Arshi Drabble series: Navarasa (Completed)

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Abi

@Abi.Na

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#181

Loved all the nava rasas... awesome!

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KrishVeer

@KrishVeer

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#182

I again forgot to comment on your drabble, and that too on the last one. Sorry about that😔

This drabble was surely disgusting, which means you have done a great job. Great job sweety👏

I really am going to miss this drabble series which was regularly updated everyday. But every good thing comes to an end, which marks the beginning of a new journey. So I guess hopefully we will get a new story from you soon😃

Thanks for sharing this drabble series with us. It was quite a different journey, and I loved it🤗

Eagerly waiting to read more OSs, SSs and FFs from you

This time it would be "come back soon"😆

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aashi12

@aashi12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#183

Un-resed my comment on Pg-1. :D

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aashi12

@aashi12

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#184

Hasya-Ras.

My hindi, my goodness, i realise today isn't at all bad. Mujhe sabke meanings almost pata hain. :) *Proud Moment*

as it began.. I was wondering.. Hasi ab aaegi?

Diversification didn't sound half as bad..

But.. 'Raizada Misthan Bhandar' stole the show for me. ;)

seriously!!🤣.

What an Idea sirji!

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aashi12

@aashi12

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#185

Adbhut-Ras!

Truely Wonderful.

Ye idea kahan se aaya?

Mermaid! He finds his wife staring at him in the middle of nowhere as a water creature. :)

ab iss pyaar ko koi kya naam de?

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aashi12

@aashi12

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#186

Shanta-Ras.

Somehow, i had a feeling, It'll be about a turbulent Ocean a peace.

And it was it.. In a way! Right?

But what i hadn't imagined was the situation.

It was very different, but very common.

Parents, to them, if their kids are well, safe, at peace.. Then they are at Peace. :)

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aashi12

@aashi12

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#187

Raudra Ras!

The ire, the anger.. And the Colour Red! It all makes a great combination.

I loved this drabble. Gussa sabhi ko aata.

Raudra or anger, is a part of who we are, it a side of Us, I'm glad, rather than taking up the conventional Arnav side, you tool the Khushi side Up!👍🏼

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aashi12

@aashi12

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#188

Veera Ras!!

Very inspiring and this time, mujhe pata tha, our Veera, our Victorious, was going to be Khushi!;)

I'm glad she didn't lose hope.
I'm glad she stood by herself.
I'm glad she had a doctor with such a nice name treating her. ;) :P

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aashi12

@aashi12

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#189

I haven't read Bhayanka Ras till yet. But agar ye Manorama Mami and Mahohar mama par hota.. To kitna mazaa aata? :P hasya ras bhi include ho jaata. ;-D

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aashi12

@aashi12

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#190

Karuna Ras!

Even in 100+ words, no one can tell a better tale of true Karuna, lonliness, sadess, emptiness.. Than you did in these 100 words.

True, we are about what we want. Sometimes, we forget, the one who's fulfilling all those too is a human, not god!

I loved the refernce btw his clothing and his lonliness.

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