Submerged! - ArShi FF:New note P.No 132 - Page 12

Originally posted by: addicted25

WOW Amazing start, so I take it its Akaash who is sick, for one moment I thought it could have been Arnav, but he is our hero who come to the rescue. Is shyam up to his dirty tricks? Always wanted to know how the dynamics would have changed if his victim was younger and able to fight. One plea from us nris, please can we have dome rnglish translations too? Pretty please?

Please keep me in the loop for updates too. Thank you muuwhx

Originally posted by: mayurisb80

I have to tell you that the prologue has me all interested...looking forward to read more...good luck ...

Originally posted by: PearlSaRunholic

awesome !! continue soonish !

Originally posted by: InspiredSoul

ArshiH, thank you for taking time to read this story! Feedback, please ... How do you like my portrayal of Khushi so far?

Yes, Khushi is very smart in my story - I love her sanak and pagalpan, and her adorable and sweet persona, I will keep that unchanged.

Originally posted by: smiley-shiney

Interesting

Looking forward for the next chapters

Originally posted by: arnshi

Intro :
amazing...looking forward to it <3

Chap 1:UNRES

Very interesting...let see how Khushi helps akash to contact arnav ...
so many questions right now...eagerly waiting for next...
Amazing intro of the ASR 😳Khushi is too adorable <3 perfect abhi se😃

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

Awesome update

Why does Akash don't want dadiji to know about his call to Arnav? There is so much suspense in this story.

The flashback has started, interesting. They are going to reveal a lot of things.

Looking forward to read next chapter

Originally posted by: cute_sarun

Interesting update

Originally posted by: mayurisb80

He is awake and alert...i hope kushi us able to help him.

Originally posted by: addicted25

Ooh intriguing! Druv the lost characher in the series... here I was thinking it was Akash!.

Im not liking dhaddhi, not even shaym heh didnt like them in the series either so no change there either. Nannav is back 😉. Ok Nk is back but here is, the astute cousin who still riles his bhai. Nice. Looking forward to the next one