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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
part 1
nice...
will this be anyway different from MG dear?
cont soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Arshi.Sugi.IPK

Superb start

If u can plz add Eng translation 4 d Hindi dialogues next time

Will try but no guarantee! I am currently working on 5 fics!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23

The first chapter!😆😉 Just kidding!

first encounter mein hi ladayi
kya baat hai
of course if they dont fight well then its weird right


Exactly!😃

arhi ka toh yehi chalta hai
and i like them like this only


I like it when Arnav goes naughty and Khushi becomes nervous and shy!😆

its real cute for sure
first how she was scared of him
but the minute he started blasting her
well she was in her form too
and i like it like that


Glad to please you!😃

cool naa
well she was right there
he was at fault too
where was he looking
had he seen ahead he would have seen her coming naa


😆 You will know why I am laughing when you read the fifth part!😉

so why should she say sorry
when even he should say it
wait where did he disappear off to


😆

she is only 18 how old is aru then


Aru is 25!

ahhh payal is her cuz huh
who is getting married to aki
her family dont want her to worry after them
but of course she will
she wants to support them naa
thats so sweet of her
really khushi why will you get lost dear
she is so cute and funny at times


Thanks for the review dear!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: ameena671

Amazing update loved it please continue soon.

Thank you!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: sarunsashasingh

Awww thats such a cute n adorable start!!

Thank you!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

Awesome start

Arnav and Khushi had a rocking start. Love their cat and mouse quarrel.
Looking forward to read the story

Thanks for the review!
Glad you liked it so much!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: sutapasarbabhom

Aww so cute pehli mulakat me ladai lov tom n jery fight kalpana i realy lov ur storis waiting for updt i knw its going to blast

Really? You are loving my stories? That is so sweet of you to say!
Thanks for the review!
And I promise that I will try my best to live upto your expectations and make sure you enjoy this story as much as you enjoyed the other ones!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetnoni

Yeayy another story lolz.
Amazing start...looking forward for the rest;)

Thanks for the review!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aisha1996

Awesome start
Loved it ⭐️
Pls continue it soon

Thank you!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: nafees5

wow mazaa agaya.. really very nice .. first crash was fullto dhamakedar.. waiting for more dhoom n more dhadaaka..
didu u r simply awesome 👏

Thank you so much dear!
I seriously did not expect your review here!😃
Thanks for reading it and really glad you enjoyed it so much!😃

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