SanDhir SS: WTSGB! *SS Of The Week :')* Chapter 5 & Prologue

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Tanya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#461

😡Stalker.

RES.

Stupid net on Mob.

Best comment. Pakka Aru :*

Edited by TashaForever - 11 years ago

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Tisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#462

Originally posted by: TashaForever
😡Stalker.
RES.
Stupid net on Mob.
Best comment. Pakka Aru :*

wasn't stalking but checking if she replied to my comments!😃

but you definitely were!🤣

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CoffeeandInk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#463

I'd only read the prologue before, but now I finished reading all the chapters (and the epilogue too) in one go.

I see why this has been the SS of the Week - your writing is brilliant :)

I'm not very good with endings, I always get down when my favorite series (books, movies, TV Shows, practically anything) ends. That's how I felt on finishing yours.

It was all very well written, and I loved reading it. Kudos! :D

Edited by AzureLicht - 11 years ago

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Anisha Singhal

@AnnyLaughaholic

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Posted: 11 years ago

#464

So it has ended.

ENDED.

Oh damn ENDED.

I donno but i always feel like crying and i feel cheated when someone ends a story.

AND YOU DID IT . AGAIN.

It was actually a short story. My favourite. I couldnt commet most of the time as i read the chaps from my phone.

BUT arushi, lemme remind you, You're a fab writer!🤗

As i said before, i get pretty emotional when things end.. I wont be saying so much now..

Just one thing -

Next wale mein PM karna mat bhoolna😉

Ill be SO waiting.

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Unknown

@AnatomyAddict

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Posted: 11 years ago

#465

EDITED!

And so my favourite SS comes to an end🥺🥺

*Thinks of words that might be able to suffice the beauty of this SS*

*gives up*

😆

I don't know what to say... And that is very impressive I must say! The epilogue had me spellbound! Just like in the Grease Story, here too, you ended on such a realistic note!

And that is extremely impressive! To make even the realistic come off as being almost magical!

I seriously have no words! So I hope you expect this lame comment...

I am in awe with you devdas! You! And the way you write! How brilliant it comes off! How magical it is! How poignant it is! I can't even deal with this right now! The amount of fuzzy feels in my body😳

I love you!😳

Edited by gujjupari - 11 years ago

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Tisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#466

Originally posted by: PrussianBlue

I didn't get the first sentence in your last quote! And there you go, quoting again :P
I have to end it, IpIp! But I hope you will take relish in the fact that this story has a lot of my ideologies! And I have to end it here or else it'll become a drag :")

It is a hilarious typo! Though I forgot what I meant but something with killing (keeling! :P)

AHaha! I am famous for that, eh? :P I understand! :"(

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Tanya

@TashaForever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#467

Originally posted by: BeyondWords

wasn't stalking but checking if she replied to my comments!😃
but you definitely were!🤣

I wasn't stalking. She told us she updated on WA, so I rushed from mob :P

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Kirti

@kirtiarora111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#468

Resss

___________________________________________________________________________

Unres

...

Finally, our SanDhir became one...!!!😳😳

Finding solace in each other's embrace..!!!

And wow, what an out of the box kinda Marriage proposal..!!!😳😳

The pretty lady didn't even realize that she just had been offered the most precious gift of her life from her man cum soulmate..!!!😳😳

Loved SanDhir, their children... And the Epilogue..!!

Everything was just so apt..!!

It cannot be any better...!!!👏👏

Finally, a beautiful story came to an even more beautiful perfect ending..!!!

Rather, it seems unending...!!!

And one last (but not the least) time, for giving us such a beautiful reading experience...

Love ya

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everywednesday

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Posted: 11 years ago

#469

Arushi. Main subhah sey baithi thi online. Update kaa naamo nishan nahi, Ek ghante key liye offline chali gyi aur BAM. -_-

RES-ed.

-_-_-_-

UNRES

Arushi, the update I read yesterday itself rey. But was feeling too lazy to comment.

You, know your writing has this flow. It seems so poetic to me! And hits me right where it feeld the most. <3 I loved how you have justified the naming of the kids. Perfectly done! :D

Come up with something new as soon as possible!

You have this typical Amitav Ghosh touch in your writing( he is an amazing writer, if you haven't heard of him). I loved this. All achha achha things end so soon yaa. :'/

But as I've said, I won't nag about prolonging it. :*

Wish you all the best for your college hunt ;)

May luck favour you. :D

Edited by Reminiscence - 11 years ago

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Arushi Kotecha

@PrussianBlue

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Posted: 11 years ago

#470

Originally posted by: angel_anisha
So it has ended.
ENDED.
Oh damn ENDED.
I donno but i always feel like crying and i feel cheated when someone ends a story.
AND YOU DID IT . AGAIN.
It was actually a short story. My favourite. I couldnt commet most of the time as i read the chaps from my phone.
BUT arushi, lemme remind you, You're a fab writer!🤗
As i said before, i get pretty emotional when things end.. I wont be saying so much now..
Just one thing -
Next wale mein PM karna mat bhoolna😉
Ill be SO waiting.