The SEVEN SINS...A COLLAB OF sandhir OS's COMPLETED! - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
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" Those Who Really love you don't mean to hurt you ,, and if they do, you cant see it in their eyes but it hurts them too"
-- HOLLY BLAKE!
HI PEEPS !
Guess What !
its me again 😛
i know ,, am early ! 😛

the above quote perfectly represents our SANDHIR !😳
the next SIN is based on this ,,, ill try to convey the same meaning through it !

i know ENVY was ,, quality wise ,, not up to the mark... i wrote that in a hurry... ill try to make it better this time...
hope you find this one worth your comment ! ☺️

so presenting to you...


WRATH!!
(Wrath is wanting to hurt someone. It is not anger, which is normal and is really frustration and rebellion at being powerless. )

It was the annual fest at F.I.T.E. ...

Every one was supposed to take part... But not our RANDHIR!
he wouldn't oblige!

he thought drama , dance , music was only for useless brains !
that's why he had taken a 10 day leave during the preps and went home...

Meanwhile in his absence...

Parth and Sanyukta had been paired up for the lead roles in a romantic play ...

randhir had gone without ever informing anyone except jiggi ...

Sanyukta, initially was very very happy greeting the news...
but as the days passed...

the air around her had changed,...
she was becoming restless by the minute and was loosing concentration...

something definitely was missing ... and she,, being so stubborn was not ready to accept the fact that it was RANDHIR !

'Its just because of the play ... just because of the play ' she kept on chanting in her mind ...!

AFTER 10 DAYS !

It was the final practice !

Randhir was back...and these 10 days were hell for him...
the way how his mini vacs went ... and the way he had planned them to pass were totally the opposite...

he missed his FARZI/... missed fighting with her .../ missed taunting her .../ missed being taunted by her ...

as soon as he entered the college... his eyes were only searching one person ... the girl who had created a havoc in his life ... who had the guts to challenge him ... and had unknowingly made him feel alive again...

he went every where ...
the whole college was decorated and it was such a rush ...

finally he entered the MECH LAB ...

it was dark in there and only two people were to be seen ...
Mr LOLLIPOP and "SANYUKTA"!

he was mesmerized ... she was soo beautiful ... so godamn pretty ... he was seeing her after 10 days and it seemed as 10 years ..
but as he saw parth ...
'what the hell was going on ' ! he thought ...

just as he was about to speak something ...

parth bend down on one knee ,, took her hands in his and said ...

Parth : Sanyukta ! i never thought such a day would come ,,, that i would be saying this again to some girl but ...

I Love You For Not
What You Are
But What I Become
When I Am There With You.
SO Be With Me Forever...

will you ? he asked as he kissed her hand ...


Randhir's heart skipped a beat ... he realized he had been holding his breath and waiting for her to answer ...

" YES" ...

He froze...
The bag fell from his hand ,..

Everyone turned back to look at the origin of the sound ,,,
As Her eyes met his ,..
She thought it was a dream.,,
She was seeing him after 10 days , her lips curled into a smile ...

'Randhir' she spoke softly...

The next moment he stormed out of the room...
His eyes were blood red ...
His heart was not pumping blood.. His brain had stopped responding...

He just wanted to dissapear somewhere...

Meanwhile ,,. MECH LAB :

Kaustuki : Great performance sanyu!
And parth! You were fantabulous...

Everyone was applauding and congratulating her ...but she was lost...


Her mind was just rewinding and playing the part when RANDHIR was standing near the gate staring her...

Sanyukta: I need to go...
and she sprinted off to find him...

She went almost everywhere ,,.. But was unable to locate him...
She was almost desperate to have a single look of him...

At last , she went to the library... It was pitch dark ...but there he was,... Looking ever so handsome ...
Sitting on the window,,gazing at the moon ...

'Very unnatural of him' she thought !

She went close to him and whispered..

' why didnt you wait for me? I was so tensed! You idiot... This is how you meet me after 10 long days!!"

RANDHIR : don't you dare touch me... And don't even force me say anything... So just go away...

She was surprised and hurt , both, by the hostility in his voice...
She almost flinched in response...

Sanyukta : RANDHIR ... I don't know what are you talking about,... What's the matter?

RANDHIR: what's the matter? ! Hahahahaha... Nice agarwal ,.. Nice ,... Mai 10 din kya chala gaya... Tumhari love story chalu ho gayi...
I knew ...I knew,..mujhe tum jaisi ladki pe kabhi bharosa nahi Karna chahiye tha... I always knew u are good for nothing !
Tum jaisi ladkiya Sirf ladko KO fasane ke intention se college ati ho... And you sanyukta agarwal ... You have no CHARACTER!
I wish to god ,, I had never met you in the first place,..

Sanyukta was hurt beyond words... Tears started flowing involuntarily...

RANDHIR: ha ha ab to tumhe Rona hi tha...mai ache se janta hu tum jaisi ladkiyo KO...apne father ...

Sanyukta: ENOUGH RANDHIR... MAI CHUP HU ISKA MATLAB YA NAHI HAI KI TUM KUCH BHI BAKTE JAOGE!

He had crossed his limits...

RANDHIR : nahi to ? Kya karogi tum? Apne bf KO complain karogi?
Ha jao kar do...
Waise mai ache se janta hu ki tum jaisi ladkiyo KO control kaise karte hai...

Saying this he pushed her to the nearest wall and started kissing her,...
She struggled... A lot...
He had her totally pinned beneath her...
But she was wailing ,.. And finally gave him a shove...

He stumbled back... His shoulder got cut and immediately started bleeding...

Sanyukta : how dare you ,, you jerk!
And that's when she saw him wincing in pain...

She ran towards him... ''M so sorry randhir''

RANDHIR : just stay away from me... And he gave her a push...

She tripped on a machine, sprained her ankle and fell down ...

He came running...
RANDHIR : m so so sorry Farzi... Maine dekha nahi...

''Whack'' she hit him right across his cheeks,...

Sanyukta : tumhe bahot acha lagta haina...hurting me and then apologizing,..?
Mera hi dimag kharab tha Jo mai pata nahi kya kya soch baithi ...
I missed you these 10 days,.. I was so uncomfortable playing the love scene with parth, I actually used to imagine you instead of parth... And you... You will always remain that same RANDHIR singh shekhawat... No no ,,, its my mistake ... I expected a lot from you...
I'll do what you said ... I'll stay away from your life...
Enjoy Mr shekhawat...!!

Randhirs face was white! PLAY ! he thought... What had he done... He did the unforgivable this time

Saying that she got up and tried to move ,...but her leg was bugging her so bad...

Immediately he picked her up in his arms...

Sanyukta : just leave me ,.. Go away... Leave me ,,I hate you RANDHIR... I just hate you...

RANDHIR: stop moving,.. I don't want you to hurt yourself..idiot..

Sanyukta: just get lost...

RANDHIR : you know I won't ... Ever!

Saying this he started moving towards the medical room..
Sanyukta could feel his discomfort because of his bleeding shoulder.. She tore her duppatta and tied the wound...

She could see him smiling...

Sanyukta : don't think I did this because I love you...

RANDHIR : of course ,.. I hate you too farzi ...!

They both knew what they meant to each other... There was no need to communicate anymore ...
Their eyes said it all...


""I HATE YOU ,,BUT I LOVE YOU ...
SO KISS ME BEFORE I KILL YOU''!!

That's it people...
Phew .. It was long yar!

So please ... I need long comments!😛


Love ,
Preetika <3





Edited by Preetika-Sinha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
For 5th sin - Love U for that update🤗

For 6th Sin - Aargghh😕
U left it on the cliffhanger!!!
i wanted to knw RD's reaction!!
Edited by Piya1702 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
omg...randhir gonna get hurt...plz update next asap...i cant wait
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
Omg omg omg...ranfhir its only play not reality

Don't missunderstood it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
wowww preetika
a typical sandhir
their fights always get physical ;)
nd d last line/
'i hate u bt i luv u
so kiss me b4 i kill u'
uff dese lines stole my heart dear
too gud
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: myrahh

wowww preetika
a typical sandhir
their fights always get physical ;)
nd d last line/
'i hate u bt i luv u
so kiss me b4 i kill u'
uff dese lines stole my heart dear
too gud


Aha.. Thank a tonne ! I'm glad u liked it...

Keep reading,
Preetika<3😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
I'm just speechless.U should have been in shq's creative team .U r just Fabulous and wrath was just awesome...😆 continue writing like this 😉
Just loved it 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
now i read full part awsme ya hate + love romantic yar i love it
DamselinDistres thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: athena4

I'm just speechless.U should have been in shq's creative team .U r just Fabulous and wrath was just awesome...😆 continue writing like this 😉

Just loved it 😳


Thank you! 😆
That's one post I would love to have! 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
Omg that was sooo good !!!! Man can't wait for the last part

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