The SEVEN SINS...A COLLAB OF sandhir OS's COMPLETED! - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: asyshi

Omg! This is jus tooo gud!
I absolutely luvvvd it!!
Plz cont soon n Plzzz plzzz plzzz pm me wen u update nxt! I m eagerly waitin for it:)))))


Absolutely!

Keep reading!
Love,
Preetika😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
Olla peeps! 😉
I know ,.. I am late... But kya karu,.. These wretched competitives are taking a toll on me,...😭

Nevertheless I present to you the fifith sin ...⭐️

Mera gussa ispe mat nikalna ! 😲
Proof reading nahi ki...so apologies...🥱




ENVY - Jealousy; wanting to have what someone has.

It was just another day at F.I.T.E ,,, (or as our MCP thought) !!

7 a.m.

The scene in the boys hostel was quite familiar...
With jiggi sleeping , RANDHIR doing his push ups and sugar factory practicing tai-chi...

On the other hand ,,,

Girls hostel...

Kaustuki : Sanyu... I am sure RANDHIR likes you ...!

Sanyukta : kya Kuch bhi kaustu!
That MCP Hates women,,,.. Tu mujhe koi dusre gender ka samjhti hai ?!?

Kaustuki : Shut up sanyu ! Don't think I am joking!
He is obsessed with u !

Sanyukta : kaustu... !

Kaustuki : I bet ! Sanyu .. Agar jesa mai kahungi n waisa tum karogi,,, phir b RANDHIR jealous nahi hua to mai tumara assignment kar dungi
...
But if I win tume mera karna hoga!
Watsae sanyu?

Sanyukta (confidently) : soch le kaustu!
Kyu kudh ko double kaam karwane pe majbur kar rahi hai...

Kaustuki: shut up sanyu... Yes or no?

Sanyukta: deal done! ;)

9 a.m/ MECH LAB

RANDHIR: eeh jiggi! Kya kar raha hai !
Pure college KO uda dega kya?

Jiggi had just given birth to a blast ! XP

Jiggi : e sorry sorry RANDHIR bhai!

Amidst all the coughing ,,, another distant voice was getting clearer by the second...
The clicking of heels..,..

And what became visible,,, RANDHIR swore it was some kind of stupid yet beautiful joke or he was dreaming bullshit!!

Her hair ,, he noticed were straighter than usual,,curled slightly at their ends,.,
Her eyes,,, lined up with thick kohl, made them look bigger than before..

And what was she wearing???
Shorts ,, shorter than what normal 'shorts' are/should be...
And a green tank top with green wedges,,..

Wait , GREEN? their was one thing he knew about her ,,,if not anything else,,, that she hated,,, absolutely loathed that colour...

But nonetheless,... She was looking like an angel..,
A modern one maybe !

But., wait again,,,was she approaching him?
NO NO ,.. YES!
was she waving? YES!

N now here arms were wide open as if she was inviting him to hug the hell out of her,..

What a good idea ,, he mused,,,

His random thoughts came to a halt when the next second she buzzed past him and clinged to parth!

'PARTH' !!
DAMN THAT PERSON! WHY WAS HE SOO SWEET!!

'Oh , my punching bag,, how I miss you' Thought an angry ,, way angry RANDHIR...

Mollified, he turned back to introspect what the f was going on,..

Even with the heels on,, she was 7 to 8 inches shorter than him,,and that's why 'Mr lollipop' had picked her up so that he didn't have to bend...
His hands we're at her waist gripping her tightly!

RANDHIR was petrified ,.. His face was crimson by now,,,

''HAPPY BIRTHDAY PARTH!! '' she screamed,..

''BIRTHDAY''! SHIT yar,.. Phir to aaj ye isi se chipki rahegi!
Lollipop sala! Thought a dejected and unenthusiastic RANDHIR!

''Thank you sanyukta! ... Whoa!! You look ,... Ummm .. Amazing! '' came his saintly voice,,,

''But wait a sec ... U hate green''!! Came parth again..

' wah,.. Ise bhi ye pata hai! Congrats! ' was going in randhirs head...

'' I know parth,.. But aaj tumara birthday hai ,,, not mine,, n green is your fav color... So "!!
She said pulling his cheeks...

''How sweet of you,, thank you soo much!!'' :)

'' I have convinced every one to wear green ... Except... '' she turned to look at RANDHIR who was absorbing everything without even blinking...

''I have no control over this guy ,, '' she whispered into parths ear...
To which he burst out laughing,,,

''Let's go'' he suggested,,.

And out they went hand in hand,,.leaving behind a person who could have exploded any freaking second...

The whole day ,, she remained with parth,, and the boys in the college,,,were behaving as if they has seen a girl fr the first tym...

RANDHIR couldn't help but growl at each one of them!
God, this girl is such a bimbo .,, he thought while glaring at a junior,.. Giving him the scare of his life...!

It was the limit for him...
Rational thoughts had refused to manufacture in his brain and he was going insane by the minute,,,quite literally!!

Finally he found her alone for a second,..


He never misses any opportunity,, does he ? ;)


Dragged her to the empty library..

He leaned close to her and said

RANDHIR : I know what you are trying to do!

Sanyukta : oh really,.. Please do me the favour of telling me ,..

RANDHIR : you are trying to seduce him.,

Sanyukta was shocked!
But then suddenly she smiled,,,,

Sanyukta: u are disgusting ,, u know that? Bdw ... I am amazed to see how low you can get.,,.

RANDHIR : if not then kya hai ye sab!! THIS IS FITE AGARWAL ,, NOT SOME FASHION INSTITUTE!

SANYUKTA : WHY EXACTLY DO THINK I AM GOING TO TELL YOU!! get off me!

RANDHIR: u think you can attract his attention by wearing small clothes? Your wrong!!
You cannot force anybody to love you.,..

By now she was literally laughing,,,

Sanyukta : RANDHIR,, doctor KO dikhao!
And stop meddling in my matters ,..
I don't,...


' sanyu ! ' came kaustukis voice,..

Immediately RANDHIR backed off,,..

''Sanyu chal,,, parth canteen mai treat de raha hai,,,,
She turned to RANDHIR and said,...,
''Even you are invited ,... But only if you want to come'' she said and went out with sanyukta...


RANDHIR followed them ...

Canteen :

Sanyukta parth kaustuki yoyo jiggi and RANDHIR were sitting together...
The table full of snacks,.. Parths face was already smeared with cake...

Yoyo : chalo baccho... Aaj hum ek naya game khelenge...
The name of the game is THE ENVY GAME...
I will ask oll of you some questions jiska answer bina soche he Dena padega...

Starting with sanyukta !

So
The one thing you are jealous of and want what

Parth has - his attitude and calmness
Kaustuki has - her loyality
Randhir has- FIRST RANK :|
I have - your sense of humour
Jiggi has - a big heart!

Were sanyuktas reply


Now ,..
RANDHIR paaji!

Sanyukta has - a mom
Jiggi has - jalebi fafda
Parth has - sanyukta!

Gosh! Did he say that!?
10 eyes were staring him hard...

While he was just sitting there ...

For the first time in his life ,.. RANDHIR SINGH SHEKHAWAT was at loss of words,,,,, his cheeks red

While parth?!? U know what he must be doing !

His hands ,,under the table ,, scratching envy from the diary,,, with a triumphant smile on his perfect face..,,

'' just two more to go !!''

He grinned!




DONE!

Don't forget to comment!😛

Love
Preetika! 😳
Edited by Preetika-Sinha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
Nice update... But soo late... Update the next part ASAP... N pm me 4 sure...

Love
Ayesha...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
Nice update . Update next part asap... :) and aww.. Poor randhir...
Edited by athena4 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
Lol awesome game...


Poor randhir...sanyu ne to bechare ke hosh udda diye...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
this is so awsome...n after last 2 sins..u need to start another ff coz i love tour writing.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
Sorry sorry... I know ... I'll try and update wrath tonight only...,
Preetika... 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
nice update
poor randhir,akhir dil ki baat zubaan pe aa hi gai :p
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
awsme ... so interesting sins... nxt part upload na jaldhi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
hehehe just loved this part...
update ASAP 😳😆

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