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Na1na

@Na1na

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#111

This is so good!
Romantic and funny!!
And I loved the bond you've shown between Randhir and Parth!
Wish we could see something like this in the show sometime.

Edited by Na1na - 11 years ago

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Preetika

@DamselinDistres

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: asyshi
Hey! I didnt gt d pm.. anyways..
3 updates! Read dem all together.. Cnt believe it I missed 3 updates!!
Bt omg! Dey were soo beautiful
Luvd dem to d core.. excellect work sweety :))

M sorrier than you think dear.., my mistake ,... Please buddy me if you haven't... I'll surely pm you the next update.,.

P.s. thank you !

Feeling guilty

preetika😭

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Harita

@Harita1309

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#113

Preetika...🥳 i jus can't thank u enough for sending me a pm of dis astounding work🤗...firstly hats off for such an amazing idea👏
n then d humor in each part🤣..i m jus speechless😕
how did u write sooo well...great job honey👍🏼
lemme analyze abt each part😈 now it takes a hell lot of time😆
Part 1 : hey wait...before telling abt part 1,one more hat off for you👍🏼
looks like all my hats will be gone when i end this review😕
lol u portrayed Randhir's character sooo well, u know his smugness n "i m d best n rank no.1" attitude👏...n his words "shezz mine"...i was on cloud 9 baby
Part 2 : must tell you dis is super hilarious🤣...sanyukta's order in d sweet shop made me burst out laughing😆...n Randhir's cmnts lol..u r d best in portraying his role👍🏼...n omg sanyu has diabetes😕
ohh godd dis girl always gets in trouble😡..whoa wts happening😉
Part 3 : dis is sooo hot😳...ufff who called😡...i luvd d sweet Randhir thing,u know licking her fingers n all☺️...n Parth,omg hezz really annoying n funny ofcourse😳
Part 4 : dis is a really emotional one😭...Randhir's crying😒
my heart sank at dat sentence😔...n Parth glad hezz there😳
but thank god he realized how stupid n petty he was when he fixed marriage😳..ab kya hoga😕
Part 5 : this part is my favourite😃...i luved dis part,esp d envy game😆..actually u never failed to impart humor into these works👏
Kaustuki..yaar sanyukta owes u for dat ingenious bet of urs😆
seriously how thoughtful of u my dear👍🏼...sanyukta in a tank top n shorts🤣 n "green" part i was truly rolling on floor girl🤣
n Randhir's confrontation..i liked it a lot😃 esp sanyukta's care free answers n attitude😆...n d party omg! mind blowing idea Preetika👏
i mean sanyukta's answers were superb n Randhir's answers were top notch😆.."parth has sanyukta"...i m dead🤢
Part 6 : this part is quite violent😉...i must say..Randhir,dufford its a play dnt over react😡...how ever i liked it😆..n sanyukta"s part was funny in d end🤣..omg they kinda confessed😳
Part 7 : this part in d start was tooo hot☺️ n was tooo hilarious as d story advanced😆...i mean Randhir cursing Parth was too funny👏
n Parth's vain outside d door🤣...i jus can't believe Ankit said dat😆 n YoYo drugged him🤣...dis is sooo very funny👍🏼 i jus luved it
plz plz plz cntinue soon😳
Love,
Harita❤️

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Preetika

@DamselinDistres

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: Harita1309
Preetika...🥳 i jus can't thank u enough for sending me a pm of dis astounding work🤗...firstly hats off for such an amazing idea👏
n then d humor in each part🤣..i m jus speechless😕
how did u write sooo well...great job honey👍🏼
lemme analyze abt each part😈 now it takes a hell lot of time😆
Part 1 : hey wait...before telling abt part 1,one more hat off for you👍🏼
looks like all my hats will be gone when i end this review😕
lol u portrayed Randhir's character sooo well, u know his smugness n "i m d best n rank no.1" attitude👏...n his words "shezz mine"...i was on cloud 9 baby
Part 2 : must tell you dis is super hilarious🤣...sanyukta's order in d sweet shop made me burst out laughing😆...n Randhir's cmnts lol..u r d best in portraying his role👍🏼...n omg sanyu has diabetes😕
ohh godd dis girl always gets in trouble😡..whoa wts happening😉
Part 3 : dis is sooo hot😳...ufff who called😡...i luvd d sweet Randhir thing,u know licking her fingers n all☺️...n Parth,omg hezz really annoying n funny ofcourse😳
Part 4 : dis is a really emotional one😭...Randhir's crying😒
my heart sank at dat sentence😔...n Parth glad hezz there😳
but thank god he realized how stupid n petty he was when he fixed marriage😳..ab kya hoga😕
Part 5 : this part is my favourite😃...i luved dis part,esp d envy game😆..actually u never failed to impart humor into these works👏
Kaustuki..yaar sanyukta owes u for dat ingenious bet of urs😆
seriously how thoughtful of u my dear👍🏼...sanyukta in a tank top n shorts🤣 n "green" part i was truly rolling on floor girl🤣
n Randhir's confrontation..i liked it a lot😃 esp sanyukta's care free answers n attitude😆...n d party omg! mind blowing idea Preetika👏
i mean sanyukta's answers were superb n Randhir's answers were top notch😆.."parth has sanyukta"...i m dead🤢
Part 6 : this part is quite violent😉...i must say..Randhir,dufford its a play dnt over react😡...how ever i liked it😆..n sanyukta"s part was funny in d end🤣..omg they kinda confessed😳
Part 7 : this part in d start was tooo hot☺️ n was tooo hilarious as d story advanced😆...i mean Randhir cursing Parth was too funny👏
n Parth's vain outside d door🤣...i jus can't believe Ankit said dat😆 n YoYo drugged him🤣...dis is sooo very funny👍🏼 i jus luved it
plz plz plz cntinue soon😳
Love,
Harita❤️
Holy smokes!!
Harita!!

Itni zada tareef !
*faints*

* wakes up after 2 days*

Love you so much ... I am speechless...
Dunno what to say ...

Feel like hugging you ,..

Wipes of khushi ke tears ...

Keep reading yar ...
Ur such a sweetheart!
Hugs and lots of kisses...

Love,
Preetika 😳

Edited by Preetika-Sinha - 11 years ago

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Piya1702

@Piya1702

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#115

This is shooo cute😳
update soon😊

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Anisha Chowdhury

@chowanisha

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#116

omg it ws realy hilarious...the last part ws awsome...keep writing...

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Preetika

@DamselinDistres

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#117

🥳

M back again ! ;)

Tried to make it funny !

Here goes ,...

PRIDE - PART B )

"94 , 95, 96 , 97 , 98 , 99 , 50 , 51..." Randhir was counting,..

''ABEY!!" screamed poor parth,.. Who was caught hold of and had been given the punishment of doing sit ups for lying and ruining a prospective romantic moment,,,

Sanyukta chuckled..

" U said only till 100! '' parth groaned...

'' ha to 100 abhi aya nahi '' teased randhir ...

''Saale .. Oversmart mat ban ,..sanyukta you count ,... I know agar ye karega to puri shaam mujhe sit ups hi karne padenge..''

Sanyukta : okay! 1 , 100"!

''Haha! That's like my girl '' said parth... Standing up and wiping the sweat of his forehead...

RANDHIR was glaring sanyukta,.. Who just sticked out her tounge in response ,,..

'' huh , bunch of fussy engineers'' he muttered while proceeding towards the washroom to freshen up ,...

Parth and sanyukta 'hi-fived' ... This was their favorite pass time... Teasing RANDHIR... He was such an easy target !

There were still 20 minutes left for the function to begin,...

AFTER 20 MINS...

Randhir and sanyukta were sitting on the Dias ... It was like the typical Indian receptions...

Every one was very happy...
Even Ankit had regained consciousness , but was bumping into every second guest,...

Overall ,,,. The mood of the hall was of merriment,..

Except!

Our very own parth a.k.a. Mr lollipop...

His face had a frown ...

Yoyo : are parth puttar ... Tumhare chehre pe barah kyu bake hue hai ji ?
Are Ankit ki tension na lo,... Usko Maine phir se 3 goliya de Di hai.,,!!

Parth : (unaware of yoyo,, muttering to himself) reception ho raha hai,,..still they haven't committed the last sin,... Ab kya hoga yaar!!

Yoyo : sin !!? Ee ki hota hai ji ? PIN SUNA TIN SUNA PAR SIN TO NAHI SUNA JI ...chalo koi nahi.,, Har samasya (problem) ka ek hi solution hota hai,...

He said while taking hold of parths hand and dragging him towards the bar...
Parth : no no ,.. I don't drink yoyo...

Yoyo : are chalo toh! Experience hai mujhe!

Parth : no yoyo! I really don't drink ,.

Yoyo was frantically trying to pull him but alas ... Yoyo couldn't even move him an inch ,,,

He gave a last try... But in doing so ... Parth was so irritated that he pushed him reflex,,.

Yoyo landed in such a situation that the whole hall was in fits...
His head was inside the drum... While the drummers expressions were priceless...one moment he was playing and the next moment the drum had yoyo inside it,.. The drummer wasnt even able to interpret what had happened till yoyo s voice was audible ...

Yoyo : are yar ,.. Ee ki kar ditta parth puttar... Koi to bacha lo.,, puri ijjat ka faluda kar dita yaar,... FALUDA!!
An idea struck him...

Its the truth...only a person like yoyo sher singh has the capability to conceive ideas while being half inside a drum ...,
*hats off to Yo-Yo*

Randhir Had laughed so so hard... His stomach was aching ,,.
Sanyukta had never seen Him laugh this way ,,.. The whole time she was staring at him lovingly ...!!

Parth had apologized 1000 times ,..
After yoyo's rescue operation...
Everything was back to normal ...

Parth : yoyo yaar... M so so sorry!

Yoyo : koi nahi parth puttar ,..ye lo ... Faluda khao,..

This time parth took it immediately to avoid any Such consequences...,

Neither did he know...that it contained not only JUST faluda!!

Suddenly the lights were off... The whole hall was dark

Randhir: sanyukta!
He was frantically moving his hands on the next chair ,,,

The chair was empty!

I know , I know its a small update ...but the next one is going to be the last ...!!

P.S. dont forget to comment ...

Love,
Preetika!

Edited by Preetika-Sinha - 11 years ago

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Harita

@Harita1309

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#118

Yayayayay!!! I m first🥳...Preetika thank u sooo very much for updating today🤗
honey wat r u??? humor personified or wat😆...i mean how cud u manage to write so hilariously🤣...Parth doings sit ups😆..n Randhir "97,98,99,50,51..." lol..dat was very funny🤣
n awww Randhir's pout..sooo very sweet❤️
Yo yo in a drum🤣...dis is d most funniest part..arey yaa ur YoYo is wayy tooo funny than d real one👏...n whoa Parth d story still didn't come to an end,so dnt worry abt d last sin😉
n wats happening,lights off,no sanyukta😉...wats gonna happen huh😳
plz update ASAP...n next time increase d length😡
Love,
Harita❤️

Edited by Harita1309 - 11 years ago

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Preetika

@DamselinDistres

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: Harita1309
Yayayayay!!! I m first🥳...Preetika thank u sooo very much for updating today🤗
honey wat r u??? humor personified or wat😆...i mean how cud u manage to write so hilariously🤣...Parth doings sit ups😆..n Randhir "97,98,99,50,51..." lol..dat was very funny🤣
n awww Randhir's pout..sooo very sweet❤️
Yo yo in a drum🤣...dis is d most funniest part..arey yaa ur YoYo is wayy tooo funny than d real one👏...n whoa Parth d story still didn't come to an end,so dnt worry abt d last sin😉
n wats happening,lights off,no sanyukta😉...wats gonna happen huh😳
plz update ASAP...n next time increase d length😡
Love,
Harita❤️

Harita!

Thanks again sweetie...

I know this was a short update...

I promise the next one will be gigantic 😛

Till then ... Keep reading ,,,

Iots of hugs n kisses ,

Preetika 😳

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myrahh

@myrahh

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#120

arrey jaldi jaldi next part update
karo
dyng t knw wat happens next
nd since ye sandhir hai to kuch b hosakta hai
inka koi bharosa nai ;)
waitng 4 next
thnx 4 d pm