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Anupama

@Anupama.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#471

^ and your love for the story makes us happy, Arjuhisis. Don't think we don't notice you going through all the comments. You'll get a reward. ;) Maybe a preview. ;)

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pakpearl

@pakpearl

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#472

Wow..

Beautiful song selection...

Interest element is increasing immensely as the story proceeds..

I enjoyed the update so much that now I can't wait for the next update...

Hoping to see Khushi's self respect intact,I m hoping to see some dhamakedaar Arhi scenes...

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Sanghamitra Roy

@Smrikta992

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#473

Lovd it..
So arnav broke her heart before..
Its amazing..

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saschades

@saschades

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#474

awesome update!! thanks for pm x

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#475

Originally posted by: Anupama.
^ and your love for the story makes us happy, Arjuhisis. Don't think we don't notice you going through all the comments. You'll get a reward. ;) Maybe a preview. ;)

aah I just cant stop myself from knowing what the readers think about the story/the latest update and about the super awesome combo of writers - I don't know about others but IAM IN LOVE WITH IT

a preview - oh GOSH, if that happens, then I would consider myself blessed girls

priya

Edited by Arjuhisis - 11 years ago

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#476

This chapter left me uninspired.

Khushi is supposed to be a trained researcher so one can assume she is aware of the dangers of the jungle. She has previously been shown to be aware of the current poaching problem in this jungle. Given this background, I cannot understand her actions in leaving the jeep and wandering away. There is no further clarification in the update itself.

Hence I find myself unable to identify with her actions during the ride and later. Situation seems forced into the plot.

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neha2013g

@neha2013g

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#477

awesome story... loved it 😊

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Sarikaa97

@Sarikaa97

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#478

That was amazing!! You have all the reason to continue writing :)
Looking forward to it!!

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Mirabell

@Mirabell

Navigator

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#479

Originally posted by: segad
This chapter left me uninspired.
Khushi is supposed to be a trained researcher so one can assume she is aware of the dangers of the jungle. She has previously been shown to be aware of the current poaching problem in this jungle. Given this background, I cannot understand her actions in leaving the jeep and wandering away. There is no further clarification in the update itself.

Hence I find myself unable to identify with her actions during the ride and later. Situation seems forced into the plot.

You raise a good point. Khushi is a trained researcher who is fully aware of the dangers here.. and yes, rationally and logically she SHOULD NOT be following Arnav into the forest when he expressly stated that she should stay in the jeep. Here is my take on her choice:

First - she is a curious person [which in my opinion is what drives any research - curiosity] and that curiosity is what takes her away from that jeep.. to investigate.. so to expect a curious researcher to sit in the jeep while a lot of ACTION is going on ... would not be possible [certainly not for me].

Second - While the details of their past are still unknown to us as readers, we DO know that they HAVE a past.. and if that past is as emotionally embroiled as the updates have indicated thus far, then expecting her to sit while Arnav goes off into this action-filled scene is also not possible [for me].

Third - while this may sound childish, some of us are more likely to do things that we are asked not to do .. especially when commanded.. and here while Khushi's behavior tat-amounts to being childish, it is still plausible to me...

I liked your post.. it made me question and revisit the chapter.. so I post my response.. This is in no way challenging your opinion.. just sharing mine.. :)

--MB

Edited by Mirabell - 11 years ago