Arshi Drabble series: Navarasa (Completed)

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

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Posted: 11 years ago

#141

Bhayanaka

It was her birthday today.

As Khushi slid the key to open the door, she rightly expected darkness. Surprise parties were so common that they had ceased to be surprising.

"Arnav", she cried out as her hand sought the switch on the wall. "You can reveal yourself now."

The lights did not come. Instead she saw the dull glow of the candle.

On her birthday cake.

She saw Arnav's face being lit by the yellowish light and smiled.

Only to realize that something was amiss.

As she inched closer, it became clear.

Arnav's face was there; his torso was not.

Explanation:

Meaning- Fear

Colour- Black

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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Posted: 11 years ago

#142

Wow this was pretty scary.
Awesome update

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yoga123

@yoga123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#143

I was scared...kudos to you to bring all the rasas in such simple story line...thanks for the PM

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: yoga123
I was scared...kudos to you to bring all the rasas in such simple story line...thanks for the PM

😲

very creepy indeed...🤢

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#145

the title made me prepare myself for the update - hence was not that scared

nice one chaitu

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FeistyDewdrop

@FeistyDewdrop

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#146

hey bhagwan! I was out of my wits Chaitu :((

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#147

Arre baap re, you scared me girl!

Yeh kya tha?

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SS88

@SS88

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Posted: 11 years ago

#148

W*F. This is probably the scariest thing i ve ever read. And I read gory thriller fiction. Is that a prank he's playing on her?

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KrishVeer

@KrishVeer

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#149

Yay!!!!!You gave an update earlier than I thought. Thank you

It was pretty scary. With what kind of heart did u make Arnav a body less ghost? I'm glad that you didn't make him a headless ghost. If I was in Khushi's place, I would have fainted then and there😆

This was one of the most interesting ones in the series😳

Loved it to the core❤️

Thanks for sharing a wonderful update with us🤗

Eagerly waiting for the next one

Update soon😉

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#150

Amazing !!!!!!!!

You manage to write each emotions with limited words ,that is simply superb . liked it

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