ARSHI FF: Unlearning LoVe|| #NOTE# Pg 29

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praj.shrish

@praj.shrish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: kooldewdrop
very very intriguing storyline dear!
loved the elaborate description of emotions the bride goes through... The anxiety along wid the budding enthusiasm to build a new life together wid her life partner... Then the unbeleivable circumstance which dawned upon her , the helplessness , ultimately the bitterness...
the absense of the groom was heart shattering... Wot a predicament!! Fate is so very cruel...!! But i guess it also presented the reason for doing so... Is it ASR who arrived??

id love to follow this story n share my views... Plz p.m me when u nxt update...

Thank you! :)

Thank you so much for your lovely comment.

Guess you received PM for the second chapter and along with that answer to your question too.

I would like to read your views on the story too

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

superb part

loved it

thanks for the pm

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praj.shrish

@praj.shrish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: shipra.aqua
Hey, I m so sorry for this much delay in unressing...😕

A really really different & intriguing concept...

U have gotten me curious here as to who was the groom to be, & who was the guy who made entry in the end...

Awww... U r such a tease, leaving us on a cliff hanger...

All in all I m already in love with ur writing...

Plz update soon...

Aww ... Thank you so much dear.

I am overwhelmed by your words.

What is the fun if some suspense is not there in the story???😉

I hope now everything is cleared with 2nd chapter

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praj.shrish

@praj.shrish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: reshmimohan
Nice start.😛
Waiting for the story to unfold...😊
Thanks for the pm.

Thank you dear 😛

Hope you will love the story as it gets unfolded slowly 😃

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praj.shrish

@praj.shrish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: sirivalli.t
very intriguing story line di!
awesome update...loved it...
there are no words to describe the state of khushi...i loved the way you describe the emotions of khushi through out the chapter from dreams of starting a new life with her love to hear shattering by her love
feel really sad for payal...
n by the way who is she getting married to
is the person who arrived at the end is arnav
eagerly waiting for d next part...continue soon...

Thank you dear

Glad you liked it.

Hope you got all the answers with 2nd chapter.

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

That was beautiful Concept and loved the story so far...

The way you writing the story is superb.

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amus5

@amus5

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

hey dear ... read this is a go ... but i'm keeping my fingers crossed that khushi doesnot request any help from her bua which will be foolhardy

thanx for the update...pls continue soon 😃

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raniluvsasr

@raniluvsasr

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

hey thanks for the pm,loved d update. Well written. Excellent.

khushi lover broke the promise. Arnav becomes,d damsel in distress. Khushi refuses to marry Arnav. Update soon

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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Loved the update loved arnav intro and loved how he spoke to sashi ji but khushi i am not understanding her groom stood her up and yet she is willing to destroy her family and their reputation for a man who has not turn up nor has his family called interesting she is blinded in love that she has not seen her father respect or his question to save her awesome update thanks for the pm.

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sakhter90

@sakhter90

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Posted: 11 years ago

#90

Great update! Arnav and shashi share a good relationship. He respects shashi enough to help him by marrying his daughter. Shashi was in a very difficult place to make that decision. Khushis reaction was not surprising at all. I wonder what her plans are now

Do continue soon