A Beautiful Mistake (UPDATING SOON)

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Dhruvi Mehta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#631

hey may
loved it dear...
u r gr8...
jst amazing...
love the way of ur writing...
waiting for the nxt update...
thnx for the pm...
the update was jst fab...
love
dhruvi

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Mayuri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#632

Originally posted by: Awesome_Annie
RES 🤣
UNRES..

OMG!! Mayuri.. U NAILED IT GAL!!
It was just awesome!!!
Gawd.. i'm speechless. n really liked the two myths.. wow are they really true???
When sanyu asked him if he believes in soulmates, he just smiled! Aww.. i think its a yes!!
And shit! They played together and the song.. ahh!! ROMANTIC!!
And again.. ur sense of humor is just awesome may!!
The way they fought for the hospital was funny.. and jealous sanyukta? eh?
I like this Parth!
I love u!! The chapter was worth the wait!!!!
Please update soon yr!!!

Ann!! Hey gal! Wats up?

Aww really? Thnx!

And yup the myths are real.. i love reading myths thats y i inserted two! 😳

Well he did smile... eep! 😆

I like that song a lot! Its 'i cant fight this feeling'.

Aww thnx! I like adding some humor.. so the ff wont b boring!

Jealous sanyu.. i loved writing that part!

Thanks a lot ann!

Im glad u liked it!

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Mayuri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#633

Originally posted by: dcmehta03
hey may
first of all my apologis for commenting late
but it was awsome
u r an awsome writer...
it was jst fab...
loved it dear...
continue soon...
love
dhruvi

Hi!

Oh thats ok!

Thanks a lot!

Im glad u liked it!

😃

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Mayuri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#634

Originally posted by: sandra22
awesome... lovely... just loved it... bang on... n worth the wait... 😊
love
samyuktha😳

Hi!

Aw thanks a lot!

Im glad u liked it!

😃

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Mayuri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#635

Originally posted by: kamyaka
Omg soo cute and amazing update👏

Thank you! 😃

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Mayuri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#636

Originally posted by: samridhigoodiez
Hey nyc... But u pm late,,,, bt thanks for pm

Thanks u! 😃

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Mayuri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#637

Originally posted by: kamyaka
Omg soo cute and amazing update👏

Thank you! 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#638

ok i should do this...
*haye...*
u just killed me with your thought...*uff...maar dala*
i remembered american series awkwards epi where in the cute guy takes d gal for a hangout to a lonely place wherein d guys' uncle informs her that he thinks she is spl as he never brought any othr gal here bfore...
Uff...bt urz ws even more mast...
D way he presentd her nd d new feeling she felt around him
nd their soft encounters so well planned
sweet...
Oh dear her replies nd dat gay guy
lol
awww final revelation was gud as she got to knw a different side to him
ummm u sent me to sandhir land...
*still floating*
update soon bby i m curious to knw wat comes next
lv
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