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Posted: 11 years ago
the way u explained arnav and khushi's feelings about love is outstanding😛 am very much liking this possessive side of arnav but poor khushi is not allowed to take a decision on her own just because he says so...i wonder wat khushi is gonna do about her 1 month trip😃 verryyy eagerly waiting for the next update😊
Edited by divya_divs - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Gosh!! This was a superb update, riding high on emotions!!

Khushi confessed and here was Arnav who was running away. Khushi wasn't wrong when she accused him of running away. He may have lied to her and made her believe that he wasn't at fault as such but he knows he committed a mistake.
When I read about Arnav's POV, I am unable to blame him because he is emotionally messed up, all thanks to his childhood. It's kind of weird that his mother lived normally cunning him for a long as she lived and his father too created a love-filled world but the child suffered, suffered all these years. First hating his father for behaving badly with him and his mother, then his mother for lying to him, for making false stories and later hating his own emotions and vulnerable self. All these things have left him in a bad shape and I can't blame him for hating the word 'love' or at least believing that he hates it because well he doesn't hate 'love'. Isn't it the same word which, may have left him blank initially but later, calmed him knowing his wife loves him?
I was happy to read that Khushi thought she won't do anything now, won't put efforts in their marriage and would let him take the lead. But then one thought of Arnav and the emotions of jealousy made her go back on her decision. But she did carry it through with the way she didn't looked at him and kept the sullen face. That sullen face made his stone-hearted husband crumble, to make him think that he needs to take the step this time, to put some efforts.
I'm hoping Arnav & Khushi will sort out this one-month thing amicably. Both need to take some steps towards each other. Khushi shall reduce the time frame by 7-10 days and Arnav shall take some time off to spend with her in Mumbai.
Arnav & Khushi both have their share of complex. Arnav has trust-issues and Khushi has inferiority complex. She wasn't hurt because Arnav didn't love her back. Yes she was disappointed but her heart-break was more because of her own complex. She thought his blankness was because of her limp. Now like her monologue at the end was ironical regarding how can even Arnav not love him when all his actions contradict his words, in the same way I would say how can she be so blind to think that his non-verbal declaration can be due to her limp? Ain't his actions and words enough?
He won't completely believe her when she says that nobody is more important than him, of all the people not rishabh and she won't believe him when he tells her that her limp makes no difference to him. It's easier said than done when it comes to ourselves; issues can't be handled as easily as we believe them to.

Arnav, despite of deciding never to show his vulnerable side to anyone not even Khushi, told her that his reaction had nothing to do with her but his past reminded me of the IPK dialogue once uttered by the man himself - "Love can reduce anyone to anything"


Edited by aquagal - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Anamika, time for a note about when can we expect the next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi my dear!!
im in a high after catching up with the story!!
lots of changes...and lots of milestones crossed!

i see the transitions that the beautiful story has made...and just a little pang that i was not there through it...

anyways...better late than never, they say...so here i am...finally! having caught up with 25 threads and 41 chapters of making khushi mine 2!!!


you have covered so many depths of emotions with this story!...n arnav is certainly more complex with his layers...
with each layer he sheds we see that there is still more way to go...n the only way he is gonna shed them is through khushi!...(eventually, ofcourse)...


n kudos to Mrs. khushi ASR (heart-filling to address her thus)...for being clear under all those confusions!...she is strong to the point of what she wants!...

she wants him...she loves him...she needs him...and she is ready to go to lenghts to just make him see that!

whatever happens or whoever comes in...the story is fixedly revolving around how the scenario affects arnav or khushi...this is one thing that i love most about your story!
you show various dimensions of their relationship...
its not just to know they are in love...but, also, how they face it...


when i think about arnav...there's always this reluctance within him...
he needs to tell his insecurities to take a back seat coz his better half is more important to him...
n that always happens after his show of temper and childish antics...and even khushi has started realizing that!!...
its cute to think of it that way!


n like khushi thinks...

Because ladies and gentlemen, that was him NOT loving her.


So what exactly IS his definition of love then?


😆😆❤️


i loved it!! loved it !
loved each word of all the chapters thouroughly!!!!!


thank u for the story dear!!!


🤗🤗


p.s : congrats for completing 25 threads!!!🥳




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Posted: 11 years ago
I am too close to the characters to take side here!
I understand both and wont elaborate there!

But it indeed is frustrating me enough to chuck things and grumble and stomp my feet! Yes, life is not always happy. This definitely is the key, the take on normalcy, and how emotions run in normal life and world.

Hope Khushi understands what she thought in the last lines of the update, and hope Arnav cools down enough!

P.S. I do hope you update sooner, coz a monthly update is really testing in such conditions.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Ohh thank god all is well here...
I was actually dreading some lows this time... Well this reaction was expected from him, first fly the confession scene come back and confuse her to her wits... but if he thinks she is the same ladoo from before he has more to learn... cause she is learning her ways from the best well the mighty himself... The king of retorts and counters now knows how it feels to be in Fix... Go khushi but careful one wrong move and you are again in fix... don't forget now that confession gave him another card to play on your face... "But the husband you claim to love. Is that how you treat the man you love?" and ladoo is screwed..!!
I am happy he has khushi to deal with confuse her and get your way out... Or else i am scarred first for poor Hari prakash dude is losing it, why don't we send him for wedding preparation instead of khushi... everything will be solved.
hmm Sr.Raizada... some of us will definitely sue him for asking grand babies from Arnav... his pink ladoo he can... but poor girl is learning hard ways to be his son's wife thanks to him and Sujata Mathur...
Ladoo..., well everything about Sujata Mathur's son is... Easier said than done..!! True.
and what to expect from a boy who has learnt hard way all his life that even your own mum and dad are not trustworthy... they take you for a ride and abandon you soon when you are served as purpose.
But its surely different with you khushi... he may not trust you or anyone if that matters but love he definitely is in with you infact you are the only woman and no faceless or nameless woman can take that place... you know it don't you khushi..?? So patience.
Now that he storms out of that room angry... he is coming back to her isn't he anon..?? breaks are too many and one month break is coming up so he better think wise...
Well that reminds me of Karan chachu, i am really happy for his re-entry he is my favorite after Arnavji of course... Lets enjoy this wedding Arnavji please then we can dive in some lows... we can drop the idea either if you say... but i am sure anon won't... Bloody Lows..!!
Updated were awesome anon... i was actually worried about his reaction, but you know him better to not react instant and buy time... I must say you do have access to his brain...
Will wait for wedding... Is Arnavji planning to go..??
Tell us soon...
By the way what's with Raichand's mood..?? just asking...
Thanks...
Edited by ashw99 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
He wud hav said dont go i will miss u bt its nt arnv mistake too as his past .Will khushi go to mumbai i guess she will n dis diatance helps arnav to think😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

A very good chapter indeed! What is adore about it is its character consistency..

Khushi comes out on top in this update. We all know her for her gullibility, but in no way it implies she is a fool or someone who cannot charter a logical path when called for, similar to that of Arnav. The 'Disaster Dinner' was beyond salvageable, her intervention would not have helped in any way for Arnav was convinced that the whole accidental meeting was infact engineered.

I want to read Arnav's thoughts on Khushi being a virgin. I felt that Khushi's virginity or lack of it was never a matter of concern with him. I know during one of their verbal spats you made it clear that it was always loyalty with him and not her state of being one or not. Even though he never asked for it, he was given the honour to being her one and only and he never seemed to be grateful or happy to be that. As per me he tends to forget these things when he busy accusing her of infidelity.

Arnav is now indirectly channelizing all his expectations from Khushi. He may not have a great expectation or high expectations for that matter, but the burden of many is placed squarely on shoulders on one individual. Arnav allows only Khushi and to some extent his father within the walls of his heart, but all the emotions and expectation that he has cut himself from, the one he smothered with strong will are all raising to forefront. Since Khushi from the very start and now is pampering him in her own way, Arnav expects Khushi to fulfil all his wishes no matter how unreasonable they might sound.


Khushi is younger to Arnav, and being the silent man he his, who tends to keep his emotions in check, its difficult for her to know what it is going on in his mind unless he explicitly mentions it. She has tended to his emotional needs to the best of her abilities and now shared an intimate relation with him too and gave him those three precious words of comfort too. How to assure him now beyond this is beyond our understanding too.

It is sad that Arnav is using her weakness of loving him to give into his demands, but true to character at the same time. Arnav is a special child and individual but loving him is taxing. I felt for the little lady in this chapter. We know that he loves her too deeply your last para confirms to that fact, but it is time that he gets a taste of his own medicine. He has verbal assurance that she loves him, but her taking away all that attention she has been showering over him freely will make him uncomfortable. She needs to with hold her giving nature with him for him to come forth and not take things for granted.

What I liked in this chapter, is the fact that she did not give into his demand, if he has the right to hold back because of his emotional makeup, she too is an individual who needs her own me time too. The previous months have been taxing on her too. She too needs a break to figure out a few things.

Hopefully Arnav understands that ball is in his court for now and he needs to give her a bit more rope and something to work upon. If the mere mention of other woman can make her blindingly jealous, then the same rule should apply for Arnav too. Rishabh was working temporarily in NGO office till his MBA, hope he moves ahead and stops working there for his own mental wellbeing. He was there for the sake of wooing Khushi and also NGO was never his passion. If Arnav is highly uncomfortable with her working in an environment where a man who confesses to love her is present, perhaps for time being she can consider taking up interior designing job atleast to show him that she is willing to try.


I want that blue Dubai gown to make an appearance soon, nor will I be appeased with one lovemaking scene!! Dear author please consider this request [Demand].. 😆


There are areas that need to worked on at both ends, for now Arnav needs to bridge the gap a little more that her. Would love to see him follow her to Mumbai. Let the romance sizzle, grow and explode with intensity. Happy Writing..


regards,
MoonlightAura

Edited by MoonlightAura - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg...he is in soo love with her...he's just not getting that...
loved the update..beautiful...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Brilliant update...arnavji behaved as expected..he really knows how to turn everything in his favor.,poor khushi, she got nothing back of her confession..that last para was particularly amazing..with all the possessiveness he shows for her when he doesn't love her, wonder what he'll do when he realizes that he actually loves her...please make arnav realize soon..khushi should not suffer anymore..

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