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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing Story 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 3. EK AUR DHOOM DHADAKKA

Khushi smiled happily as the Pandit announced the couple to get up and do the Saat Phere. She always felt the Saptapadi was the most beautiful ritual in a marriage and she was always eager to watch it happening. As the couple continued to do the rounds of the pure fire Khushi threw flowers on them along with rest of the people around her.

As Khushi turned around to get more flowers, she came face to face with Arnav. Luckily she did not crash with him right now. "Hatiye baaju!", she told him as she wanted to get more flowers without missing the Saptapadi. Arnav raised an eyebrow at her, "What? Why should I move?" Khushi looked at him incredulously and huffed. Not wanting to create a scene she looked to her sides but unfortunately she was surrounded by people throwing flowers as Paayal and Aakash did their Saptapadi. Her only way out was Arnav moving and Mr. Akdu seemed to be not interested in moving.

Khushi glared at him, "Dekhiye! Humein ghussa mat dilaaye! Hatiye yahaan se!" Arnav smirked at her and folded his hands against his chest, "Nahi hatunga! Kya karlogi?" Khushi's eyes widened, "Dekhiye! Humein ghussa mat dilaaye! Hum ghusse mein kuch bhi kar dete hain!" Arnav looked at her amusedly, "Oh really?" Khushi nodded. Arnav gave her a smug smile and leaned towards her. He whispered softly to her, "Kya karogi? Mujhe maarogi, peetogi ya kiss karogi?" Khushi's jaw dropped open at his words. Hey Devi Maiyya! Yeh Akdu aisi baatein kyun kar rahe hain? Abhi inhein mazaa chakhaati hoon! But before she could say anything the Panditji announced that the Saptapadi was over. Khushi turned around and looked at the couple in horror. It was her sister's marriage and she missed the Saptapadi! All thanks to this Akdu, she missed her sister's saptapadi! She placed her hands on her hips and turned to look at Arnav with anger bubbling in her eyes, "Aapne humaare Saat Phere miss karwa diye! Shaadi ki humaari favorite part aapne miss karwaa di! Jab hat ne ko bola tab hate kyun nahi?" Arnav just shrugged and looked at her innocently, "You did not say please, so I did not move!" "Kya?", Khushi asked in shock as Arnav gave her a smirk and walked away leaving a fuming Khushi behind.

Khushi looked up and mumbled, "Hey Devi Maiyya! Kis ghade se paala padwa diya aapne! Achcha hoga ki yeh Akdu humein phir kabhi na mile!" She looked down and consoled to herself, "Bas kar Sanka Devi! Tumhein itni tension lene ki jaroorat nahi! Bas ek baar yeh shaadi ho jaane do! Phir tumhein iss akdu ki shakal phir se dekhne ki koi zaroorat nahi padegi!" She looked on as Aakash filled sindoor in Paayal's maang and tied Mangalsutr in her neck.

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Kalpana

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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
why do think you will be seeing her more
khushi man am sure you will see more of him
did he just say kiss
haila yeh aru ko kya ho gaya hai
is he feeling okay
hope so
pagla toh nahin gaye
waise he was right she didnt say please
as if he would have moved had she said please
come on this is ASR after all
how come when ever she turns he is there
stalker ban gaye hain kya yeh
wouldnt put it past him though
you never know with him
so payash are married
cheers for pm
surprise this sure was
waise i didnt know kkhushi he saath phere ho rahe the
the way she said mere saath phere miss karwa diye
this girl is too much
Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Brilliant... Poor Khushi. Tumhe sach mein lagata hai ko Shaadi ke baad Akdu Singh Raizada se pala nahi padega 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb !!! arnav is such a tease.. he purposely made her to miss watching saat phere.. poor khushi.. but khushi how come you will be not able to see this akdu after the marriage.. he will be always around you dear.. loved the update..

thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
Awesome update
I think Arnav has start liking crazy Khushi and that's why open flirt with her and trouble her. And he said about kiss Haila!
This is just the beginning, I am sure she will Arnav more around her.
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
Awesome part 👏👏
Loved it 😛

Thanx for d PM ⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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datz awesome
loved it
thanx fr d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
Awesome update Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60

Arnav is too much.. loved it..

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