AvRaj SS: Melodious Tunes(Updtd) Part 9 on pg18 - Page 13

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Originally posted by: Princyz_Belle

Thnk u sis😃...yup..credit goes to sammy...😉

🤗pleasure sis

NCE UPDATE SIS..!!❤️
its completedly raj 's mistake...!!
but the pain is clearly visible in both eyes...!!
many a times w end up...sum1 else for sum1 mistake...n its exactly same here...!!
bechara raj..!!
ps...dont compare ur work with ny1 else sister...!!
ur stories are very deep...n my fav amonst all...!!

Part-9

A car comes infront of AvRaj's clg...n a lady wearing salwar-suit comes down frm it...She goes in...She calls someone..it's avni on d other side,

Avni: Hello, Reema Ma'am..?

Reema: Ya Avni..i'm here.

Avni: Ma'am u stand beside d main gate..i'm coming to take u..

Reema: Ok Avni.

Avni comes to her..n takes her with her.

Avni: thnk u so much for coming ma'am..

Reema: Oh..no need dear...it's 1^st tym u r performing..n it's my duty to b here with u on this special day.

Avni: yes ma'am...now I wish I just win..

Reema: Avni..it's not abt winning everytym..it's abt showing courage to face d world..as of ur performance I can surely say tht u'll do very gud..but alwyz remember Winning shud not b d motto f anyone's lyf... I knw u..u were never lyk tht..!

Avni: yes ma'am..i was never lyk tht...but somebody made lyk tht... today I wanna win for myself..for u..

Reema: for me..?

Avni: Ma'am...u r alwyz lyk mother to me..u alwyz loved me lyk ur own daughter...u r my 2^nd mom..so i don't want anyone to disrespect u.

Reema hugs Avni.

Reema: Avni..u r too sweet dear...God bless u..u alwyz think abt others..but I want u to do ur best just for urself..not for me..i never want respect frm anyone...the one's whose respect was important for me I lost thm long ago..now I just want to spread some love...All d best dear...

Avni takes her blessings n runs to stage..Reema goes to audience to sit.

Avni stands on stage with her violin... She looks infront n sees so many ppl there...Her hands starts trembling...

The host announces," Plz all give a round of applause to Avni Khanderwal"

The light falls on Avni...all clap for her...Avni looks around...there r Raj's name posters all over..They all want to hear Raj's violin...

Avni( in her mind): all just want to hear Raj...I have no value in d eyes of thm..!! Have I taken wrong decision by competing with Raj...? As I also knw in my deep heart tht Raj's gonna win..He's d superstar of d clg..!!

Everyone starts calling Avni's name n asks her to sing...some ppl pass comments lyk, " if u don't' wanna play violin thn plz go back..let us hear Raj's magical violin..."

Avni gets really nervous...it feels lyk in a second all her confidence is lost..She looks at Reema...She tells her to play...There is devika also who is continuously shouting Avni's name...Avni feels helpless.

Suddenly she remembers something... She closes her eyes n remembers everything happened with her...

She remembers how she met with Raj.. She heard his violin...n she fell for him...she befriended with him..They were so close to each other...They spend tyms together...

Avni had a smile in her face...Thn she remembers how Raj called her for Date..n ditched her..how he changed so much..how he behaved with her in d canteen...His words echoed in her ears...how she cried for him..how he continued insulting her n her teacher...

Now Avni's smile turned into pain..she had tears in her eyes again..but now she turned it into her confidence..she opened her eyes..she faced d world..she was just as confidence as before..now she knew wht she has to do..why she's doing it...She took her violin tightly..n gets prepare to play it...

On d other side...Raj was standing on d backstage...he was also holding his violin..he was also seeing how Avni was silent In stage n everyone was making fun of her.

Raj(in his mind): I'm really sorry Avni...I'm very very sorry...I had to make u suffer all this...I can't see u lyk this... But it's gud for me...I'll win very easily..But I don't want to win lyk this..i want to defeat u..Defeat tht women...!

Raj held his violin n started tuning it...he was quite confident now.

Raj(in his thoughts): Today I'll play my best tune..i learned it frm my childhood..don't knw who taught me but it's d most beautiful n best tune I have ever heard..I m full confident tht this tune will make me win.

Meanwhile Avni starts playing her violin...all gets quite..! or may b all r mesmerized..Raj hears d tune n gets dumbstruck..He hears more carefully...yes ! Avni is playing his tune..d tune he prepared..his tune..! his special tune..!! For sometym he cudn't think wht to do..? what's all this..? How cud Avni play this tune..? Many question struck in his head..he felt cheated..he shud ask this to avni...he rushes to stage..but someone stops her frm behind.

Raj looks back n again he's shocked..it's none other than Ms.Reema...d person he hates most..his mother..!! Raj never thought tht he'll meet this lady again..! He was really angry but he had tears in his eyes..may b his anger was flowing as tears.

Reema: Raj..my boy..

She comes to hug Raj but Raj steps back...

Raj(in a firm tone): why u r here..?

Reema: I was yarning to see u..N u r saying this? Why u r behaving lyk this..? m ur mom...

Raj(screams): stop this nonsense..i just wanna knw why u r here..? N u r telling u r my mom..??!! Seriously...!!! A mom who never came up for his son...a mom who is d biggest weakness of his son...a mom whom her son hates d most.

Raj turns his face. Ms.Reema was shocked...she knew Raj will hate her but when she's hearing this from him in her own ears it's hurting her more. She saw him after so many yrs she is dying to hug him but he has mo much hatred for her...!! She walks to him n holds him frm his back.

Reema: Raj...I knw u r very much angry with me..n u shud be..but at least listen to me...I..

Raj:Oh plz...i don't wanna hear any explanations. I only knw i hate u..n i'll continue it. Ur this fake love n affection will not affect me anyway.

Reema: N what if i change u the reason of hatred..?

Raj looks at her with shock...

Raj: what do u mean..?

Reema: I never thought i'll meet u here like this.. But if it's God's wish than m okay with it. Today i'll tell u everything...everything which u need to knw...everything which is true.

Raj looks on...!

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waiting for next.. 😊
so continue this..

shru you are a genius.. 👏
i loved that part ❤️
A big hug to you 🤗
please update more 👍🏼
i am waiting for it..

First of all...a big 👍🏼 to u Shruti...for the update...i am so extremely happy to read this...was eagerly waiting for it..!!

U have completely rocked it...very well and perfectly written...i loved it to the core...but it is short...i wanna read more...i am very eager to read the next part...u have created the suspense...and i really loved it...!! I wanna know...what's the next...what's the complete truth...and what Raj's mom will say to him...and whether RJ's hatred turned to love or not?? And morever what's about AV's performance...and which tune will RJ play now...when his tune is already played by AV...!!

Lots of questions to be answered...!! Eagerly waiting for the next...plz update soon...whenever u get free time 😊

And u are superly duperly talented...i loved ur creations and writing skills to the core...and i became fan of urs as well like that all of my friend's creativity 😊

Keep doing this awesome work...and continue ur writing like this...whenever u have free time...and let me know...i am always be eager to read ur SS's, OS's and FF's...and yes...ur super amazing and beautiful creations as well...!! 👏

U are super awesome, amazing and extremely multitalented...Our Dabangg Inspector Shruti...i am proud of u...keep it up...like this..!!

Continue...writing and making edits...i am waiting for next...!! 👏 👍🏼

Wow! Partner u just nailed it...m so so proud of u👍🏼👏

Originally posted by: Sana_J.

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waiting for next.. 😊
so continue this..

Okay.. will try soon 😃

Originally posted by: SONAMB404

shru you are a genius.. 👏
i loved that part ❤️
A big hug to you 🤗
please update more 👍🏼
i am waiting for it..

Aww..thnx a lot Sonam...
Hug to u too... 🤗
Will try to cont. Soon 😃