AvRaj SS: Melodious Tunes(Updtd) Part 9 on pg18 - Page 10

Originally posted by: tina_sre

ShruPartner,

I wz so tired wid office work and my mood ws off since morning but diz lovely story of urs changed it all...omg! love it so much...Avni'z part is really touching and it makes me wander y Raj didn't turned up after doing so much...now toh I really can't wait 4 next update...I loved d way u've described abt. Avni'z excitement...It'z awesum yaar...Itne aachi updated ke liye ek bada wala hug to banta hai..

Originally posted by: Sammy11

Wow.. a super shocking and suspenseful update but without precap!!

I really cant wait to know whats next!! Wanted to know what happened to Raj ans is Raj really at the college or not!! Seems that Avni lost all her hope and her smile but she is trying to be strong!

This one really touched me a lot/... I wanted something sad to begin writing for my sad story ..//after completing a happy story for contest as you requested...// and this is that,,.. thanks a lot.. dear..I felt really bad to see Raj missing and I definitely know something really bad has happened.. something strange is there in the college.. OMG.. my mind cant stop thinking lol..

A big Thanks for the update and A big Hug to you.. This update really touched me from inside.. A 😊 on face but a 😒 at heart!

⭐️.⭐️.⭐️.⭐️.⭐️/5 ...👏.👍🏼.

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see ya...

//SammyExpress!!

Originally posted by: SONAMB404

very nice update..
waiting for more...

Originally posted by: halima_zaka

lovely update

waiting for tom

Originally posted by: Princyz_Belle

Surprise Update coming up for SammyExpress specially...!!

Originally posted by: Sammy11

SUPER DUPER SE BHI UPAR EXCITED!! AND EVEN MORE BECOZ ITS SPECIALLY FOR ME!! 😳LOVE YOU SHRU!!! 🤗

Just returned home after a tiring journey and I'm here just for this!! 😃...😃...😃...😃...

Part-7

***************************FLASHBACK**************************
Avni reaches clg n meets devika..asks her where is Raj..she says in canteen..n they leave to meet him.Avni n devika sees raj in canteen n they go to him. Raj is sitting there silently..avni stands in front of him..Raj looks at her..His eyes r full of anger n hatred..it doesn't have tht spark which is alwyz present in his eyes..it looks lyk he's burning frm inside..Raj has no smile in his face..

Avni: Raj..

Raj is silent he's just looking at her..

Avni: raj..what happened Raj? R u ok? Why u didn't come y'day..i was waiting for u..

Raj: so what?

Avni(shocked): Raj...what? I mean u called me n u were not there..i was waiting for u..n I searched for u..i wass..

Raj: oh plz stop it Avni..i forgot tht I called u there.

Avni: hoe can u 4gt this Raj? How can u talk so lightly?

Raj: why can't I 4gt? I can Avni...what's d big deal in tht? I ordered d food n all..u cud have enjoyed thm..

Avni(tears in her eyes):Raj...!!!!!!!! What's wrong with u? why u r behaving lyk this to me?

Raj: what?? U desrve this girl..

Avni: can u plz tell me clearly Raj..? what's actually wrong?

Raj stands up n starts shouting..everyone is looking at thm.

Raj: what do u think of urself..? u wanna surpass me? U think u r better than me?

Avni: in what ?

Raj: now don't bcm so nave avni.. I got to knw tht u play violin..n tht's why u bcm frnds to me so tht u can backstab me in this? U knw tht I'm d best but still u did this..u r such a loser avni..i heard ur violin...tht was just worthless.. shame on ur teacher..

Avni(screams): Raj...!!!!!!!!! Don't u dare to say anything against my teacher..she'z d best...she tries her best.

Raj: oh really? Tht's why u play in hiding? Why not u play in front of others.

Avni: Tht's not ur business,...but don't say anything abt Ms.Reema...She'z just mother like to me.

Raj face gets red with anger..his eyes gets bigger..

Raj: Mother like..huh..mother n teacher has some diff. Avni..u r too nave..stop it.. start believing tht I'm d best.. u n ur miss can't do anything abt it..as she can't make u best..she';s...

Avni: stop it..i can also b d best..i wanna hide it tht doesn't give u right tht u'll talk ill abt miss. Reema.

Raj: Ok thn..prove it ms Avni khanderwal..prove urself best n prove ur miss best in this upcoming music compition..

Avni(shocked): I...i...oh...

Raj(laughs): haahaa..I knew It Avni..it's not ur piece of cake..U r sure to fail..let it b..ur miss didn't even teach u how to have strength.

Avni looks around..Every1 is laughing..she just feels so bad.

Avni: ok..i'll do it..

Raj: really? Thn c u at d event...u'll also c tht I'm d best.

Raj leaves..Avni runs to her home..she breaks down in crying..her all dreams r crucially shattered.

Avni is in car...she have tears in her eyes...she opens d glass window..n wipes her tears. She tells to herself," Still I don't knw why he did this to me...but I also don't want to..i just remember his hurtful words n tht pain..But I'll turn tht pain into my strength n prove me n miss reema best."

On the other side in clg..there was Raj..who was practicing violin...He was very strongly playing it...he was very fast..looking very disturbed. The violin falls frm his hand. Raj sits down on his knees.

Raj(on his mind): Why all this happened...!!?? Why?? I feel so lonely...I feel so heartbroken..i broke tht person's heart who had my heart...I loved her..!!! But..everything got wrong..she worships tht person whom I hate most...I hate tht women..She ruined my life,...while she's with me she ruined it..now again she came bck..she agiain ruined it...

Raj screams loud...: I Hate u Reema Kapoor..I hate u...

**********************Raj's FLASHBACK************************

Raj was 7 yrs old..he went for cycling...when he came back home he saw his dad dead on floor..He was shocked...it's alwyz a very BIG SHOCK for any child..He cried for his mother..he screamed.."Maa...maa..." But there was no answer..there was no on ein the house..Police came..took his dad's body..asked him many questions..he was told tht his mother is d culprit..He cudn't believe it..he knew tht there was something wrong with her parents but never thought anything like this.! Raj was shocked...he was sent to his uncle's house..many dayz passed..but still he cudn't overcome tht fear n pain...but thn he found his life in violin. N he was trying best to live d life.

*********************FLASHBACK ENDS*********************

Raj is crying...he says to himself," Still tht hurts me..i turned my pain into hatred..i hate u Reema Kapoor..i hate tht fact tht u r my Mother...I'll never forgive u...I don't wanna anyone to worship u..when Avni will loose the competition she'll herself understand tht u r not trustworthy..."

Raj still crying..n Avni wipes her tears n has a strong face.