KriYaanshDrabble| In the search of Sunrise| Chapter 13- Pg 38. 5/10

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SALONI KAPADIA

@sally1196

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

THIS IS LIKE OMG FINALLY REY IS FACING HIS INNER FEELINGS AND TURMOIL GOING INSIDE HIM ^_^ AND THE KISS ^_^ ENTERNAL BLISS AND THEN REY AND SWAYAM'S PLAN AHHH TO GET SHIVAM BANKRUPT STEP BY STEP AND THEN RUN AWAY FROM THAT CITY AHHH I M LOVING IT THE WAY STORY IS PROCEEDING FULL OF MYSTREY, FIGHT WITH INNER SELF IS JUST GETTING INTERESTING I M LOVING IT ^_^ DO UPDATE SOON PLEASEEE AND THANKS FOR THE PM :*

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Ameena

@Roxxy47

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#162

How did i miss such a Fantastic story ? 😲...

Well!!! My Bad , Sorry couldn't comment earlier 😳...

I really like this all Mafia , Gang , Running away concept 👍🏼...

Kria's story isn't like the 'Normal-Runway-Dulhans' 😆 , Interesting it is ...

Though i'm still not sure about Rey's character here ...

Abhi tak toh yehi pata hai that he is playing that 'Ek Teer Se Do Nishaane' 😆...

But still confusing it is...

Kria running away from her Step-Brother , so very understood 😉...

About their little Wet Romance , Rey k self-control ki daad deni pare gi 😳...

I really like this story ❤️...

Looking forward to read more of it ...

N thank you for the PMs 😊

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ratika16

@ratika16

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#163

O teri swayam is a dr
Rey n swayam milkar shivam ki baja dalege
Waiting 4 next update
Update soon

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Aditi M.

@reyaditi

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#164

ausome...

both the chaps were very well written...

Chp 8: The feelings U portyayed...reached us...

He started loving her buh jus not being vocal...

Chp 9: Shivam ki toh pakka band bajane wali hai...

ReYam milke Shivam ko barbad kar denge...

Aab muje dekhna hai k Rey Kriya se uthne k baad kya kehta hai...

Doo write soon...

Love Aditi...

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#165

fabulous parts👏

Swayam helping rey and their plan wow👏

and rey s concerned for kriya😳

continue soonish😊

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moumita

@sumimita

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#166

are waah.. swayam doctor hai...

rey and swayam shivam ki band bajayenge...waah waah kya baat hai...

rey is very much concerned for kriya..this was awsome..

i whole..loved it...

update it soon..

with lots of love

moumita

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Meghna

@meghzzzz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: akankshaArsha
feeling of being ditched is heartwrenching.. both hv their shares of pain...their agony cant be felt ...
u wrote it beautifully upi...evryhing was pitch perfect...
nd the last...aah...it was painful yet so beautiful...
pls this tym be sincere nd regular...now ff ss are our only sahara

true akanksha n it even seems that cvs r not going to give us proper ending of our KR

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Meghna

@meghzzzz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#168

awesum dear loved ur updates vry much n hoping to c a romance b/w them.

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David

@arshafan94

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#169

Wow awesome story.
keeps getting more interesting.
so Kria might get involved with them in the game.
So Kriyaansh and Swayam are going to create havoc in Shivam's oh so ugly and corrupt lives.
Excited update soon.