AvRaj SS: Melodious Tunes(Updtd) Part 9 on pg18

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nini06

@nini06

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#101

wow sis shruti this update is totally asweom..!!🤗
thanku saammy for providing us all with a beautiful gift...!!❤️

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Sonam

@Unicornlover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

wow shru very nice update.. 😊
very well executed..👍🏼
you are a great writer.. i loved it alot..
thanks for updating..

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jaya2904

@jaya2904

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#103

awesome...

Yes, my guess was right... 👏raj has some relation with Reema kapoor. but his mother was responsible for his fathers death? i don't believe dis. jarur kisine raj ke man mein galatfemi paida ki hai..
uske mom ne bhi kabhi ye misunderstanding dur karne ki koshish nahi ki..??😕

And on d top of it Avni ki isme kya galti hai..??she even doesnt know dis truth. Ye Raj bhi na... pehle ek baar Avni se baat toh karta..!!😡
shayad avni hi in bichde hue maa-bete ko pass layegi...😊

i so wish Avni competition jeet jaye...

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subham sriwastava

@subham101289

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

First of all so sorry, SHRUTI !!, for not commenting here!!

U have exceedingly written the storyline, and it really touched my heart!!👏 👏 👍🏼 👍🏼

I must say that u are a very good writer and a very deep thinker too!! 😊 😊 😊

I can easily felt the pain and sadness of RAJ and AVNI😭 😭 😭 😭

Both are right in their places, but RJ should not talk to AV like this, its not her fault that she thought violin from that lady who is RJ's mother and is murderer of his DAD, but that still have to prove, and most importantly AV has not known the truth.

I think might be its RJ plan to encourage and push AV to prove herself best in front of everyone, i know he also loves AV but get disturbed and angry to know the fact that she taught violin from her mother.

I wish that both of them should won the competition as i cant see, either of them loosing, If RJ looses then he will be completely shattered and looses AV too on the other hand if AV looses then she will be completely broken.

i dont want this in any case, always want our AVRAJ remains united forever.😊 😊 😊

I hope after this competition, both of them emerged out as a winner, all of their problems get sorted and they unite for ever and ever!!

Awesome, fantastically written and really touching update SHRUTI, Hatts of to u!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Waiting for ur next update as very eager to know that who will win the competition, who is RJ's dad murderer and what will happen to AVRAJ love story after that!!😕 😕 😕 😕

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Vishi-

@Vishi-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#105

Finally read 😳
Its so painful and touching 😭
Raj's past 😭
m sure its was not Raj's mom fault Kuch toh raaz hai..
But I feel sad for Avni at same time...
Raj has no right to insult her 😡
I hope Avni wins and proves him she is best

Awesome update Shru 🤗
waiting eagerly for next update 😳

Edited by Barbievishi20 - 11 years ago

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Shruti

@Princyz_Belle

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: Sammy11
Res.. will comment after reading..

//unres//
hmm.. finally read and got some relief with the excitement..

lol...😆

OMG!! what a touching update.. Raj's past is too touchy and hurtful to him.. and Avni is learning violin from his mother justifies his anger... but felt sad for Avni and also sad to know Raj is sad to hurt his love!

Hmmm...Raj's past was very hurtful tht's why he bcm lyk this..he cudn't stand d fact of Avni learning violin frm his mom...

but!! Is his mother really guilty to be blamed is my question! I dont think so.. but knowing his father was murdered is a big mystery and thats a sad thing! But still I dont think his mother murdered!

everything has a reason...n this mystery will b reveled soon...😉

now coming to the AvRaj convo at the canteen, I dont know but I felt Raj wrong at some place.. he must not have shouted on her like that and made her embarrassed.. finally she is forced to compete him... maybe it was all a Raj plan!

Tht's d case..Raj was wrong...Avni loved him...n she also never thought something lyk this frm Raj..but Raj was wrong but he cudn't help it...he was alwyz hurt n tht's why he did all diz.

Its a very debatable topic as to who should win the competition, but for me both should be the winners to prove something. I think Avni must win and prove herself infront of everyone but not to prove her teacher is good but just for herself. On the other side I want Raj to win becoz if he loses he will be more broken and Avni will leave him... and I cant see him in that condition.. lol..

at this point winning is equally imp. for both AvRaj...both wanna prove their point..but let's see who makes it...😉

A Big thank you for specially releasing the update for me and also for making me enough sad to complete my FF's pending update (Princess wala FF).. I had been roaming around 3 whole days and trying to make my mood to write it but my feelings were not sad enough to complete it.You know na..I write everything with heart and only when my feelings match with the content i write.. expect my FF update on my last day.. 4th Aug!

A big hug to you... luv u!!🤗

//SammyExpress!!

No need for thnk u dear... i just wanted to fulfill ur wish😳...Gonna read ur FF soon...sorry for not reading it till now...😆Hug to u too...

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Shruti

@Princyz_Belle

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: nini06
wow sis shruti this update is totally asweom..!!🤗
thanku saammy for providing us all with a beautiful gift...!!❤️

Thnk u sis😃...yup..credit goes to sammy...😉

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Shruti

@Princyz_Belle

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: SONAMB404
wow shru very nice update.. 😊
very well executed..👍🏼
you are a great writer.. i loved it alot..
thanks for updating..

Thnx a lot Sonam...😃 tht means a lot to me...😳

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Shruti

@Princyz_Belle

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: jaya2904
awesome...

thnx...😃

Yes, my guess was right... 👏raj has some relation with Reema kapoor. but his mother was responsible for his fathers death? i don't believe dis. jarur kisine raj ke man mein galatfemi paida ki hai..
uske mom ne bhi kabhi ye misunderstanding dur karne ki koshish nahi ki..??😕

hmm..ur guess was ryt...there is something hidden...it'll reveal soon...😉

And on d top of it Avni ki isme kya galti hai..??she even doesnt know dis truth. Ye Raj bhi na... pehle ek baar Avni se baat toh karta..!!😡
shayad avni hi in bichde hue maa-bete ko pass layegi...😊

i so wish Avni competition jeet jaye...

Raj was wrong...usse jo ,mann mein aya kar diya...Avni toh zaroor samajhti..but tht's d story...😆