anjali by trying to defend her against being married young...

Now the side of Arnav we haven't seen so far is that of a lover... It is still vague, since the story was told by Aman... What was Arnav feeling all the time he was (or thought he was - like Khushi is insinuating) in love? Was he really in love with Lexie or did he just stick by her as a responsibility? Will he be able to let go and love again? Take chances with Khushi? Not berate himself about Lexie's condition? Truly believe what Aman's is trying to get him to believe?...In the end, I feel he's staying away from Khushi only because he's a little scared to take a chance again in love with the ultimate question - Will he have faith in himself to know that he's not a destroyer and he will not destroy Khushi?...

Will wait for everything to reveal itself... :)

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Jignasha

@Chokri_ASR

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#848

First of all take a bow my dear...that was the best update so far!!! 👏

The way you captured every emotion from Arnav and Khushi was superb. And Khushi...YOU GO GIRL!!! Fighting for what you want and believing in...it's not easy and seeing Khushi ready to take that up is commendable. 👏

I was so touched by what she said to Arnav, agree there is no comparison between her and Lexis. Khushi loves him and is ready to fight for him. For someone so young, I am truly in awe of her maturity and how she handles everything that is thrown at her. It's time for Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada to see that, I know he has but now it's time for him to stop running from it. He needs to share his pain with Khushi because she will help him heal and show him with true love is.

Shewta...I sincerely request you not stop with this story, this is one story that needs to be completed. It would be heart breaking to see this left mid way. You are an amazing writer, my dear and I hope you see this through!!!