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Posted: 11 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: avniarpitha



Friday ????/😲😲
its just monday today 😭
u r busy ???😔

k...update sooon!!!😕



k i will upload thursday or wednesday k na gng to temple yar ... relatives function thats y pls

when i came i will upload soon as possible

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Posted: 11 years ago
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woow another amazing story... i have read many in sandhir cafe... n i jus luv them... plzkeep updating.. i have sent u a buddy request.. do accept too!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gitanjalitilak

woow another amazing story... i have read many in sandhir cafe... n i jus luv them... plzkeep updating.. i have sent u a buddy request.. do accept too!!!


i m so happy that u liked it

i will post soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: twni

amazing amzing amazing



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Posted: 11 years ago
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YOU ARE ALWAYS WITH ME - PART 9 - THE FREEDOM :


PREVIOUS PART : PART 8 : PART 8

Randhir again reached the manipal hospital and its evening. Sanyu was in her room. He took permission and went to her. She was sleeping peacefully. He was lost in her innocence. Suddenly he realized that it was getting dark.


And he has to take away. He went near her and stroke his hand against her head. Still she was calm. He slowly called her.

R: SANYU... SANYU.. uthho hume nikalna hai. Slowly she opened her eyes and was very happy.


S: are tum.. Tum aa gaye. Main kabse tumhara wait kar rahi thi. Tum mujhe apne sath le jaane aaye ho na.


R: haan baba. Lene hi to aaya hun tumhe.


S: sachi. Hum chalen.


R: haan chalo. Baahar car k paas wait karo. Main formalities puri karke aata hun. Fir hum chalenge.


Randhir completes all his formalities, takes sanyu and gets into the car.


S: are par hum jaa kahan rahe hein.


R: abhi to lodge jayege par kal hum ghar chalenge.


S: are waah !!!! Itna badaa teddy. Kiska hai???


R: tumhara.


S: par maine to kharida hi nahi.


R: maine to kharida hai tumhare liye.


S: sachi. Ye mere liye hai???


R: aur nai to kya, pink tumhara fav colour hai na.
(it was 3 ft pink coloured teddy, printed "I love you" on a heart shaped pilow fixed exactly at its centre.)


S: haan. Thank you. Par I love you kyun likha hai.


R: Wo kabhi aur bataunga.

(he was wondering how innocently she was hugging kissing and making faces at the teddy. A day she was smart, intellegent, scholar, confident and now shs has lost every talent she has.

She has become a kid full of innocence. But still she has the same passion that she had in past)

(Coming out of his thoughts he parked his car infront of a mall)


S: hum yahaan rahenge????


R: Nahi ye mall hai. Pehle hum shopping karenge tumhare liye kuch pretty se dresses lenge fir kahin aur jayenge.


S: ok. Chalo. Par mere liye dress tum select kar dena please.


R: sure.


Inside the mall...


R: ye kaisa hai??? (he was holding a sliveless sky blue knee long frock having 1 inch wide band shoulder, a black belt at the waist postion and a deep U neck)


S: achha hai.


R: aur ye. (a light pink t-shirt printed PRETTY GIRL on it and a contrast dark pink skirt having inclined cheks)


S: ye bhi achha hai.


R: par lena kaunsa hai.


S: pata nahi (she said keeping her chin on the teddy's head).


R: oho sab le chalte hei.


S: sab????


R: haan. Ab ye lo aur try karo.


S: tum chalo na. Mujhe dar lagta hai akele.


R: ok baba chalo.


(sanyu goes inside and randhir stands outside)


S: chalo.


R: nahi sanyu ye ladies changing room hai. Tum change karo. Mai yahin hoon. Kahin nahi jaunga.


S: acha thik hai. Jab bhi main bulaun answer zarur dena. Thik hai.


R: sure baby.


R(in his mind): Tum jab bhi mujhe pukarogi, main tumhe jawaab dene k liye hamesha paas hunga. Ye promise hai mera. I love you my farzi.


(a millon times she called him and as promised, he answered that many times. After few minutes she came out)


R: try kiya??? Fit hai???


S: haan.


R: ab chalo.


S: fir kahaan.


R: chalo to sahi. Fir batata hun. Aur suno bilkul chup chap baithna aur wo jaisa karne ko kahe waisa hi karna.


S: ok lekin iske baad chocolate. Please.


R: thik hai meri maa. Chalo ab.

(he then took her to the beauty parlour and asked the beautician to repair all her damages of hairs, skin, hands, legs everything. In short he asked to make a complete turn over oh her.

Sanyu was quite and enjoying all those. She was playing with every materials)

Soon the beautician took her for spa and took one of her to dress her up.
After few minutes she came out. She was in that same blue dress, randhir selected for her.


To be continue...


NEXT PART : PART10 : PART 10

Edited by purnima209 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
PurnimaDi!!!! Ahhh! YAY👏👏👏AYAYAYAAY! You updated! I am sooo happy! I loved the way he cared for her!!!! AHHH YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY! I CAN'T WAIT FOR NEXT PART!
1st to reply :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
Yipeee...
U Uploaded
Thnkuuu 😳
& i am luving this ff a lottt❤️

Update soon the next part !!!
Bt y dnt u pm ?😔

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb... loved the innocent behavior of Sanyu😊😊 & Randhir handling her... jaldi jaldi next part bhi update karo na
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: kri1

PurnimaDi!!!! Ahhh! YAY👏👏👏AYAYAYAAY! You updated! I am sooo happy! I loved the way he cared for her!!!! AHHH YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY! I CAN'T WAIT FOR NEXT PART!

1st to reply :)




sry yar u hve to wait i cant post upto 2 days i m sry... but max i will try...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: avniarpitha

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U Uploaded
Thnkuuu 😳
& i am luving this ff a lottt❤️

Update soon the next part !!!
Bt y dnt u pm ?😔
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sry i will pm frm nxt time onwards k na add me and ha wait for 2 days for nxt prt

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