A Beautiful Mistake (UPDATING SOON) - Page 67

Originally posted by: AmandaJones006

Finally.. Yeah !
*jumps with happiness*
The best part was - the whole update. :D I loved that window thingy. :P
Danny's convo with Sanyukta was a heart-melting one.. Beautifully penned down. :)
You are an awesome writer.. Are you sure you're only 16 ? :P
Anyways, loved it <3
Love,
Amanda. ^_^

Originally posted by: suumi

nyc update

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

Wow dear...aisa lag raha hai jaise meine koi puri book padhi ho...

Seriously dear this one is just amazing


Randhir ka aisa bhi kaoimroop hoga...

Sapne mein bhi nahi socha...

Ek pal ke liemein bjool gayi thi ke randhir fite ka student hai...

Originally posted by: namya

Amazing!!!!

This was soo good

Loved it

Its fabulous ,!!!!!!!

UPdate sooon

Originally posted by: loveenasid

wow yaar, that was awesum... sorry i didnt replied earlier bcoz 2day only i read all your parts in one go... so cmg to your story... its amazing and this part especially at the ending of this part was emotional and that window wala concept was nice, how beautifully Danny explained her.. and at the ending when he was leaving, that line "dont break the window, it will be beyond repair"... this lined touched me😔, and m not telling this just for the sake of replying... the last line really touched me..😭. it was awesum... 👏

thx for the pm😃