SanDhir SS: WTSGB! *SS Of The Week :')* Chapter 5 & Prologue - Page 13

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Posted: 11 years ago
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You are a master of emotions behena! 👏

I have heard that saying, "The fault in your stars" tooo many times! I think Gujjus are just born with a capability to degrade other Gujjus

Anyways, Sanyukta's past is interesting! Lost her family at a young age, and was brought up by distant family members... Interesting that you didn't delve in to her past... And I know exactly why! (maybe?!)..

On a side note, The Fault in Our Stars is just brilliant! I can't wait for the movie to come!!!! 6th June!!!!! Might have exams then, but oh welll... Trailer was really goood😃

And Randhir's past was just painful to read! I have read "Lolita" and that was a torture... Incest is just a horrendous crime! Period! And it really does scar children!

I love how sensitively you have portrayed the harsh reality of life!

I am really happy that you have chosen this topic! We think that the world is all joyous and dreamy, but there are always stories like such! And I hope, actually I know, that you will treat it with sensitivity and care!

Conti sooon!!!

PS: Naaaw! You mentioned my name😳... I love ya Gujju behena 🤗❤️

Edited by gujjupari - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
~Unres~

First of all I'm really SoRRy...I thought that I had commented for the prologue too but I just realized that I didn't!🤣
Short-term-memory...you see🤣

The title!! I'm in love with your and Anu's title selection skills.🤣 Seriously they are like one of a kind.
As for the prologue, obviously the plot is bound to get interesting when its written by the author of "The Grease Story". You know..how I heart GS. That's one of my fav. till date!

The Chapter.
The chapter was quite interesting. The way you described their dwindled lives and adversity is the thing I loved the most!
You are an exquisite writer and cosmos of words. [I said this to Anu once and I won't be wrong if I say this to you too.]
Needless to say I'm hooked to the story!
Solicitously Waiting for the next part.
Update ASAP.
Love ya
Samaira (Remember me?)
Edited by iraa_parsh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
So many RESes! Thank you, Bhagwan ji! :D
Ipip! Tum online ho? Yus! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey...
loved d intros of both charaters
both hv past which made thm who thy r nw.
so, soon thr is going to be a birthday bash?...interesting
Well, d book u mentioned is already in my reading list
nd its made into movie too releasing this year.

Nd, thnks for PM.

Foram
Edited by G.R. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PrussianBlue


Hey Kiki! Got the PM to your story, but couldn't make head or tail of it, so bookmarked it for later! :D
Thank you SO much for reading and commenting! :D
Next update after 5 days or a week! :D



my story !!😆 it's okay dear ! read when you are free !!
it's crap anyway !😕
i'm sorry i didn't comment on the grease story cos i was absent from the forum for a month and when i came back it was finished !
anyway i'm glad you started this new ff !😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: G.R.

hey...
loved d intros of both charaters
both hv past which made thm who thy r nw.
so, soon thr is going to be a birthday bash?...interesting
Well, d book u mentioned is already in my reading list
nd its made into movie too releasing this year.

Nd, thnks for PM.

Foram


Hey Foram! I'm glad you're going to read the book! Trust me, you'll LOVE it! :D
Yes, its releasing on June 6! SO excited!! :D
Thank you SO much for reading and commenting! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PrussianBlue

So many RESes! Thank you, Bhagwan ji! :D

Ipip! Tum online ho? Yus! :D


RuRu...I Unresed!! This has topped my favorite list! I want a reply to my comment now! :P
Edited by BeyondWords - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res!!!
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ARUSHI DI!!!!!!!😊😊😊
You dedicated this part to meee!
OMG!!!I am really on cloud 9!😳😳😳
Thank you very much for this dedication!😊
I have heard about The Fault In Our Stars from Saachi and now u!
She said me that u asked her to read it!
And from that day I am hearing the name of book so many times!
Those starting lines are SOOO TRUE AND DAMN AWESOME!
Sanyukta is a rich and orphan girl
I feel sad for her!
But she really is a talented girl who is handling the business of her dad
After reading about Randhir I had tears in my eyes 😭😭
His childhood was so rough
I can't even imagine how much pain he must have gone through
After reading that invitation I think so Sanyukta is gonna call at the agency and Randhir will be the escort I mean date!😊

AGAIN THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR THE DEDICATION!😊Means a lot to me!
And SORRY for late reply I was out of town😊

-In Hope of Loads of Update😉
& Love 😊
-Prachi😊
Edited by Prachijainn - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: BeyondWords


RuRu...I Unresed!! This has topped my favorite list! I want a reply to my comment now! :P


I second baba!!! My favorite and I have also unresed! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gujjupari


I second baba!!! My favorite and I have also unresed! 😃


She stole my heart this time! This is what the forum is about and she is the best writer of the forum as she proved herself to be the best thinker!

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