The SEVEN SINS...A COLLAB OF sandhir OS's COMPLETED! - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
#91
Hey there!
I wasn't aware of this OS and just now I read all your updates together!!
Great!!

All your updates are amazing fun!
Waiting now, for the last! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
i have read all ur parts.. and i must say... it is juusssttt awwweeessuuummm... i loved ur story.. desperately waiting for the 7th sin... update soon... lovvedd it👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
Hey preetika...lovely update dear!!!😳
Sandhir r meant for eachother,come what may😊
i liked this update!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
Awesome... when are you updating pride? Continue soon xxx
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
This is soo amazing I just loved it... Waiting for the last sin...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PSsstt...
Helllo there ladies ...

this is the last installment of the sins ... *dramatically wipes of tears*😭😭
the response i got was fantastic... 😳

thats why i ev decided to make subparts of PRIDE !
*gives the devil smile*


sorry for the delay !


So!

Presenting to you ... PART A)

PRIDE!!
(Also known as Vanity... Excessive beliefs in ones own possessions and ability to attract others)

SANYUKTA looked into the mirror , applying a thick line of kohl...

She sighed!
Looking beautiful , like never... She was hell uncomfortable in the navy blue ghaghra choli...

'What rubbish' she muttered to herself while fussing with her backless choli supported only by 2 very thin , 'so called' , 'invisible' strings...

She thought she heard some noise and looked around ,
NO ONE ..

She got back to work again...
The next moment a figure jumped in ... She saw the reflection in the mirror ... Her eyes widened and her lips were in the shape of a perfect oval...

'Aise kya dekh rahi ho?? I know I look sexy '

'RANDHIIIR '!!

' yeah that's my name ! ' he smirked...

'What the hell are you doing here??!?'

' I thought you might need some help with that Dori of yours...' He said approaching her like a tiger cornering its prey...

' no thanks ' she said while backing off...
' parth haina ,.. He will help me '

His expressions changed...he was angry in a matter of seconds...
He grabbed her arm and pinned it behind her,,,.

'WHAT DID YOU JUST SAY" he thundered...

'I ,... Ummm...'

' I ASKED WHAT THE HELL DID YOU JUST SAY?!?!" He inquired pushing her towards the wall...tightening his grip...

'I said that KAUSTUKI will help me in need'

'Hmm ... Better!" He chuckled releasing her from his iron grip...

' wow farzi... U are looking Like a girl! ' he teased her...

'That's all you can say ?!? ' she asked ,, irritated by his smugness and pushed him away,,,
' I m sure parth must have something better to say' she teased him,..

' WAT THE HELL SANYUKTA!!" 'STOP this parth puran or I swear I am personally going to pack his bags and dump him in the next bus to roorkee..." He said angrily...

'' mmm... Randhir ,, I can smell something burning ,,.. Is it you??"

'' YES! YES OFCOURSE ITS ME! AND I AM NOT AT ALL ASHAMED OF IT...
IT MUST BE FUN FOR YOU BUT YOU HAV NO GODAMN IDEA HOW IT FEELS WHEN I IMAGINE YOU WITH THAT EXTREMELY IDIOTIC BEST FRIEND OF MINE ... YOU WONT EVER UNDERSTAND!"

His sudden outburst surprised her... She immediately turned back...
His eyes were moist and his expression's were like that of a 5 year old kid whose toys were being eyed by a neighbour kid...

Stretching on her toes she wiped his tears... While he wiped hers...

' M so so sorry baby ,,, I was joking '' she said...

''Its not funny every time sanyukta'' he said kissing her hands...

''PROMISE ME THAT YOU WILL NEVER EVER LEAVE ME ,..I WONTBE ABLE TO HANDLE IT...I JUST HAVE YOU AND LOLLIPOP IN MY LIFE ... '' said randhir ...

(Yeah ,, lollipop was parths pet name...given by randhir ... Considering how sweet he was... They were best friends,..more like brothers... While parth was like randhirs mom... Always worrying for him and telling him what to do and what not to...)

''I PROMISE RANDHIR '' she wept ,,. ' I am sorry ,..please forgive me ,..'' She said innocently...

''Its okay sweetheart,,.. Bdw did i mention how breathtakingly beautiful my wife is looking right now??" He said ,, wiping her tears and kissing her forehead,,,,

( yeah WIFE ,,, sanyukta was officially sanyukta randhir singh shekhawat since 10 days ,... It was their reception party...)

' well you did not mention it but I can read your face'' she said...

''Hmmm not bad farzi ...'' He said while lowering his head down,, aiming for her lips ...

Sanyukta was about to give in when her eyes fell upon the clock...
She immediately pushed him away ,..

'WTH'

'Hato RANDHIR ,,,, time dekho !! I have to get ready ... Oh god abhi to Baal bhi banane baki hai... shit!!"

' What yaar farzi !!! I haven't kissed you since yesterday !! Cmon ,,, just one !! Pleeeaaassseee...'' He said innocently..

" NO!! " she faked anger ,,, while frantically donning her earings and bangles ...


' DAMN ... thought randhir ... shes so stubborn ... but she tends to be less pig headed when shes trapped in my arms ... '

randhir smirked ... he knew exactly what had to be done ...


he went and stood behind her ... shoved her hair aside and started undoing her dori... while purposely carresing her back ...

" Randhir plzzz! " she moaned..

by now he had placed wet kisses all over her back ...

" randhir ! " she gasped ...

he sensed the change in her behaviour ...

he turned her around and pulled her hair ... giving him full access to her neck ... sanyukta melted into him ... her knees gave away ... he immediately picked her up and proceeded towards the bed ... he threw his sherwani and helped her get out of her ghaghra ...


suddenly there was frantic tap on the door..

" SANYUKTA"!! came parths voice from across it ...


" FCUK U " randhir shouted in his mind ... he had mentally shooted him 100 times...


" SANYUKTA ... OPEN THE DOOR !!! "

sanyukta immediately freed herself from randhirs grip /...

she was waiting for her breathing to get normal ...

while randhir whispered in her ear .. " Dont reply ... he will go away .. come back na .. pleeease !!"

" NO" she relied sternly ...


" SANYUKTA !!!!! BAHOT GADBAD HO GAYI HAI ... OPEN THE DOOR !! "


" IS EVERY THING OKAY .. M BREAKING THE DOOR NOW "


" no no ! i am here .. what happened parth ? " she asked ...

" sanyukta .. RANDHIR ! he is not in his room ! his phone is on the table ! i literally searched for him everywhere ! he is such an ass ! DO you know where he is ??


Randhir was trying to control his laughter ...

he signalled sanyukta to say no

' NO parth ... where is he ?"


" i dont know yaar ! HE is literally a big dumbass ...

ankit thinks he got fed up of you in just 10 days and ran away to save his life "

randhir was laughing hard ...

" i know this cannot be true but if it is i promise you i am going to chop that asshead into pieces ... " continued parth ...

"LOllipop" randhir was laughing ...


"RANDHIIIR !!!!! " screamed parth ..


"aur nahi to kya yoyo hoga " sanyukta gave him a slap playfully !

" OH GOD randhir ! beep beep beep ... he showered him with abuses ... U dont what a havoc ankit had created... pardon me sanyukta but you brother is such a pain in the butt ! He was about to call the police when yoyo made him eat some sleeping pills and dumped him in the storeroom !


" HAHAHAHAHAHA"


" YOu think this is funny randhir ! stop laughing and come out !" scolded parth ...


just then he got an idea ...

" uhmm randhir .. y are you soo godamn horny all the time ... werent you telling me that you had the time of your life in the bachelors party ... " lied parth ...


hahah randhir beta ,.. tu to gaya ...

lying he fled from the place to control the situation down ...


SANYUKTA : what did he say ?

RAndhir : areeey he is lying !!!

SANYUKTA : RANDHIR SINGH SHEKHAWAT ... U R A DEAD MAN NOW !

randhir : reaalyy ... !

he said as he dodged a pillow ...

sanyukta: Get out you idiot ...

lollipop ... m not going to leave you ! PRomised randhir ...


thats enough for this update !

my fingers are paining ... 😛


lol ...

PRECAP : Parth doing sit ups :P

PS : dont forget to drop back a comment ! 😉

LOVE ,

PREETIKA ! 😳



Edited by Preetika-Sinha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
this was different from the odr parts! i loved it as always! i love the parth in your stories...part B kab update karoge?? waiting!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
awesome.. Funny too.. Love it.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
Awesome yaar tu kitni acchi likti ho yaar.KAHA se aata hai yeh sab ideas tumhe???
Update as soon as possible and dont forget to PM me ha
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Posted: 11 years ago
Preetika ... Awesome yaar... I loved this update... The best update so far... Seriously.. Cont soon... Will be waiting for the next update... Pm karna mat bhulna...

Love
Ayesha...

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