Submerged! - ArShi FF:New note P.No 132

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indi52

@indi52

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#481

hi is,

great update... gripping and touching at once... she has memories from this place, intriguing and he feels things he hasn't ever.

the last sequence was both exciting and so very tender.

and the suspense is fabulous.

looking forward to the next chapter.

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indi52

@indi52

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#482

just read 7-3, beautiful.

mingling of mystery and an attraction that has started unknown... and asr is so cute...

liked your description of shyam... he was always more interesting than he was ultimately allowed to be.

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#483

Remember we are waiting for update

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aarwen

@aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#484

Arnav Singh Raizada, for as long as he can remember, took care of people - not the other way round.

I read parts 2 and 3 together.. this line .. IS it made me feel all sorts of tender things for the man.

Very interesting.. your background of Shyam. So he wasn't all bad.. and even in IPK he wasn't really bad.. the character had interesting shades and one weakness till they decided to turn him into full on deranged bollywood style villain.

Khushi and Arnav scenes were beautifully written. I almost want to be held the same way.. hehe.. The wardrobe reminds me of narnia.. the lion, the witch and the wardrobe.. very nice description you add to the chapters.

and the suspense in great. i jumping forward then have to come back in my eagerness to know what khushi knows or what arnav find out.. looking forward to the next update..