Arshi Drabble series: Navarasa (Completed)

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rk2127

@rk2127

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#171

Y.U.C.K. Is the reaction and my face expression of pure disgust.

Therefore mission accomplished.

So happy for you that you achieved what you set for. 👏

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FeistyDewdrop

@FeistyDewdrop

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#172

indeed it was disgusting!! How cud one even think of making a person undergo such a horrendous predicament... But then its the vile creature Shyam!! n i cant believe , of all colours this rasa has to be represented by blue!!!! :((

congratulations Chaitu❤️ 🤗

Mission Accomplished 👍🏼

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#173

superb one

liked it

thanks for the mail

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

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+ 13

Posted: 11 years ago

#174

I am going 'yuk ' even while admiring her sheer grit and determination to not cow down.
Nice metaphor associating the creepy crawlies - the insects with Shyam

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#175

It was actually vibhatsa... Wonderfully written...

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#176

That was yuck.

This is sure to give me nightmares.

Very interesting series, Chaitu

Enjoyed reading it.

I really hope you'll write a new story soon.

WAITING!

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kushiarnav1

@kushiarnav1

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#177

superb series... its too short but the way u written each scene is very nice👏...navarasa means nine emotions u gave us perfect emotion for each rasa...especially bhyannaka and vibhatsa...

a humble thank u for giving us brilliant series...

looking forward to u r new story...

cheers...

Edited by kushiarnav1 - 11 years ago

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Param

@pup03

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#178

Navarasa was interesting idea.. loved all the nine rasa.. hope to see you with your new story as and when you are ready with it.. will be waiting for it eagerly.. best wishes..

thanks for mail 😊

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henamani

@henamani

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#179

i am a fan of ur writing and have been a regular. whatever u decide to write pls share it with me on hena_mani@yahoo.com or hena1411@gmail.com

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hotchic.

@hotchic

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#180

Eeeks, i wanted to puke put when i read that her hand was filled with the insects internal. Eeww..How can shyam do that? He wasn't that bad in the show.