SanDhir SS: WTSGB! *SS Of The Week :')* Chapter 5 & Prologue

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@AnatomyAddict

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: BeyondWords

She stole my heart this time! This is what the forum is about and she is the best writer of the forum as she proved herself to be the best thinker!

Ahaaan!!!! She stole your heart! You stole my words!! And Aru has all my respect and love❤️

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Sachi

@sachi123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

ARUSHI! Darling, I am so impressed by your writing skills! Take a bow Roomie! Your Writing makes me Happy :D! Thank You for Writing this :D! I love you so much for recommending me The Fault in Our Stars and also including it in your SS! I guess Highway had quite a big impact on you! Also, I can see a lot of Fans for you! You are Popular girl :P :D! A Suggestion by a Not-so-vocabulary-girl :- Please use simpler language so that common people like me can understand. And also simpler language makes Writing Relative and Understanding :P! Please, do not point out grammatical mistakes everywhere :P! I hope I did not ask too much!
Keep Writing More and More!
Love,
Sachi.

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kiki

@-waitingforyou-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#133

brilliant !
this is really different !!
totally different concept !
the plot is fresh and the way you writing is really stupefying !!
i feel this story is gonna be more than interesting !!
the characters in this story is totally different from the show !!
they have a barbarous past !!
randhir's past is really scary for anyone to go through such torture and that too at the tender age of nine !!it's brutally terrifying !
and sanyukta !!to loose one's family and being lonely survivor is so miserable !!
it's really tormenting !
and i really like this story and i'm looking forward to read how this story unwinds !!
you are a really talented writer ! 👏
do continue soon !!

love
-kiki😳

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AlbusDumbeldore

@AlbusDumbeldore

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Just fabulous yaar.

U r great at writing the emotions of a character and the conditions they are going through.

I felt like crying qhere u have mentioned how randhir was sexually assaulted.

Just great

And please update the next part as soon as possible.

Cant wait:)))))))).

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shalini_shakti

@shalini_shakti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#135

Woah..!!! Chapter one..!!! Finally updated..!!
It was amazing..!!!:D
Sanyuktha being rich and Randhir being poor awww...!!!
This story is completely unique n different...
Hoping for more interesting plots in it...
The condition of randhir's family made me feel sad for him...
Update next ASAP..!!
Will be eagerly waiting...
Love,
Shalini

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Rachna

@richurachna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#136

aww awsome randhir poor sanyu rich..

their birthday bash..

pls update soon and thank u for pm

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Snigdha

@Macros

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Posted: 11 years ago

#137

Aru dii

This is so

Good

Thanks for pm.

Loving this story...

Keep writing welll

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Nia | Rii

@anyania

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Posted: 11 years ago

#138

lovely...
totally loved the way you have written. .
extremely overwhelmed. ..
their character sketch and their was painful and u have expressed them with immense delicacy. ...
can't wait for the story to start...looking forward to it..
update soon..waiting. ..

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Dreamy_Angel

@Dreamy_Angel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#139

wow..wat i m supposd to say for dis mindblowing update..
Beyond wrds..
God of emotions... 😉
hw beautifully u hv naild evry bit of it...
Da lyf of both the childs r neatly describd..
Luvd evry inch of it..
I remembr several images runnin infrnt of my eyes while readin it...it shws dat hw gracefully u hv writtn dis...
It seems as it is written by a perfectionist...
Thnx a lot for da PM n keep writing...