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-Monika-

@-Monika-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

awesome...

poor rey nd swayam...

loved krisha bonding...

ye runi har jagah hi tapak padti hai..

awesome start...

continue soon...

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neha

@swaron933

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

loved your concept...

amazinggg superbbb 👏

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Swathi

@Pinkylibbi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Wooow yaar👏👏👏👏👏🤗

This is awesome. Please do continue it.
Loved SHAREY AND REYAM bonding.
And also loved the way you included all other characters also.

Please update it soon.

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shreya

@luvuKR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

NYc 1...plz add me in ur buddy list n plz pm me wen u update

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

awesomeee start👏

continue soonish😊

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shaaz23

@shaaz23

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Nice start
The concept is different and interesting
Reyam and Krisha are too gud
Update soon and pm me

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Aditi M.

@reyaditi

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

wow...lovely start...i lovd it...
KriYaansh n SwaRon away from each other...
buh dn destiny will unite them...
ReYam turned drunkard for KriSha...
would love to see them united soon...
would love to read it...
do update soon...

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krarshanaval

@krarshanaval

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

THE CHAPTER 1 WAS AMAZING AND SUPERB... I WONDER WHY KRIYA AND SHARON
LEFT BOTH REY AND SWAYAN AND BOTH HAVE BECOME SO DRUNK AS THEIR GIRLS
SHARON AND KRIYA LEFT THEM FOR SOME REASON... THEIR FRIENDS TRY THEIR
LEVEL BEST TO CHEER THEM UP BUT BOTH REY AND SWAYAN DID NOT TALK ALSO
TO THEIR PARENTS AND LEFT FOR THEIR ROOM AND THEIR KRIYA AND SHARON
REMEBER THEIR OLD TIMES ARE CRY... DO CONTINUE SOON AND PM ME