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_disha_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#761

And for Arnav Asshole Raizada ...

Amazing writing as always !

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

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Posted: 11 years ago

#762

Butifuly writen atlast arnav knw the truth i want his redemption lov tarangji waiting for next updt tanx for pm

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archmink

@archmink

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#763

Redemption ... But he is not forgiven ... I hope not..

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purplelove

@purplelove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#764

Liked the update. The only thought that into my brain at the end of this chapter was " A man who did not deserve Khushi".

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Anjana

@Anj_Jeh

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#765

amazing update!! finally arnav got to know the truth..the way he has hurt her is just too much and never forgivable ..
loved the way you expressed khushi's father's pain!! cant wait for khushi's comeback.. hoping for her to become strong and well educated and classy!!😳

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Prasanna_dhanu

@Prasanna_dhanu

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#766

Good one, read all chapters in one go

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jg12

@jg12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#767

Absolutely wonderful update . So glad Arnav found out the truth & hopefully will suffer more than Khushi did !

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spgpt

@spgpt

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Posted: 11 years ago

#768

Arnav does not deserve Khushi!!!
I have been following your story from the start. I generally do not like to read about abuse of women, it hurts me, but yu are such a powerful writer, and further the ff is anout two of the most loved characters in Indian TV history, so I have persiste.And now, this story has completely obilerated the original characters from my mind. This is one of the best redemption stories I have read, but the irony is, now I do not want it to be a 'repent, redemption and forgiveness story'
I do not want Khushi of this FF to end with Arnav of this FF.
Please do not misunderstand, this has nothing to do with Tarang being a better option etc. et. Tarang is shown ah khushi's savior her, but he is also human, and may have his own faults an vagaries. I know the need of his character, but I don't see him as someone who will be lhushi's support.
because the hard truth is An abused woman may have thousands rooting for her around her , but she is her own support. Unless and until she respects herself, she cannot get back what she has lost in terms of physical and mental pride.
This is what khushi needs to find, Tarang may be her guide in her journey, but not her destination. her goal has to be herself, her confidence, her independence, her pride and not just support of a man and most definitely not Arnav.
Arnav in this FF is sick, no sick as in pervert, but sick as in mentally ill. He may suffer masocchistically , but somewhere he takes a pleasure in character assasination of a young, helpless, innocent girl, all in the name of love. His views, his outlook are black and white. His Di , the inocent dove is white, his family is that of angels, to be pampered and all outsiders, all other women are to be manipulated, used, tortured , destroyed if necessary, be it lavanya, khushi, payal, Aman, gupta family or anyone else. Khushi, a kind hearted and social girl can never survive with an obssessive, possessive and ruthless man like him even if in future, they come together on mutual love.
I don't lnow how yur characters will turn in future. I have full faith in you as a writer. But as a devoted reader, I can just praay here that, may arnav find some sort of closure from his torture, some peace some redemption, bur NOT at the cost of Khushi. He does not deserve Khushi here and may she never go back to him. She deserves to be at peace in her own world, without anybody's artificial support, just with her loved ones.

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Aplihs

@Aplihs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#769

Why are you freaking out..this was great...I want to hate him yet can't as I know the only way for her happiness is him...but suffer he must

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soniachammu

@soniachammu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#770

Arnavs redemption is not required here no matter what he does he cannot undo the things what he did with khushi he killed her self respect her confidence her love unbound happiness which she had in her
Take a bow dear writer you have a awesome idea to show a mans crimes without feeling pity for.him i loved it
Every now and then i come back to check the update do it soon cant wait more