AvRaj SS: Melodious Tunes(Updtd) Part 9 on pg18 - Page 12

Originally posted by: subham101289

First of all so sorry, SHRUTI !!, for not commenting here!!

Aree it's totally ok...😃

U have exceedingly written the storyline, and it really touched my heart!!👏 👏 👍🏼 👍🏼

I must say that u are a very good writer and a very deep thinker too!! 😊 😊 😊

Thnx a lot..means a lott...😃😃

I can easily felt the pain and sadness of RAJ and AVNI😭 😭 😭 😭

Both are right in their places, but RJ should not talk to AV like this, its not her fault that she thought violin from that lady who is RJ's mother and is murderer of his DAD, but that still have to prove, and most importantly AV has not known the truth.

yupz...Raj was hurt tht's why he behaved lyk this..misunderstandings make ppl lyk this...

I think might be its RJ plan to encourage and push AV to prove herself best in front of everyone, i know he also loves AV but get disturbed and angry to know the fact that she taught violin from her mother.

I wish that both of them should won the competition as i cant see, either of them loosing, If RJ looses then he will be completely shattered and looses AV too on the other hand if AV looses then she will be completely broken.

let's see wat happens...😉

i dont want this in any case, always want our AVRAJ remains united forever.😊 😊 😊

me too...😃

I hope after this competition, both of them emerged out as a winner, all of their problems get sorted and they unite for ever and ever!!

may b...ur wish will b granted...😉😆

Awesome, fantastically written and really touching update SHRUTI, Hatts of to u!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

thnx a lottt again...😃😃

Waiting for ur next update as very eager to know that who will win the competition, who is RJ's dad murderer and what will happen to AVRAJ love story after that!!😕 😕 😕 😕

update is coming...😛

Originally posted by: Barbievishi20

Finally read 😳
Its so painful and touching 😭
Raj's past 😭
m sure its was not Raj's mom fault Kuch toh raaz hai..
But I feel sad for Avni at same time...
Raj has no right to insult her 😡
I hope Avni wins and proves him she is best

Awesome update Shru 🤗
waiting eagerly for next update 😳

Part-8

Avni gets off the car..she looks at d clg ..it's beautifully decorated..She takes a deep breath n starts walking towards d main entrance...she checks d list of rooms which is allotted to d participants...her room no. is 309..she starts going there but suddenly her eyes falls on d name of person to whom room no.308 is allotted..her eyes gets bigger..it's none other thn Raj..she keeps looking at...but thn she starts towards her room..she had a smile on her face n greeting everyone..where all were giving her best wishes..but some were also gossiping lyk she'll loose but still she's here..!! Avni doesn't gives her ears to there..she continues walking towards her room. But in mind she was just praying one thing..tht she don't want to see Raj's face before d competition. She don't want to remember all those again..those memories were haunting her whole day...She takes stairs n reaches 3^rd floor.

Avni looks forward n she stops..Her eyes r widen n had tears..her Godji didn't hear her..It's Raj who's standing in front of her...he's also looking at her...both r just looking at each other n the floor was empty n there was just complete silence..d silence was telling so many things to each other..Avni's eyes had so many questions n Raj eyes had d desire to answer thm..but may b no one wanted to understand n read each other's eyes.

[BG SONG]

[Teri khata hai mere jiya
Teri khata hai mere jiya
Unnpe bharosa kyun tune kiya

Sab jhoothe jhoothe waade thhe unke
Chal peechhe peechhe aaya tu jinke
Woh piya aaye na
Woh Piya aaye na
Piya aaye na woh piya aaye na

Ab sabhi unn khwaabon ki tu dagar chhod de
Ab sabhi unn khwaabon ko tu khud hi tod de
Woh piya aaye na
Woh Piya aaye na
Piya aaye na woh.. piya aaye na

Teri khata hai mere jiya
Teri khata hai mere jiya

Har khata ki hoti hai koi na koi sazaa
Gham likhe ho kismat mein to ban hi jaati wajah
Ab sabhi gham ashqon mein simat se gaye
Ab sabhi aansu palkon se lipat se gaye
Woh piya aaye na
Woh.. Piya aaye na
Piya aaye na woh... piya aaye na

Sach laga tha jo bewajah
Humko woh bharam ho gaya hai
Bhor aane thhe jis fasaane mein
Woh khatam ho gaya
Bhoole hum bhoole woh
Kaise sabse kahein baat yeh

Ab chalo hum dheere dheere bihal se gaye
Ab chalo hum jaise bhi ho sambhal se gaye
Woh piya aaye na
Woh.. piya aaye na (woh piya aaye na)
Piya aaye na...

Teri khata hai mere jiya
Teri khata hai mere jiya
Unnpe bharosa kyun tune kiya]

Raj controls himself by tightening his grip..he brings a smile in his face n walks towards Avni..Avni keeps looking at him...Raj comes near to her .

Raj: So...u r finally here..? I thought u'll not come.

Avni realizes n also controls her n looks straight at his eyes..but this tym her eyes had only anger.

Avni: Why..?? weren't u d one who decided all this..? So why do u think tht I'll quit..? I'm not feared of u mr.Purohit..n 2day u'll see how I'll make u defeated.

Raj(smirks): Oh Really..??? thn let's see...btw I knw u r dreaming but still I'm thinking of giving u this chance.

Avni: we'll see this on stage.

Both stars walking on opposite direction..Raj turns back n looks at Avni going..his face is saying tht he's in pain by behaving this way wid her where she had no faults...He turns back..Now Avni turns back n sees Raj going..she has tears in her eyes..but she turns back n keeps walking.

Avni goes to her n calls devika there...Devika comes..Avni was giving trial on her violin..Devika sees this n smiles.

Devika: Avni...u r so gud today..diz tone is very beautiful..loved it..hope today it creates magic n u win d competition..

Avni(smiling): Thnx Devika..I have to win at any cost. I can't loose today.

Devika: tht's all right but Avni will ur Reena Ma'm come today? After all u r doing all these for her.

Avni: I've told her.. today she called me n said she'll come.

Devika: Tht's good...thn u'll have more courage.

Avni: yaa..i need her support today.

Devika leaves as Avni needed to get ready.

Avni gets her dress ready n wears it...all d participants r getting ready...

After some tym the function starts.

Avni wears her dress n was zipping her dress suddenly she sees tht her zip broke...She looks at d clock n it's her performance tym soon..She calls Devika but as she was in function she cudn't hear it..Avni gets panicked..n searches for another dress..But finds nothing..thn she goes out of the room n sees d floor is completely empty..she walks to d stairs to go down n call someone but suddenly her foot slips..n she is abt to fall...Avni closes her eyes...But someone holds her..Avni gradually opens her eyes..It's Raj who is holding her..n avni is also holding him very tightly..they both keeps looking at each other...

[BG SONG]

Aasmaan tera mera hua
Khwaab ki tarah dhuaan dhuaan
Aasmaan tera mera hua
Saans ki tarah ruaan ruaan

Ho jaaye jahaan tu jaaye
Paaye mujhe hi paaye
Saaye ye mere hain tujh mein samaaye

Saiyaara main saiyaara, Saiyaara tu saiyaara
Sitaaron ke jahaan mein milenge abb yaara [x2]

Tu jo mila toh yun hua
Ho gayi poori adhoori si duaa
Tu jo gaya, toh le gaya sang tere
Mere jeene ki har wajah

Ho jaaye jahaan tu jaaye
Paaye mujhe hi paaye
Saaye ye mere hain tujh mein samaaye

Saiyaara main saiyaara, Saiyaara tu saiyaara
Sitaaron ke jahaan mein milenge abb yaara [x2]

Avni gets up...She is abt to go..but is shy as her zip is open...she stands beside a wall...Raj sees this..n comes close to her...she steps back..but Raj pins her against wall..Avni looks uncomfortable..Raj moves her back...he holds d zip n connects it..Avni blushes..

[BG STILL GOING ON]

Tumpe miti tumse bani
Tumse hua hai haan khud pe yaqeen
Tu jo nahi to naa sahi
Main hoon yahaan toh tu hai yahin kahin

Ho jaaye jahaan tu jaaye
Paaye mujhe hi paaye
Saaye ye mere hain tujh mein samaaye

Saiyaara main saiyaara, Saiyaara tu saiyaara
Sitaaron ke jahaan mein milenge abb yaara [x2]

Raj pulls up d zip n says tht it's done..Avni moves to him..She is still blushing..

Avni: Thnx..

Avni is abt to go..Raj holds her hand..Avni looks at him..

Raj: All d best Avni...

He had a genuine smile in his face..Avni was shocked by seeing him caring so much for him. She bcms silent for some tym..thn she comes back to herself..

Avni: Thnx..All d best to u too..

She smiles..Raj smiles back..But avni hears her name announcing for performance..She runs downstairs..Raj keeps looking at her..

Raj(In his mind): Avni...I never wanted to see u so sad, heartbroken.. I don't knw why I did this..i don't even knw tht I did ryt or wrong...I just knw tht I don't want to hurt u but still I do... but after hurting u..i get d pain...Oh God..what's wrong wid me..why I'm having so much pain..?? I was d one who did all this..but now I'm suffering...!

Originally posted by: Princyz_Belle

<font color="#3333FF">Thnx Vishu...😃

yupz..raaj toh hain...dekhte hain kya hota hain...😉

really raj was wrong ...ussse aisa nahi karna chahiye tha...</font>

Originally posted by: Barbievishi20

Tune hi Raj se aisa karaya 🤣
shoots Raj with water gun 🤣

Originally posted by: Princyz_Belle

🤣🤣
haan..maine hi karwaya ab mujhe hi bad feel ho raha hain...1st tym Raj is wrong...😭🤣

Originally posted by: Barbievishi20

🤣🤣
chali tujhe feel toh hua finally 🤣
aur isilye tune ch-8 mein Raj ko bhi bad feel krwa diya 👍🏼🤣