Submerged! - ArShi FF:New note P.No 132

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#471

I came across this FF & read it one go The plot is wonderfully woven . What a turning point , khushi strike Shyam ,the bloody snake did not know what hit him . An innocent girl slipped out of his hands with his prey . Arnav & Khushi are running and Shyam is determined to chase .

Nice

loved reading his ff

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InspiredSoul

@InspiredSoul

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#472

A Thank You Note!

Dear Friends,

First of all, a huge thank you to all for the wonderful comments and encouragement!

A special shout-out to segad for sharing an interesting link about hidden doors after she read Ch 7 Part 2.

Here is the link she shared:

http://story.evrystry.com/873/1/25-Gorgeous-Doors-that-seem-to-lead-to-other-worlds

My Asli duniya is pretty hectic, and I have a crazy routine - which got more crazier recently :-) I am trying to get more regular with my updates, and hoping to write more lengthier chapters.

But one thing I am not able to do well so far is keep up with my replies to comments. Neither am I able to comment regularly on my favorite stories that my friends are writing.

I feel guilty - and selfish ... 😒

I usually start out replying to comments, and then I get busy, and then it's time for a new post - I never seem to catch up ...

I hope you understand, and don't feel bad when I don't reply to comments - I do read every single comment posted, and I very much appreciate every comment. They keep me going, give me encouragement, and also provide me feedback whether my readers are with me on the same page on this journey. Your comments give me a better insight, and help me to write better!

Thank you again! You are the best!

Love & hugs,

Edited by InspiredSoul - 11 years ago

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@addicted25

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Posted: 11 years ago

#473

Ok I take it that Khushi at one point in her life was in Sheesh Mahal, and she is getting flashbacks... ooh could this be related to his father's mistress, she was afterall her masi?
This is getting really interesting ... longer updates please;) sorry I know it takes time to write and update.. im just being greedy...our story is so well written and intriguing.

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Shyamala

@shyamidutt

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Posted: 11 years ago

#474

Very intriguing story. Liking it a lot :)

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gangsu

@gangsu

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#475

amazng update

I think khushi's phobia started from that store room

but then how come she was in seesh mahal first of all?

This can only mean 1 thing Arshi know each other when they were kids

This ff is getting even more interesting 😃

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#476

Its okay you know if you cant comment on replies

Don't have to

Anyway take your time

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#477

Wow ... this was one thrilling update from start to finish !

I kept biting my nails thinking that any moment they are going to get caught ... impatiently waiting to find out what happens next.

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#478

There definitely seems to be some connection between Khushi and sheesmahal...it can't be mere coincidence that khushi knows about things in Sheesh mahal randomly.

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Mehreen

@Motif_Soul

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#479

Nice IS😊

My fav part is connection of Sheesh Mahal and Khushi which is embedded in her head.Arnav's way of protection is really impressive at each and every step.The closet idea is superb👏

Shyam is alert now.