Submerged! - ArShi FF:New note P.No 132

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InspiredSoul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: Ipoona
Inspired ... just got back ... Dog tired. Will write in the morning ... Intiguing to say the very minimal ... 😛

Ipoona, take your time! I know how busy you are. You still found time to come by and read, that's awesome! It means a lot to me! 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: SmitaCletus
What an intriguing story!!
U have managed to build up an excellent suspense. and I am loving it.😃

Thank you! 😊 Hope you like the next part too!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha

I loved the portrayal of Khushi, she is smart and innocent and that is a unique combo...me like she is not childish but playful...

I am impressed with all brothers ...

Thanks, ArshiH!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: sman
love this OS..

Thank you 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: Japonica
Wow just read the prologue, this promises to be a terrific read.
Thanks for the poem., it is beautiful.

Looking forward to catching up with the rest of the story.

Thank you, Japonica! 😊

Poem "The Iceberg" is not mine - it's written by Sir Charles G. D. Roberts.

I am using few lines from it at the beginning of each part, giving due credit to the author.

Will post the entire poem in a note towards the end. I loved this poem for the way it portrayed the journey of the iceberg - from the dark freezing glacier through the turbulent oceans to the warm seas where it finally melts and becomes one with the sea. I will probably post a separate note on it.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: ranogill
very interesting...

Thank you! 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: Arshi.Sugi.IPK
Nice update interesting

Thank you! 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#128

interesting !!! so its dhruv.. arnav was waiting for him and he was attacked and brought to lucknow.. is it dhruv's own family behind this attack on him.. he asked khushi that he was to speak to arnav and he didn't wanted his dadi to know.. well interesting story.. do continue soon..

thanks for pm 😊