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pixiegirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#861

Gotta question...

Khushi said, "Till such time, we will have to put our 'normal marriage' on hold."

What did she mean by that?? As far as I could tell, their "normal" marriage was on hold anyways, so why declare it that way now?? Am I missing something?? 😕

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ArhiMaria

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Posted: 11 years ago

#862

Hi shweta,

I just wanted to tell you that when people get emotional and bash characters they don't mean to offend you in anyway. I am so surprised to see your note, alot of other writers take it as a compliment that they could evoke such strong emotions from people. Everyone perceives things differently based on their environment and life experiences, they all can't feel the same way about a certain character's actions, at the end of the day it is only their opinion so if they question a character's actions they are not questioning your ability as a writer, they are simply showing their emotions and reactions for the complex characters, they are not demanding you to change anything about them.

Sorry if you feel so offended but please don't take the attack on characters as an attack on you, it is only natural for people to react the way they do.

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1chilly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#863

Originally posted by: pixiegirl
Gotta question...

Khushi said, "Till such time, we will have to put our 'normal marriage' on hold."

What did she mean by that?? As far as I could tell, their "normal" marriage was on hold anyways, so why declare it that way now?? Am I missing something?? 😕

Maybe she wants to put aside their physical relationship for some time!

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Tithi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#864

Yes I am totally agree with Khushi.

Arnav is not a selfish person. He tried his best to make everything alright, for his family, his girlfriend, his friend and his state.

The way he dealt with Payal issue, was the biggest example of it.

Laxie !!! Don't know what would i say about her.

After reading the last chapter, my respect for Khushi gonna increase.

Waiting for more...

Thanks for PM.

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neha2013g

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Posted: 11 years ago

#865

awesome update.. loved khushi 😊

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momoahmd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#866

hats off to ur khushi...

another brilliant update dear...

eagerly waiting to know arnav's reaction...

plxxx continue soon...

n regarding ur note, plxxx don't feel bad...

its ur amazinggg writing and interesting plot that elicit such kind of different responses from the readers...

u r a wonderful writer...😊

keep rocking...

thnxxx a lot 4 pm...

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divya_divs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#867

That was an outstandng update 👏👏👏 khushi is really a fighter and I look forward to her win 😛 thnks fr the pm 😊 if possible, please give us a big bonus update 😃

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pixiegirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: 1chilly

Maybe she wants to put aside their physical relationship for some time!

Wohi toh, isn't that on hold already?

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Sj236

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Posted: 11 years ago

#869

hi,
i am an avid reader of ur story and to say d truth u r writing it in a realistic manner and dats how a story should be. Infact its d writer's choice how one wishes to write and u positive criticism is allowed but bashing of characters isn't, if d readers dont like sumthing dey can xplain it nicely instead of throwing brickbats on d characters. According to me u dint fail as a writer , u wrote wat u wanted to convey and u did dat beautifully, if der r 20 who dont like d plot den der r 100 who wait for ur updates. U cant make evryone happy and if we try dat we r unhappy with d end result.
Also Arnav's past was beautifully portrayed, though i couldnt understand lexie's character in d start later I understood her to an xtent and also Arnav's survivor's guilt.
I wish Khushi emerges as a winner from dis fiasco!
PS: i reserved earlier and forgot about it, sorry and yes u r doing a FABULOUS JOB!

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sarahjac

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Posted: 11 years ago

#870

Some people come in our life as blessings and some as lessons. It's upto Arnav now to learn from Lexie and embrace Khushi. Aman's narration didn't tell us how difficult and heart wrenching it would have been for Arnav to leave Lexie or in other words How difficult it would have been for him to face rejection, the fact will always remain that Lexie chose her misguided sense of freedom over Arnav's love, may be she knew in her heart that she could not return to her earlier self, so she did what she thought was wise thing to do, letting him go.

Years later, He is exactly where Lexie was once. At the threshold of choosing pure love over the belief that he is too broken to love again. All this while we have seen him as this strong fearless righteous personality that it's almost unreal to find an emotionally wrecked person underneath. He is pushing Khushi away as she is the only one who can tear down his carefully built facade which he has mastered over the years. He has always been a loner except for faint childhood memories with his brother, he never got along with his parents and then Lexie happened, things were not bright either when he returned back resulting in tight impenetrable walls around his heart.

Oh! this post is long enough and I have not even started on Khushi yet, that girl deserves a bow from us all. Such a mature level head on shoulders of 21 years old.

She went through an emotional ordeal of her own during last 9 days, although she made it to her husband's sketchbook, she has a steeper uphill climb before she can call it a day. Every relationship requires work, there is never a happily ever after. It requires nurturing, just like a Gardner would tend his garden, on everyday basis. But then how long can Khushi carry on with this one-sided fight for love?

I am so looking forward for the next update, please keep them coming.

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