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pmehra300

@pmehra300

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Posted: 11 years ago

#631

Mind blowing update
Loved it

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shijinareneesh

@shijinareneesh

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#632

This is fabulous...the ride through the forest n evrything u described s awsme...now waiting for their love story to begin ...may i say again???...

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#633

Sandhya your whole description of the wildlife park was so beautifully written ...

the whole incident of the carcass being devoured by the ravenous tiger was so so real ...

it felt that it was happening right in front of us ... can imagine Khushi's excitement at having

been witness to this spectacular sight ...

The chemistry between the two is sizzling hot ...

but Arnav needs to do much more than a few kisses and fondling to win Khushi back ...

he needs to prove to her that he is not going to run away like he had ten years ago ...

Thank you Sandhya ... loved it ...

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mayabhi

@mayabhi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#634

Awesome update.. I loved the description of the trip thru the jungle. And khushis reactions

Edited by mayabhi - 11 years ago

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smric

@smric

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#635

As amazing as you can get..really thrilling jungle visit..made me bite my nails when that tiger looked into khushi's eyes..the description was awesome..you take us there when you are describing something. And the kiss; wow sandhya only you can pull it out such intensely..intimacy anger revenge craving realization everything in just small scene..you are awesome.

Thank you for the pm.

Loved the update.⭐️

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Russell

@russelskhushi

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#636

what an update!!!
sandhya ...1st u start with beautifully describing the nature which u do in ur words so amazingly...
then Arnav comes with this unexpected ''gift''...and the ride to the tiger..wow

khushi...wow...i wonder was the cat more wild or her!! she really blowed him ..lolz
Arnav ..loved his attitude ;'''he did mistakes...but his on a mission to make them right now..

AWESOME UPDATE... (y)

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Amanram

@Amanram

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#637

awesome update. WE have now got to the crux of the matter - confronting their past. I wish khushi had listened, it is what she needs really an explanation - no matter how she is hurting

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#638

That was a beautiful chapter...really loved to read their safri adventure...I love this bold Arnav.
So Arnav pushed her and nosw wants her back.

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Archna

@archnahardik123

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#639

It is a brilliant chapter.

Your description of the jungle is marvellous. It's like I am there too with them and watching those elephant crossing road, tiger with his pray and they way he looked towards Khushi was beautiful.

It feels like I should be there and feel those beautiful trees and birds.

At last he admit that he made mistake by letting her go all those years ago. Their kiss was breathtakingly beautiful. I can't believe arnav did this.

But here Khushi is hurt too much and he has to work hard to get her back. Give him tough time Khushi. And don't give up so soon.

I loved the update a lot. Looking forward to read more of this amazing story.

Thanks for the pm.

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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Posted: 11 years ago

#640

wow wow wow wow wow 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

another beautiful update

Arnav made khushi's day by showing her the tiger. I was awesoe that she was ectastic and kiss Arnav in return of a huge favor.

I feel a little bad for Arnav, he is still in love with khushi but khushi is so hurt that she doesn't looks like forgiving him that easily. Arnav would have to work hard to woo back his lady.

I enjoyed a lot reading Arnav thoughts on their way back to home, especially the sentence that he wants to travell with her to the end of the world together, forever.

Its been a long time too and i think khushi isn't commited to any relationship. If that is so this will mean she still harbors some feeling for Arnav, that would be great if it happens.

Love the you beautifully penned their safari trip, i could picture myself riding with them. the tiger scene was amazing. I bet it would be one of the wonderful moments of life.

very well written and fabolous update.

Waiting for the teaser of the next chapter.

P. S. Congratualtions on completing on 100 pages

Edited by Javeria3991 - 11 years ago