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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow!!! Awesome and amazing update. I hope they start a beautiful journey from here by loving each other no matter what!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
hey... wht happened to khushi's last assignment which is supposed to be in two weeks,,,, is it over? if not will arnav let her go now??
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
what a marvellous writer you are!! hats off to you!!⭐️
I never cried this much so far reading stories or watching movies but this story and specially chapt 35 made me cry like anything...😭

Arnav true to the title now i understand The Valiant Knight.. the way he took everything on him and covered all the way for Khushi to know the truth...

The way he stopped Nani to cursed the person the way he spoke to anjali ,... thank god Aman stand by his side and Anjali Nani the way both came back to Arnav i guess he needed it...

finally coming to our dear arshi- they have suffered so much since young age and so much happened to them... the way Khushi came with Aman to see Arnav but she saw broken Arnav but the way Arnav shielded himself & she forced to not know what happened then the way Arnav has allowing her to do whatever she wants.
The slience between them , he is guilty for his action and he is dying with that guilt is too much..
Finally the way her health is falling.. Nani made Arnav understand khushi needs him..
When he came in her room that moment broke all the barrier the way they cried in each others arm and the way he accept the baby and the way Khushi said no khushi without Arnav..
I am still not sure about he baby as Arshi didnt do to go through all this..
Oh my god their POV song are righty hit the spot and explain what a bond they share..

Looking forward what you have planned ahead
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
after the update these lines r again and again coming into my mind...i have shared them before also i think in dotd

thaak gaye hain paon chaltay chaltay

sach mein dar gaye hain hum dartay dartay

abh tu khawab bhee nahi deekhay jatay

jantay hain toot jain gay yeh jagtay jagtay


i know how much tvk is effecting all of us...strong social message..complete rollar coaster of emotions ..keeping all characters always in balance...in character...being writer how much it is on ur nerves ...how much it is taking ur blood and soul...just thinking i can say it loud that UFFF deeps...well yes u have changed my mind on THE scene of tvk...u have proved that khamoshi ki apni aik zubaan hoti hay...its not necessary to come up with big reasons ...some time small gestures can do wonders...yes u have changed my view point ...yes it proves that if two people having in base of their relation faith on each other...no words or justifications requires end of the day...no matter wt ...
smiliarly in ur case no words can do justice even in doing praise for ur writing capability and skills...just thank u deeps from bottom of my heart for giving such a beautiful story of tvk...chaap gay hain yeh pal of tvk...abh nahi mit saktay :)
Edited by lalarukh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
Again an awesome update. Arnav don't want leave kushi alone in this world again , just loved his dialogues n the first part. Cleverly put the blame on the old man.. Loved Aman's game changer :)
Arnav letting Anjali know she influenced adi wen young, while amam letting her know that she did wat any child n her state wud do.. These scenes were kind of convincing me that Anjali s not to be blamed here. Nani , bow to her. Very cognitive, very emotional . S indeed the right girl friend for Arnav .. Have always admired their bond .. Hats off to u to bringing t up to another level..
Aman-Arnav s another equation to be admired of..
Kushi Arnav love gives another definition to love.. Both are so much into love that they can't bear to see another n pain.. Kushi can bear wen Arnav shouts at her , calls her names but she can't see this man breaking down ..
Ur writing s tremendous..take readers on an emotional ride, pulls them n to the story.. I am sure no writer wud have done so much justice to the same story as u r doing now.. The dialogues "his feather touch" s enough for the update.. I am sure whenever I hear feather or touch I am going to think abt u.. I replayed the scene many times .
Way to go
Accept my salute
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
oh my god so much emotional. hope khusi should not comes to know about incident.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
That was painful
Great Adi is dead
I love Nani
Good Anji got what her hate for Arnav costed Adi
I know Khushi will be broken but its better if Arnav tells her the truth soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
very touching maya update ! well with the wait ! U have written the emotional turmoil everyone goes thru very beautifully ...well done :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: lalarukh

after the update these lines r again and again coming into my mind...u have shared them before also i think in dotd


thaak gaye hain paon chaltay chaltay

sach mein dar gaye hain hum dartay dartay

abh tu khawab bhee nahi deekhay jatay

jantay hain toot jain gay yeh jagtay jagtay


i know how much tvk is effecting all of us...strong social message..complete rollar coaster of emotions ..keeping all characters always in balance...in character...being writer how much it is on ur nerves ...how much it is taking ur blood and soul...just thinking i can say it loud that UFFF deeps...well yes u have changed my mind on THE scene of tvk...u have proved that khamoshi ki apni aik zubaan hoti hay...its not necessary to come up with big reasons ...some time small gestures can do wonders...yes u have changed my view point ...yes it proves that if two people having in base of their relation faith on each other...no words or justifications requires end of the day...no matter wt ...
smiliarly in ur case no words can do justice even in doing praise for ur writing capability and skills...just thank u deeps from bottom of my heart for giving such a beautiful story of tvk...chaap gay hain yeh pal of tvk...abh nahi mit saktay :)


Yes Lala.. You are right... Silence speaks more than actions in love. It just needs love ... Any gesture which speaks volumes of love should be enough for the beating hearts to find their unique rhythm. No words can justify the beautiful feeling Deepu created just with simple lines of words embracing the trust, by pouring their love out in the firm of tears. Tears... Who told people will get tears when they are sad... Who told people will get tears while they are happy. Who told people will get tears when you lose something precious. Who told people will get tears out of ecstasy. ... Tears... They can come out of love... They can come as the replacement of words our heart can't speak. They can come as an unsaid promise. They can come as an heartfelt apology.

TVK became an addiction. To me.. TVK became a part in my life. .. TVK found permanent place in my thoughts.

Deepu as Lala said... We should thank you for the beautiful and amazing story of TVK... I think a small thanks should be not enough for you...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
Dnt knw what to say..
I am amazd u r making me abosolutely speechless.. Aftr reading the updates i cnt stop thinking about it..
There r people in the world like them, i just cnt stop me praying for them..
I liked this arnav, cnfident yet tensd, strong yet weak, love khushi to this extent that he cnt face her.. Hats off for ur writing capabilities nd skills nd wondr u could do that..
Thnks for pm..

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