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@pup03

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

fabulous start... tom and jerry that is our arnav-khushi met and started their war.. inn dono ka kuch nahin ho sakta.. loved the start.. best wishes and happy writing 😊

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: IsleOfCapri
lovely start..do cont soon

Thanks!😃

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fffan123

@fffan123

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Amazing start. The first crash was interesting. Loved it especially Khushi's chirpy sanakiness.

Looking forward to Arhi;s second crash...

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: saima4744
oh start was amazing dear.
loved it.

beautiful beautiful written.

what the update on Wednesday 🤢.

arshi fight OMG.

loved the concept.

tf pm.

Haila! This must be your longest review to my work!😆😉 Just kidding!

Thanks for the review dear and glad that you liked it!😃

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Zindagirocks_21
Amazing update.

Thank you! Thanks for the review!

Damn you must love to write. New stories for us to read

Nope! Hate writing but love creating and narrating new stories! And if writing is the only medium to narrate it then wahi sahi!😉😃

And that too dhamake vaali story ahah.
Poor khushi thinking about getting lost in the marriage hall. She's a person who can get lost lol that is why she is praying to Devi Maiya. And at the same time ASR makes his entry. Bt really it was Arnav's fault, he should've seen where he is going rather than focusing on something else.
Well at least through this they officially met and also this will be the beginning of their love story :) yayyy

Thanks for the pm
And do update soon :)
Loved it!

So true! Khushi must be the only one who would get lost even in a single room!😆

Wow! So you think it is Arnav's fault! Ha! Wait for the next chappy and you will be shocked!😉

Love you lil one,

Kalpana

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: shalini_s
interesting start..

Thanks for reading!😃

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: neha2013g
nice one

Thanks!😃

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

he is 25
well aru aint too old
thank god for that
but never is in your story
dont tell me he did see her
thats why you are laughing
naa cant be right

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: flowers4u
wow another ff ...great start...continue soon...

Thank you!😃

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: spvd
part 1
nice...
will this be anyway different from MG dear?
cont soon...

Nope! If you want, you can read only one of them! But if you are the one who imagines the scenes as you read it, then I ask you to read both as the dialogues will be totally different!