ARSHI FF: Unlearning LoVe|| #NOTE# Pg 29 - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
hope khushi doesnt do any foolishness...
Amazing update...
But many things are yet to revealed...interesting.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Divyahet

😛

Praju,🤗After reading this wonderful update I remembered one dialogue of the show..

"Sapno ki duniya mein rehna hi behtar hai kyoki haqeekat ki duniya mein aksar dil tootte hai.!" (kuchh issi tarah ka dialogue tha show mein.)

coming to the update 😳

I loved the Title of this first part"Jettisoned Fantasia"👏👏👏
I could easily visualized the scene of the venue where the heroine was waiting for her hero and the other family members were busy in doing some last moments arrangements.

"Chalo bitiya" 👏👏👏 in this particular part of this update , I loved the way you wrote about a girl's thoughts who is going to marry

chhod babul ka ghar mohe pi ke nagar aaj jana padaa..she was in dreamland like every other girl.

who was her cousin "NK?"😆
but wait...
why this Khamoshi ? Sannaata ? something was wrong..
the gloomy faces of her parents and her Buaji,
the way her Buaji trying hard to convince her,
how could she believe them after all she waited for the THREE bloody Years for this PAL.
But it was true,
he, the rascal has left her,
the man without spine😡
she cried 😭

"Char din ki chaandani phir gham ka andhera chha gaya!!!!"

ya phir yoo kahun!!

"
Sapana mera toot gaya, too na raha kuchh na raha
Roti huyi yade mili, bas aur muze kuchh na mila.."


Oh Poor Payal ...that was very sad part of this update,
and Khushi ? I could imagine her situation and could feel her pain,
but wait who was that guy ?
and who was that Rascal ?


Very emotional part of this update when Khushi asked her buaji ,
"What are you saying buaji? You are pulling my leg like usual, right?"😭😭
looking forward for the next update,
do continue soon my dear,
take care,
thanks for the pm,
lots of love.🤗







Thank you so much for such a lovely and an apt comment. Your comments always encourage and more than that inspires me to write further.

Love you 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
Nice update.
Waiting to know what happens next.
Thanks for the pm.😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: Eccentrica

I loved it!

It can be utterly crushing for a bride to be left at the altar. And if that wasn't enough, the fate of Payal was too poignant for the family to have a repeat of what happened earlier.

Now I was cautious enough to not start cursing her groom, ergo Arnav because I saw how you had conscientiously not revealed the name. Something makes me feel that the groom might be someone else and the person making his way to the mandap at the end, Arnav.

Now whether my guess proves to be true and there is a wedding or not remains to be seen. But I'm all aboard for this journey!


Well, I am not much happy to announce it but you are a smart girl 😉to hold yourself back from cursing Arnav noticing how I have avoided mentioning groom's name 😛

It always great to have you with the story because your words are
true rewards for me.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: Sindhuramakrish

no words to describe the state of kushi. and the update was mysterious with a cliff hanger. waiting eagerly for the next update.


Thank you for your comment.
Hope with second chapter your curiosity has been satiated 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: IsleOfCapri

simply amazing
loved it.


Thank you so much dear 😊
Edited by praj.shrish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: apekshash

wow, nice storyline..

waiting.. pls send pm


Thank you so much 😊
Hope you received PM for next chapter
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68

Thank you 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: chavvi16

who was he in the end
and who was her dulha
he left her on the mandap
that is cowardly
pathetic agar shaadi nahin karni thi why waste her time life and ruin her
idiot what was that
how could he do that
who ever that he was
waise tha kaun
who was she getting married to
and how can you un learn love
guess we shall know and soon
this got even better with first chapter
cant wait for more


Guess now most of your questions have been answered and remaining will be answered too as the story gets unfolded slowly.

Thank you for your comment.
I always look forward to get feedback from you.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
nice update...
looking forward..

The way ASR talked is marvellous... like a gem..
Khushi is going to marry ASR???? or she has some false hope and plan😕

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