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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: ankitamishra201

amazing work on d VM ...dat scene which barun n sanaya did just for masti sake now looks lyk it was done for ur story ...it was a perfect fit


I know...I love that cute segment too...

Thank You
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: lalarukh

speechless ...no words...infact no more words requires here...u have left me speechless deeps...

i always thought that arnav have to come back to khushi with a big big reason that y he left her...but that question of mine seems weightless right now...it is infact stupid question to think even...cause u have done wonders in that one moment of feather touch...words seems useless here...just that we having girl or boy...it says the all...infact this sentence took the pain and suffering away...

Oh my, did I change your thinking in this? Remember when we discussed about few tracks, when you always told me that he needs to have solid reason to win her if he is not telling the truth. I wanted to scream and tell you that this is how scene is going to be. But I cant share THE scene of the TVK. And I m very glad that this scene changed your opinion...



finally she cried...oh yaaar ...she shed tears...finally...never knew that she such a strong person needs such hell emotinal war to break down...she finally gave up...dropped all the curtains as tears drop down from her eyes ...as if saying to herself that "i cant take it any more" 😭

I dont know whether you believe it or not...I penned down this dialogue in the next para but as usual I reached the limit and had to end it where I ended it.

two strong people...living in pain ...hell under circumstances and situations...just because they both strong enough to take the pain doesnt mean they deserve to have it...but i know THIS TOO SHALL PASS...they will come out of it...arnav aur khushi ko koi alag nahi ker sakta...iss jahan mein nahi tu koi kahin aur jahan hoga...jahan yeh hamesha aur hamesha saath rahain gay...

deeps i dont know wt i have written today...i am all in head to toe in deep emtional pain...but happy to see them finally in lil peace ...in each other arms...in each other embrace...hats off girl ...loved the update to the core..honestly i have cried out loud...as usually like all habit hay to shed silent tears on the pillow ..thats the strong impact of tonight update

I know this update made everyone emotional...and I am sure what you must have felt..As I said earlier...those 2 dialogues broke me and thats the time I took that 15mins break away from the FF..I just couldnt write then..This part will always remain fresh in my mind...Sometimes when I couldnt handle I feel why I took such emotional story...I dont regret it but its getting hard to digest...

ps: out class out standing vm made by u...beautiful...very aptly defines arnav struggle in pain and hurt...his break down...ufff
khushi vm awesome lyrics...both vms added beauty in the entire ambiance of emtional drive today

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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Awesomes update. Had tears while reading the last part. Fabulous part. And the VMs just apt.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Awesome update.
The end of Adi , was wondering how it will come out of his death but the way u wrote it and the plot is just amazing.completely understand why he can't surrender but at the same time he didn't hide from his family. surprisingly happy that both Anajli n nani took in positive way and not blame him for Adi's death. Hats off to Aman for sticking with Arnav and bringing the family together.
Lots of emotions and pain in this chapter... reading this chapters we just felt Arnav's anger, pain, helpless , so hats off to u for writing n describing so well.

Coming to Khushi, poor her nothing seems to understand whats happening but glad that they do care each other n shows concerns in their own way.Nani being around its one positive sign and good that she made Arnav aware of Khushi's current conditions.
The last part of the last chapter ...omg just feel like crying when both Arnav n Khushi cldn't hold themself and started crying , hugging ,confessing their mistakes, love...very weet moment and somehow feel good that maybe they will start fresh.

thank u for the updates and what can I say its just blew me away the way u wrote it 👏

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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Awesome update
C 🥳 NGRATS ON NEW THREAD
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Thanks a lot for the pm yaar...
U r d best yaar...
Lovely update ...
From start to end d best update ...
I m also cried at d last part yaar...
Each dialogue was just awesome yaar...
Specially khushi handeled d situation and d final outburst...
Much needed hug for both of them...
Nani and anjali decision was also superb yaar...
I loved aman also in dis update yaar...
Loved d way aman handling anjali yaar...
U r d best...
Come back soon with d update yaar...
Cant wait for d next update... 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Congrats dear.. I love thistory... Loved the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Congrats on the new thread!
The update was awesome and very emotional!
Would khushi know the truth in future?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Brilliant update! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
The VM you made is so good deepthi.

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