Arshi Drabble series: Navarasa (Completed)

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aashi12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#191

Bhayanka-Ras!

It was scary! Was Arnav wearing Harry Potter's cloak of invisibility?

When Khushi thought there wasn't anything surprising about Surprise B'day parties any more.

I think, she'll be mighty surprised by this Halloween style celebration.😛

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aashi12

@aashi12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#192

Vibhata Ras!

Ye Shyam tune kya kiya..?
Ye Shyam tune Kya kiya..?
Ye to sahi mein.. Emm.. Actually disgusting tha!!

Shyam has been watching a lot of Fear Factor lately, it seems. :P

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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

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Posted: 11 years ago

#193

Veera - Gud one, really. I've seen patients fighting with cancer and only a few have survived!

Karuna - Loneliness kills, ask me

bhyanaka - this was really scary...I am sure i will be having a nightmare😭

Vibhatsa - 🤢

Well, all in all, you were able to write drabble, something you said was difficult for you...so congrats!

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-Shilpaa-

@-Shilpaa-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#194

Loved the series!!!😊

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#195

The way Arnav described his love for Khushi, it shows not much words are required.
Got the meaning just within 100 words.
That was Cute:)

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

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Posted: 11 years ago

#196

Res

I always thought Shringar meant decking up for your beloved, didnt know it meant love... I like an Arnav who goes on his knees literally and claims he has fallen in love with Khushi... ❤️

In Hasya did Khushi imagine Arnav with a gamcha tied to his forehead as he swirled jaleibis in oil wearing a loose shirt??? 😆 Btw, why do I have a feeling there is some gap in this cmmunication between them leading to his comedy of errors?

Spotting a mermaid and one which is the spitting image of your wife is adbhuta without a doubt...😲 I would have liked to believe that Arnav is missing Khushi so much that he is seeing her everywhere, however the line that he is trying to escape the past makes me feel it is not all happy in his life...

Ocean can be the ocean or ocean can be Arnav himself. Both know how to rage a storm...😊 both bring destruction in their wake. Both can turn eerily calm later. Here, Arnav wont be shanta till the people who were responsible for harassing his son are punished (Was Aarav kidnapped from school?)

We say things in anger we regret later. I dont know what equation do ArHi share in this one but I do know even if Arnav is a jerk to most women, he cant be that heartless that he would destroy Khushi's mother's saree intentionally... Arnav is hurt. I hope Khushi comes out of her Raudara avatar 😡 and makes amends

Fighting cancer is dying everyday to have a life. I am glad Khushi had it in her to brave it out. 👍🏼 Who says heroes are only on the borders? You and I can bring out the veera in us too. Bas! Dr. Arnav Singh Raizada... me likey... hehehe

Arnav pushed Khushi so far that she isnt with him anymore?? 😭 Is life so dull for him without his own sunlight? Karuna you say is sorrow. But recognizing your cause for sorrow and accepting your faults even to yourself, arent these the first few steps towards rectification? I am sure ASR being the man he is will win Khushi over again! Khushi will come back too coz she can never stop caring for her Arnav. Double bas!

That WAS bhayanaka. I dont like horror 😳 and looks like neither does Khushi and I know Arnav is going to pay for giving her this shocking 'surprise' on her birthday. Some trick that was!

I didnt know vibhasta was disgust and I could have done without reading this one drabble 🤢. I will erase its very memory from my brain or better I will complete it with Arnav coming to Khushi's rescue in the next 30 secs

Wah Chaitu! I know you use a lot of words and are good with those too. But these 100 words pieces go to show that one or many, you have the art to write. 😃

PS: The 'next' on Veera opens to Veera again and not to the next drabble.

PPS: 'In the layers of clothing hid his loneliness' Brilliant! 👏

PPPS: The 'next' link on Karuna doesnt work.

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 11 years ago

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#197

Raizada Misthan Bhandar!!
It will be an awesome business.

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#198

Khushi in the form of mermaid..sweet one:)

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pakpearl

@pakpearl

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#199

Awesome series..

It was an amazing experience..

I have never read drabbles before !!!

Every piece of writing was nice..

But..

No 2 n 3 were the best !!!!

Sorry...like button dint work for the most of the posts !!

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Hot_Chocolate

@Hot_Chocolate

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#200

A : what were you trying to prove C?

C: that I am an Awesome writer and I can very awesomely write drabbles.

A: then go and give me WSLS season 2??

C: *raises eyebrows* runs behind A with a chappal in hand*

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