Submerged! - ArShi FF:New note P.No 132

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bidz

@bidz

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#271

Hi IS🤗

Read all the parts at one go. What a treat!! Believe me I was wondering in the initial part why is Khushi being aware of Dhruv. And then you threw that shocker of a twist😉 Amazing!!!

How is everyone else? Poona, horizon, arshi??? sab theek hain?

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Kavyasarun

@Kavya_sarun

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#272

Read al 5 chapters in a go. Simply superb. Loved it.
Do update the next part soon.

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shiv456

@shiv456

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#273

love the update nice story

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@addicted25

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#274

Ooh interesting chapter. Arnav is finally getting his health back, and in the process is finding his love... already trying to protect her and her family. Love the hide and seek scene, house lizard...thought it may have been Shyam... her dhak-dhak and acidity have begun in just 20 days..how long is it going to be before he realises?. What's the age difference again?

Ooh cant wait for the next update..

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headtotoe

@headtotoe

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#275

Finally Arnav could contact Akash and was able to tell his plight o him.. I am relieved.. Wonder what his plan is now ??

The up and close moments of Arhi were nice too...

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#276

Glad you updated. Looking forward to the next one with Arnav's plan in it.

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angeldream14

@angeldream14

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#277

loved it

its quiet thrilling n interesting

d mystery make me curious more

y did shayam is telling dadi Arnav is Dhruv

he is still not trusting khushi completely

will khushi be in trouble for helping him

n will she forgive him for lying

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gangsu

@gangsu

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#278

awsm

Khushi is innocent n cute 😊

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Ipoona

@Ipoona

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#279

Inspired, excellent writing my friend... Much as we loved our show, I know a lot of us were disappointed in the end of Shaym track. Thank you for giving us a version where Arnav is leading his downfall front and center ... With of course help for our girl. Absolutely loved the chipkali scene ... 😊 ... Love that she is so disturbed and he is focused ... Eagerly waiting go fir the next phase ...

Edited by Ipoona - 11 years ago