The Last Place On Earth/Arshi SS/ LINK thread 2 on Pg 148

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Pdrover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#651

Awesome update, felt like Real

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joviha

@Joarshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#652

superb...i loved it...
this story is something different...
full of nature...forest...animals...thrilling...and also our arnav and khushi...
i loving them in here...now arnav openly declared he won't backstep from this relation...waiting for nxt...

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hararnav

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Posted: 11 years ago

#653

its so thrilling readin the whole experience ...

and at end of day arnav had to bring the past n ruin it...

khushi is right,,, its too many years too late arnav...

why did he hav to wait so long... wht if khushi didnt come to the same forest... will he try to locate her and mend things?? i dont think so..

waiting for khushi to ask him the same question

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Aaradhaya1688

@aaradhaya1688

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#654

loved it
thanks for the pm

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suji5

@suji5

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#655

awesome update
both Arnav and khushi are right on their path..
hope they will sort their differences soon

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oopppsss

@oopppsss

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#656

Nature and human emotions at their best...both beautifully sketched.So Arnav is going to di damage control now...wow...looking forward to next update

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Akorshi Oroni

@Akorshi

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#657

superb update...

khushi was so excited and happy in the journey...

arnav's old love started retrieve...

oh in being emotion they kissed and few close intimate moment...

khushi jerked him up...

reminded him his deed...

arnav not ready to let khushi go this time...

where arnav taking khushi?

update soon...

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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#658

oh wow tht was an amazing chap... the whole ride into the forest is so beautifully described...n the kisses...they were hot n demanding ;)

lovely update Sandhya!

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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#659

Wow, what an atmospheric chapter that was in the way it led the reader into the mysteries and magic of the jungle and its inhabitants. That was truly superb.

This is clearly not just a story backed up with some serious research, but also beautifully edited and put together and crafted.

All 4 updates have so far used the jungle in terms of its sheer physical presence with its dangers, its rhythms and the temptations it offers to the good and the evil as the engine to drive the main plot, that of Khushi and Arnav's relationship with the poaching incidents in the background, without any seams or creases.

Khushi is deceiving herself if she thinks she can keep the feelings she has for him reigned in. Am lovin it!: 😃

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mattshia

@mattshia

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#660

Just started to read this story, yet to finish the first chapter...but I do need to say ... it's awesome !!!! 👍🏼
A special thanks for making Corbet National Park to be the background..never been there ..but it came alive thru Corbet's writings...who is one of my most favorite authors 😊