The SEVEN SINS...A COLLAB OF sandhir OS's COMPLETED!

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Hey ...

Preetika here... 😉
So a random thought just crossed my mind and I decided to give it shape...

Well ,, about the title ,.., I'll try and stick to it,..so happy reading ...


1st SIN : GREED !!( wanting too much of something)

Parth : jiggi,... I read somewhere that people are considered to be in love only when they commit the seven deadly sins!!

JIGGI : eh sachme parth bhai ???? Maine to nahi kiye!!
E ab kya hoga ,... Kaustuki KO batana padega... Bla bla ...

RANDHIR was trying to ignore their talk ..,, ' useful for nothing, idiots'. His mind quoted for him .!

Parth received sanyuktas call ,...

PARTH: hey sanyukta !! Sup?

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Ya ...

Bdw tomorrows VALENTINES DAY!!
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what are your plans ???
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What ?!?! You ought to be kidding man !!
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What do you mean you don't have a date !


Actually even I don't have one...

THAT MADE RANDHIR ALERT...HE JERKED UP...! '''what the hell is this sugar factory up to ''
He mused...

The next moment his worst fear came true ,..


Parth : so will you do me the extraordinary honour of being my date?!!

Another second ,, and his phone wasnt in his hands and to top that his collar was in Randhirs hand!

'' DONT YOU DARE KASHYAP ... SHES MINE ... TOTALLY MINE !! I OWN HER ,...STAY AWAY FROM HER ...ONLY I HAVE THE EXCLUSIVE RIGHT ON HER !!! ''
Shrieked RANDHIR!

And stormed out of the room!!

Parth just took out a diary and striked out GREED from the page,,...


''Not bad shekhawat! ''
He had a smile plastered on his face!

So that was it! The first sin ...

I'll upload GLUTTONY tomorrow only if you guys like this one...

Any type of comment is welcome...criticism is entertained and praises are obviously loved...😳

Love,
Peetika!

Part 1 - above 😛
Part 2 - page 3
Part 3 - page 7 😉
PART 4 - page 8 😊
Part 5 - page 11😆
PART 6 - page 12 😉
PART 7 (PART A ) - page 15😆
( part B) - page 17
(PART c) - PG 19
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey preetika,
nice idea.
go on and pm me when u update.
il send u a buddy request
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Posted: 11 years ago
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oho..7sins..i cant wait... parth is too good yaa..so understanding n our hero is greedy for his girl..totally awsome.. cant wait for next 6 sins...
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its like the dream story 4 next valentine 😆
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Originally posted by: sniggybabes

hey preetika,

nice idea.
go on and pm me when u update.
il send u a buddy request


Sureee😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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AMAZING
New idea.
Parth playing a good role
Please continue soon and pm me when you update.
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Please guys buddy me if you want pm,s 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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jealous randhir is always a treat 4 sandhir fans
luvd it
do continue
pm me wen u do pls
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb start love to read more...!!!!!!!😳
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Whoaaa ... write more asap !!!!😛

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