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bellacoolio

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Posted: 11 years ago

#431

Wow! It was an update full of so many unspoken emotions. Beautifully written!

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ForArhi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#432

The story is building up...:)

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ipkrose

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Posted: 11 years ago

#433

Hi Jenny nice and emotional update.Sorry,past one month I was busy and I couldn't reply your update. Don't think i am not reading your stories. you are one of my favorite writer. I can't express how much i like all your stories because ( ham Jenny thodi hai jo hamara feelings aap ki tarah achi bathe likne ki [just like you exprees in your stories] aur gaane me express karneke liye) Thanks for your PM Jenny

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Aaradhaya1688

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Posted: 11 years ago

#434

lvd d update
thanks fnr d pm

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akankha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#435

another absolutely well written update...i cdnt hold back my tears when Arnav called Khushi just to hear her voice in his utter helpless misery...now cant wait for the next. im very much tensed!!

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orchids8888

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Posted: 11 years ago

#436

Thank you for the pm. Do continue sending me. 😃 I love your stories. You have the talent of coming up with beautiful love stories.👏

The update is fantastic.The best part of the update is conversation between Arnav and Khushi.⭐️

Poor Arnav lost his son.😭 Khushi will definitely help Arnav to overcome this loss.

Please update quickly. Waiting for Arnav-Khushi romance to begin.

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madhu1210

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Posted: 11 years ago

#437

superb!!⭐️

the broken Arnav aloofness and the way he miss his son😭.. but thought of khushi give him relief and the smile he had after recieving her sms in between his lecture too good...

khushi has been missing him and the way he came for saffron festival the way she was surprised to see him and the smile he got seeing the shining in her eyes..

Why the hell La is not ready to sign and making his life difficult

The way khushi hugged him too good...

looking forward.. i hope now she will listen to him

You have pen down each and every emotions superbly...👏

thanks for the PM

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kclovearshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#438

Res

~Unres~

Jenny, first of all I want to apologize for not commenting for the past couple of updates. I was meaning to since when we found out La was his wife. Back then I had guessed that she may be his wife but may be separated and that ame out to be true. After finding out he filed for divorce my thoughts back then were why was Aastha against Arnav moving on to another woman. In fact she should be happy that Arnav is getting another chance at life. And I was even mad at Khushi for not giving him a chance to speak, for thinking his marriage may have a sloghtest chance and that she didn't want to be the one breaking it. But Arnav & La's email conversations proved otherwise and Arnav's bitterness towards her made sure he will never get back to her. And La seemed like a witch taking revenge on him (she may stiil be :) ).

Lavanya came into the picture and when she cried for Arnav to come back, my perception changed. Khushi accidently finding about his little son, the Haloween flashbacks are too painful and my heart goes out to Arnav. And I feel the pain for La too for she is also a grieving mother? Now on the verge of losing her husband? I know things aren't actually what they seem like (which you have assured me :) ) so waiting to read what happened between Arnav & Lavanya & why did the baby boy die?

The conversation between Arnav & Khushi via texting was amazing, with only a few words you bridged their broken hearts. The scene that unfolded by the lake brought a smile, then the embrace, brought tears!! Glad Khushi is giving him another chance but I wonder how will Aastha take this!!

Wonderful updates Jenny and I love that somg from Aandhi ❤️

Oh I loved your reference to Super Bowl and also about Khushi's fear when journeying through steep valleys in Kashmir.. I had been in her place while going up Garhwal mountains to Badrinath 😃

Cheers

Edited by kclovearshi - 11 years ago