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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
the one touch as i expected...😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Deepthi... I am speechless. What an update... No .. this is not a story,.. This is reality in the form of story. The way you created these characters.. the way you are steering them and molding them to fit into your story is amazing.
You proved one more time that, Love doesn't need long words to say. Love doesn't need to express it loud. Love doesn't need to be out loud. Love doesn't need to be hidden. Love doesn't need to be all painful. Love doesn't need to be all blissful. One moment of their hug.. one moment of their tears.. one moment of tearing in each other's embrace... made them forget all their pain just like magic. Love.. it's indeed beautiful...

Anjali confronting Arnav after hearing the death of Adi,... Nani and Anjali knowing Arnav itself killed that animal Adi... Arnav telling Anjali that she was one of the reason for the behavior of Adi. Anjali soon realizing her mistake and Aman's words to comfort Anjali and supporting Arnav at a time... everything is perfect. A most beautiful way of describing everything.

The person who tortured his wife and sold his daughter, finally found a perfect punishment. Arnav doesn't have to be guilty for that. But Arnav too felt like Adi doesn't deserve easy death. Unknowingly Arnav did good with Adi too by murdering him and making him to meet his death.

Aman, what a true friend he is.. I am falling in love with Aman day by day. He knows how to behave with Arnav and Anjali.. and he knows how to handle them too.

I literally shook when Arnav told Nani, to not curse the person who killed Adi. Because he is already in more pain, he doesn't deserve more than he is going through right now.

Khushi still feeling restless with Arnav's absence. The sentence Khushi said without knowing Arnav's thoughts that perfectly is beautiful, which slapped him hard saying she doesn't assumption like others for anything about him.

Arnav's insecurities completely makes sense. Everything he is worrying about are valid reasons. He is still worrying about the consequences she would face if she comes to know the truth. He accepted the child completely and He kept all the blame on himself... Arnav is great. dammittt.

Finally,... They cried in each others embrace. Finally they knew they need one mere comfort touch to make their hearts beat normal again.

Deepu really .. You are proving as an amazing writer for every update... I wanted to write more.. But I have to go now.. to prepare dinner... Deepu.. I am not satisfied with my comment... But I am not able to write anymore... But I wan to say more...

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

You deserve more than a simple clap... more than a simple praise.. more than simple words... to say how brilliant writer you are... I love you Deepu... I am excited for the next chapter... to know how they will continue their talk..

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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
Deeps really I don't know wat to comment...I have been staring at nothing for at least 1/2 hour just thinking about dis chap...amazing chapter no words to describe...u have done some major magic with ur writing and it surely deserves a standing ovation👏
Arnav's emotion were sooo raw in dis chap... His reaction after knowing that Adi is dead...his worries on how he might hurt nani...his hesitation to take any curse from nani for d sake of khushi...his outburst at anjali...his inner turmoil wen he went to their house...his desicion of nt forcing khushi into anything anymore says his willingness to do anything khushi wishes yet afraid to let her go...he mildly opening up to aman in d car...finally his breakdown in front of khushi... everything from a-z was awesome👏👏👏 and DAT little moment with anjali...were he acts as a protective brother( made me smile in between my tears)
I was very surprised and happy about nani's reaction to knowing DAT arnav killed Adi!!!! Its high time dey all stop mourning for DAT idiotic fellow😡he deserves whatever he got😡
Anjali was sooo brave in dis chap...d way she accepted her fault and was ready to make amemendments was awesome👏
Aman's way of consoling anjali...his commitment to arnav ...and really am very happy DAT aman never once stopped to give khushi a pitying glances or in fact any other negative emotions...really khushi does not deserve DAT!!!!! I love aman more and more with these chaps👏And khushi sweet khushi no matter it was she who made DAT stupid rule of no talking...she felt d need to console him wen She thought DAT he might b hurting...or wen she was longing for his one loving glance...or wen she cried for d featherly touch wonderful no words👏
Even though this chap has very little conversation between all the characters...even the little words spoken and all d little gestures spoke a million and made me cry lyk a baby😭
I don't even know wat I have written as comment but whatever I have written is still no enough coz DAT much is how I loved this chap and words are very less to describe it👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
there r too many emotions in this update...
Angry Arnav when he is tryin to wake uo the dead man to give him more punishment
Cunning n smart arnav for plotting tht to be done by another man.
A concerned husband to verify abt his wifes health in between this chaos
Disappointed brother that pointed how wrong his sister was in being the reason for makin a monster
Guilty arnav blaming himself for khushi's pain... thinking if only ...
and finally a lovin husband who wanted to be there for his wife.

Am glad that Arnav made sure to point anji's mistake, even though she is not completely responsible she did play a part...
anji by now shud have got a doubt tht the girl arnav is talkin abt is khushi, coz they very well know tht arnav reacts only when people try to harm something tht belongs to him. she already asked him in last update.. guess she will eventually find out.

Khushi must have been very hurt seeing Arnav at his old apt in his vulnerable state and not bein able to help him...

Nani is one sensible woman.. she knows wht is right.
looks like arnav forgave anji, when he was askin her to check her room... and all this tension he needed nani who cud make the atmosphere light by jokin abt anji and amans livein relation..

and NO WORDS to say abt the last part👏

but seems unknowingly arnav is givin so many clues to khushi.. she must be goin crazy thinking wht made arnav hurt her in the first place...
take a break khushi and enjoy ur hubbys lov for a while.

Thank you for the wonderful upodate
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55

congrats for d new thread

awesome update. last part was emotional. waiting for d next update


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fabulous update. All the emotions were conveyed beautifully
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Falling in love is easy but cherishing it is the hardest part.

Sometimes GOD is also against us , Arnav wanted to punish Adi very brutally but Adi was lucky he is a dead meat or else he would have rotten in hell. But what is done is done nothing is in our hands it is all destiny. The pain that Arnav is going through no one can understand he is bearing the pain of 2 people his pain and also Khushi's pain

Destiny again played its dirty tricks, a man is responsible for the destruction of 2 souls and one of them saved the other. History repeated a father has again sold his own daughter for some bills. The old man played an important role at that night and Khushi saved his daughter and provided shelter and gave her a respectable life. Arnav felt prove that the girl was saved by his wife.

Yes Arnav was only answerable to Nani and I thought that she would be the only one he would think when he is punishing Adi. Aman is a replica of Arnav with few upgrades like humor , emotions etc lol . Deepthi I love the way you described Aman.

Today Arnav showed the reality to Anjali , more than Nani , Arnav and Khushi today Anjali received the greatest punishment and pain. She cannot forgive herself for life because she is the reason for Adi's downfall, she is the reason for that cruel night she is the reason for what Khushi and Arnav are going through she is the reason for Aman and her separation. Today she came to know why Adi turned into a Monster instead of a loving brother which he was when he was a kid.

Yes Khushi was dead on that night but she will die thousand deaths if she came to know about the truth. Does she need such kind of punishment?

Khushi how can she not worry about her man. Loved the messaging J

Aman he knows how to deal with all the people associated with him, He knows how to handle ASR , Arnav , Anjali , Nani and I think the only person that he cannot handle is Mrs.ASR lol because only ASR can handle his Posy J

He is able to convince Anjali Nice conversation between them.

Khushi she is a self made woman she knows Arnav well than anyone else she know when he is hurt when is angry he knows him better than himself. Her mind is not letting her rest because of the past she is scared that history is going to repeat which she is not ready for and that is the reason she wants to go to him instead of waiting for him, Lol I love the way she threatened Aman hahaha

Arnav he is a mountain he is holding himself for Khushi he can bear anything until his Khushi is safe once she is shattered then these is not Arnav his existence will come into question. As long as she is holding herself with dignity and pride he can stand.How each and every word changes it meaning once out of the mouth till it reaches the ears of others that is what happened Anrav said those words in some contest and when they reaches Khushi its meaning was totally changed. One thing that can never change between Arnav and Khushi is their concern for each other their Love for each other and that is what is binding them together , what ever might be their reasons for staying together is. The ASR is feeling defeated , He lost his everything on that night one night has changed his fate , it made him a loner , it made him a into a dead person. Today Aman has suffered a lot his saw his buddy in a miserable condition , today he has seen Anjali take the blame and saw her in a defeated condition.

Nani is really great and she accepted Arnav with out any hesitation and my respect for her has increased 10000000000 time I salute Nani.

Deepthi I don't want to comment on the last part because I know I cannot do justice. I am not good with words that is the reason I am not commenting. Hats off to you. They both need each other There is no Khushi with out Arnav Bas.

The VM was really absolute treat to watch.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Srilathalolla

Aman he knows how to deal with all the people associated with him, He knows how to handle ASR , Arnav , Anjali , Nani and I think the only person that he cannot handle is Mrs.ASR lol because only ASR can handle his Posy J



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I feel the same thing. Only Arnav can handle her.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It made me cry litrally shedding tears...
"Her eyes instantly glistened pooling the warm drops as she understood the incredible underlying message that he accepted their child whole heartedly. And the next set of his words only proved her right making her proud of her man that moment.AreWEhaving a girl or a boy?His voice constricted as he splayed his entire palm on her stomach giving warmth to the baby.The warmth of his hand that moment wiped off every pain of hers, his words lifting the tears from her face, as they splashed real hard against his hand near her tummy.Arnav raised his eyes in shock as this is the first time he is seeing tears dropping down her cheeks evidently and that broke his heart. How much she held within herself. How much more will she hold onto herself.With new determination, he scooted towards her, sliding his hand to cup her downcast nape, he pulled her closer to rest her turbulent eyes against his wrenching heart.And she did without putting up a fight, giving up all her resolves, conditions, only wanting to be held against him. She leaned forward resting her forehead against his chest, her heart slowly picking up the sobs.They needed no words to cry over the pathetic turns their lives took. As his head rested on her shoulder, his tears wetting the bare skin, she crumpled his shirt in the front holding him closer, pulling him and not letting him go.." these lines made me feel how much khushi faced...all her pain, her need, all her tears which never use to flow just came for the man of her life...
How much she has suffered nd how much she will face... More than hers i cried for the pain, the remorse, the guilt arnav is going through...
But y is he thinking khushi wud leave him after knowing the truth...??? His khushi is not so weak...!!! Loved nani nd anjali... They both atleast know the reason now but still not about khushi...
Aman is a so supportive ya... He is a true freind...
Cant wait to read more...
Edited by piyaarshi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow so much to say but nothing coming out.. Speechless this is what I feel right now deepthi.. Actually now I think there are no words to say what I want to say about this chapter dear.. You have done a tremendously wonderful job writing this chapter., each character and their emotions were just too good.. You really have a way with the words.. Awesome update especially the last scene where finally both were letting out their emotions, was really beautifully written.. Hats off to you once again dear!!! Really really loved it.. Can't wait to read the next update.. Btw just curious what are you going to do about the tapes?? Is khushi ever going to learn the truth??

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