KriYaanshDrabble| In the search of Sunrise| Chapter 13- Pg 38. 5/10 - Page 15

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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update and beautifully written 👏
not to mention it was highly sensuous ☺️

thanks for the pm 😊
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☺️

Wasn't that way too hot for the summer?

This was indeed an intense OS. ☺️

I just can't stop blushing...


-- Parigya
Edited by parigyaverma - 11 years ago
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*
Chapter 8

He looked at himself in mirror. There was nothing except plain emotions. Nothing but loneliness, Unseen tears. Those scars on his body, pain was long gone, but marks were still there, scars of horrible memories.

Why I am being punished for everything? Why things go wrong no matter how hard I try? Why there is no satisfaction and happiness written for me? His insides cried. While his muscles got tensed, balancing his inner turmoil.
No Rey. You cannot let things go out of control. She cannot ruin it. You cannot let her ruin her anything.

*
There were no tears but plain questions in her eyes.

Why there is nobody in my life whom I can trust, love? Why am I alone all the time, struggling alone. First Dad and now...Rey? NO! Rey is just one Stanger. Those things which you felt for him was mere superficial attraction. Nothing else...Nothing else.

She covered her eyes with her palms, somewhere stopping the tears from falling down. Not that she was weak but she was blown this time. Coz somewhere he touched her heart and she didn't knew when and how. She still could feel those sensations of his lips on hers, his hands pressing on her stomach, his arms wrapping her fragile body. But all this was just a game for him. And suddenly every thought got diluted into sheer darkness. She was no more able to think about anything. All she could feel was her heart beating faster than usual and then everything stopped as her face touched the cold marble. Her eyes blinking, catching the last few visions of setting sun, and then there was pure darkness.

He rushed towards her, bending down to touch her unconscious form.
"Kria...Kria...Kria..."He shouted, rubbing her shoulders. Her body was cold, her breath was slow. A tear drop rolled down his cheek. He placed her head in his lap, his arms wrapped around her cold body. "Kria..." He leaned down, his face touching hers, his eyes unwillingly wet. And he kissed her, his lips worshipping her cold lips. And this kiss was different from the previous ones, with more...feelings?
He parted his lips, sucking her tender ones. He felt her hand gripping his shirt gently. "Kria..."He whispered on her lips. As she tried to open her eyes but failed miserably. And in that moment, every thought was flushed out from his mind. He leaned in again, captured her lips with even more urgency. Perhaps this was meant to happen this way only. With him involving her in this game. Where both can either lose or win after losing everything they posses.
*


Edited by SuckerPunch. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
feeling of being ditched is heartwrenching.. both hv their shares of pain...their agony cant be felt ...
u wrote it beautifully upi...evryhing was pitch perfect...
nd the last...aah...it was painful yet so beautiful...
pls this tym be sincere nd regular...now ff ss are our only sahara
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...

beautifully written..

loved it..

can't wait for the next part..

update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
tujhe update karna yaad aa gaya? -_-

meherbaani aapki _/\_

Anyways coming to the update...

i simply loved it.. he sudden turmoil of there feelings.. especially Rey.. he is really gonna have tuff times now...

and that kiss is gonna make things even more dark for him...for them...

Damn Rey was sooo much concerned for her... his sudden feelings.. there feelings overpowering each other.. loving it...

all n all.. loved it..!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
I loved rey's concern for her!
The feelings were described beautifully!
And the kisss!! ^_^
and now things get difficult for them..
Beautifully written
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just wow! Can't describe hw beautifully u describe their feelings.
Gr8 work.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 9


"She is fine Rey. But a bit weakness is there. Nothing major though. I'v written the names of some tablets, Tell her to take it for 4 days" Swayam explained to Rey.

"Are you sure Swayam?"Rey said worryingly.

" Yes Rey. But I am not sure about you."Swayam packed his medical kit and walked towards rey.

"What do you mean?"

"Rey, What is troubling you?" He intently looked into the eyes of his troubled friend. For the first time he saw a frightened Rey. Never did Rey let any of his emotions rule his mind, But now? What has suddenly changed the equations?

"Is it regarding Shivam? Trust me Rey...Your plan will work out, We will make it work it. And you don't worry about Market, I made sure that Shivam's money is invested in dangerous firms."Swayam winked at Rey, who suddenly stood up from his seat gaping at Swayam in horror.

"You did what?"Rey asked with pride.

"I did Pole dance in your favourite night club and you missed it" Swayam chirped sarcastically.

"Oh shut up you! I won't mind that one either. Nice idea!"Rey chided and got a punch from Swayam in return.

"So, After you met Shivam yesterday, I contacted some fake money investors and made Shivam's men put his money in wrong firms. And... Boom! Market crashed. His Money in drains. This is just the start. Also the drugs which was being supplied to him from months for illegal trading will not be supplied anymore. So Shivam is trapped badly. "

"Are you sure this is safe Swayam?"

"Haan Rey. But I am not sure that only Shivam is troubling you at present" Swayam stood in front of Kria's room and looked at Rey.

"Rey why did you bring her here? You know it can be ugly for us. I know we need to keep her away from Shivam for some time, But in your house? I don't think it's safe for us and also for her."

"I...I.."Rey stammered. He simply didn't knew how to justify. And even if he tried, there was no possible justification for it. But gather enough strength he spoke. "I don't want to risk anything. Here at my place at least we know Shivam not gonna find her and.."

"Its okay Rey. Fine. I am leaving now. Next week is going to be tough for you. Tell Shivam that you are going for a holiday or some meeting. And leave this city as soon as possible. Take Kria along with you, Its not gonna be safe here."

"And you? Where will you go?" Rey asked Swayam.

"Shivam doesn't know me. He knows you as a person. Don't worry. I'll be with my medical team. We have some big seminars next week."

"Ok. Take care buddy. And for Shivam...Time Starts now."

Truely next week was going to be tough for them. It was the time that the first level of this game should be completed, leaving a Bankrupt Shivam. Rey and Swayam were working hard for this from months. And this was time for them to see the result of their hard work.

Rey walked to Kria's room, watched her sleep peacefully. Framing the words in his minds which he will be saying to her once she gets up. But he didn't wanted to trouble her sleep. He sighed and turned around after taking a last glance of her.


[A/N- Hehe, Rey and Swayam Shivam ki baja daalenge :v YUS! :P Humm.. So things getting clear bit by bit. ;) Thanks a lot for appreciating this story! <3 It truly means a lot to me. 😃
Ciao. Much Love. I'll send Pm's soon. 😊 ]
Edited by SuckerPunch. - 11 years ago
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bot updts are awssom
loved it
thnx fr pm

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