A Beautiful Mistake (UPDATING SOON)

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Sanjana

@SweetSassy

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Posted: 11 years ago

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#Chapter 8 and 9

May!!! I know you must be a little angry on me, for commenting late, I am sorry, but I can never help it!*pouts*

Yeh Tune Kya Karr Diya!!!

You were absolutely flawless and perfect!👍🏼 Can I just hug you, please let me even kiss you!!!🤗☺️ It was ethereally beautiful!!! While reading these two chapters, I went through all sort of emotions!!! I thoroughly enjoyed it!!! To be very honest, Chapter 9 impressed me more!!! I wonder if you are 15 only!!! I should give you a Biggg Award for writing such masterpieces! The Dialogues amused me, I loved them!!!❤️ And at the same time, beside enjoying, I learnt a lottt!!! My vocabulary and especially G.K.must have improved, Thanks To You!!!:) May, I am Super Impressed By You!!!😉 Keep writing like this!!!

Love

Sanju😳

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Sonali Shivkumar

@ChasingLiberty

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Posted: 11 years ago

#642

OMFG !!!!!! i just read all the parts right now !!! i have been doing that since the past one hour

and girl i have something to tell you !!!!

this is the best SS i have ever read in my entire life !!!!

I effing LOVE YOU !!!!!!!!

i have no words ...

your command over the language is sensational !!!!!

you got everything into the story ..comedy , romance , emotions

it was fantastic !!!!

you seem like a big FRIENDS fan ...

i obviously love sandhir

but kaustuki and parth are hilarious .. i love them

i wish they were like this on the show

it was a treat to read you SS ... it was mind blowing

i love you again !!! gosh can't get over it ...

and you are just 16... woof :)

PM me when you update

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arvifan1

@arvifan1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#643

Omg such an amazing update just loved it 😳

Wowww the quote u said about soul mates is really nice ❤️

I love this FF a lottt

Please update soon 😳

Will be waiting for ur next update 😊

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laughing_lola

@laughing_lola

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Posted: 11 years ago

#644

dammit im late!

res..

unres..

I loved it! U are such a great writer u know? :D The soul mate myth was beautiful. And how do you know about all these? Especially about pool and all. Why, have u played it before?

Danny is amazing i think. I really m gripping for sanyu and his friendship. will it be there further?

Jealous sanyu was fun. Her saying "flozzy" was funny. I loved the window talk.

yeah we understand the imp of study. so take your time but pls do update.

Edited by laughing_lola - 11 years ago

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Mayuri

@xxMaYxx

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Posted: 11 years ago

#645

Originally posted by: Mandira17
What are u gal? seriously answer me!!
I love u! And i love this chapter!
Everything was perfect! From the song to her feelings, u expressed it perfectly!
I must say, pool was the last thing on my mind. U did a great job!
I liked the way u portrayed danny.. sounds like a guy randhir will b frnds with.
And the window talk was amazing!
Keep it up! And keep rocking!

lol since u added greek myths and all!! I luved them!

Hi mandira!

Wats up gal?

Aw thanks a lot!!

I'm glad u liked the song! I luved it!

I knw.. thats y i chose pool! I knew no one wud have thought that! Hehehe!

Danny.. yeah.. I wish i had a frnd like him!

🤣

This pic is awsm gal!!

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Soniya

@TUKI.MICKY

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Posted: 11 years ago

#646

Aww this is sooo beautiful 😳 😳

Danny and Sanyukta's convo about Randhir 😳 😳

Loved the whole update but this last part is so overwhelming 😳 😳

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Mayuri

@xxMaYxx

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Posted: 11 years ago

#647

Originally posted by: mariya.kamran
May, what a brilliant chapter... its perfect. I understand that study is a top priority so work hard. Will be waiting for the next update. Lots of love xxx

Hey!

Thanks a lot!

Im glad u liked it!

Nd, thnx fr understanding !! 😃

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Mayuri

@xxMaYxx

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Posted: 11 years ago

#648

Originally posted by: Param_love
May,
Awesome written👏⭐️
well done👍🏼
Well I can understand study is more important so study hard😊
will b waiting 4 ur update
Thanks 4 pm
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Hello!

Thanks a lot!

Im glad u liked it!

😃

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Mayuri

@xxMaYxx

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Posted: 11 years ago

#649

Originally posted by: katheriene
Awesome update👏
The whole pool game part was beautiful😊
Loved parth , kaushuki here they are so different😆
The hospital fight was funny 😊
Loved the conversion of danny-sanyukta😊
Update as time permits, study is important

Hey!

Thanks a lot!!

Im glad u liked it!

😃