SS : Dhoom Dhadakka! COMPLETED! Link to Sequel on first page! - Page 5

Originally posted by: pup03

fabulous start... tom and jerry that is our arnav-khushi met and started their war.. inn dono ka kuch nahin ho sakta.. loved the start.. best wishes and happy writing 😊

Originally posted by: fffan123

Amazing start. The first crash was interesting. Loved it especially Khushi's chirpy sanakiness.

Looking forward to Arhi;s second crash...

Originally posted by: chavvi16

he is 25
well aru aint too old
thank god for that
but never is in your story
dont tell me he did see her
thats why you are laughing
naa cant be right

Originally posted by: mpuhan

hilarious start. do continue

PART 2. SECOND CRASH

Khushi grinned as the groom arrived. Haaye! Paayal Jiji aur Aakash Jijaji ki Jodi kitni khoobsurat hain, nahi? Hey Devi Maiyya! Humaare liye bhi ek aisa hi pyaar sa Dulha dhoondna! As the groom entered, Khushi stopped him and asked for money as it was her duty as the Saali of the Dulha. After lots of nagging and teasing, Aakash handed over the money which Khushi eagerly took away with a grin. After lots of teasing and jokes, groom was taken to the mandap and Khushi's eyes fell on Arnav who stood stoically beside Aakash looking serious and intimidating. Arre! Kitne ghussail hain yeh? Khushi wondered. Dekho toh! Bhai ki shaadi mein bhi maatam waala chehra leke ghoom rahe hain! Thoda has dete, muskura dete toh kya jaata! Aur chehre ki seriousness toh dekho! Koi bol sakta hai ki 25 saal ke hain! Harqatein toh saat sattaron waale jaisi hain! Arnav looked at her and Khushi's eyes widened and she looked down. Hey Devi Maiyya! Kahin uss Akdu Raizada ne humein dekh toh nahi liya! Bacha lena Maiyya! She looked up nervously and saw Arnav missing. She heaved a sigh of relief. Bach gaye! Chale gaye! Devi Maiyya! Humein us akdu se door rakhna please!

Soon, the mantra chanting ended and the Pandit called up for the Bride to sit in the Mandap. Garima told Khushi to come with her to bring Paayal down. Khushi smiled and turned around only to crash right into Arnav. Garima had walked away and did not notice Khushi stopping.

Khushi's eyes widened in shock and she shouted, "Aap?" Arnav was about to say something when Khushi spoke up, "Dekhke nahi chal sakte aap? Har waqt takraana jaroori hai kya?" Even though Khushi was still scared of Arnav, she remembered their fight enough to feel annoyed at him. Arnav's eyes narrowed. He remained quiet for few seconds and then as if coming out of stupor, he spoke up, "Tum ladkiyaan apne aapko samajhti kya ho? Jab dekho ladne ke liye ready rehti ho! Lagta hai ladne ke siva kuch aata hi nahi hai tumhein!" Khushi's jaw dropped open and she was about to reply something when Garima, who noticed her missing, hollered for her and she pointed a finger at Arnav, "Aapko toh hum baad mein dekh lenge!" Arnav rolled his eyes and she stormed away. But their fight was not over so easily. Another crash and bangs coming soon!

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Next update will be up very soon.

Thanks, take care and have fun,

Kalpana

you have gotta be kidding me
are they gonna crash every time
seems like it
but its so funny naa
phele woh takkarayi
and now him
waise she was right
aru you are 25 not 75
thoda toh has dein
hmmm she wants a dulha like her aki jiju
well they dont make them like him every time
plus your dulha will be hatke
after all you are hatke yourself
man more crashes to follow
wonder what was he gonna say before she scolded him
inka kuch nahin ho sakta naa
but then thats what makes it more fun right

this is hilarious😃
absolutely loving it

Awesome update

waiting to see their more crashes and fights.. lovely update..

A 1 update di..
always love ua works .. damn good , they are !

will be waiting for another crash

love
naira ❤️