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mayurisb80

@mayurisb80

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

He is awake and alert...i hope kushi us able to help him.

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@addicted25

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Posted: 11 years ago

#92

Ooh intriguing! Druv the lost characher in the series... here I was thinking it was Akash!.

Im not liking dhaddhi, not even shaym heh didnt like them in the series either so no change there either. Nannav is back 😉. Ok Nk is back but here is, the astute cousin who still riles his bhai. Nice. Looking forward to the next one

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Ipoona

@Ipoona

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Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Inspired ... just got back ... Dog tired. Will write in the morning ... Intiguing to say the very minimal ... 😛

Edited by Ipoona - 11 years ago

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SmitaCletus

@SmitaCletus

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Posted: 11 years ago

#94

What an intriguing story!!

U have managed to build up an excellent suspense. and I am loving it.😃

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#95

OK this is getting interesting...

so Dadi is all behind this and for what...money

Hope Dhruv be fine and Khushi is smart she will help him

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Horizon

@Horizon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#96

very intriguing update IS.

Good to see you shacking the dust out of a forgotten character of the original story, even more interesting khushi is all seem to be fida on him i your story ! :)

Good family dynamics and Bharat, Rama analogies portrayed.

Thanks IS.

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InspiredSoul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: Nitu01
thnx for the pm wai8in for chap 1

Hope you had the chance to read Part 1 & 2, and liking the way the story is moving!

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InspiredSoul

@InspiredSoul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: Aisha1996
Nice CS 😊

Thank you 😊

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InspiredSoul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: cute_sarun
interesting..

Originally posted by: cute_sarun
lovely update and an interesting flashback eager for the next update..

Thank you! Hope you like the Part 2 too! 😊

Edited by InspiredSoul - 11 years ago

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InspiredSoul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: mishti_17
Character sketch is interesting.. Waiting for the next update...

Originally posted by: mishti_17
ASR is here... 😳 Dhruv and Aakash.. 😲 Hope Khushi will convince Aakash to call Arnav.. And what problem is Dhruv in now?

mishti_17, part 2 would have answered some of your questions😊

But I left you with more questions 😃

I love to keep my readers in suspense, but I promise to clear up the past by part 3 - most of the past, anyway! Hope you like part 2!

- IS